Date: Jan 09, 2017 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
The cat thing made me smile. So cute. I'm glad Ben seems to have at least some kind of conscience.
Date: Sep 02, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
So hilarious!!! This texts' exchange is so funny.
For one, Brian admits he's lonely and doesn't like to wake up with Emmett. And then, the whole cat thing is the premise to delirious situations I guess.
Date: Aug 30, 2016 4:30 am Title: Chapter 11
I absolutely love the opening line on this chapter! It’s perfection!
Ha! Brian waking up next to Emmett instead of the ball of fire known as Justin Taylor. That's great!
“…Mr. Crankypants.” Gotta love Emmett!
Now that Ben has pulled his head out of Mikey’s ass he seems to be redeeming himself a bit. Don’t know if it will be enough for everyone yet, but it’s a good start signing Deb's house back over to her.
Eww! Mikey had sex! UGH! Brain bleach, brain bleach!
The texting at the end of the chapter is perfection once again! I’m still laughing! I can see Brian’s expressions with each text, as well as Justin’s confusion when he responds!
Deb
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian and Emmett's convo cracked me UP!! That is so like them! Emmett's comments about explaining to the boys that Brian and Justin were exercising will only go so far. Justin may need to soundproof the house ASAP since I doubt last night will put an end to the Sexual Olympics! <smiling so hard my cheeks hurt>
Well, I understand Ben a bit better now. I would be hurt to if my PARTNER was fucking someone else in my bed and then proceeded to tell said trick all our personal business <again EDK, BLECH, UGH!! at the thought that Michael has sex AT ALL! YIKES!>. I don't agree with his all tactics because there are some innocent casualities from the war of the Novotny-Bruckners, but I can definitely understand why he has taken it so far. I'm glad that Blake had a major impact on his conscience in regards to Deb's house. That was the one thing she had; that she worked her ass off for to keep and it should have been returned to her the minute they acquired it. I swear Michael is such a WASTE of sperm!! I'm looking forward to Ben exposing the "paragons of the community" and all its backlash. Hell hath no fury like a woman OR an intelligent GAY BOY scorned which Michael and Eli are about to find out in spades! By the time Michael really looks around, he really won't have a pot to piss in or a window to throw it out of. Lindsay needs to make room for Michael cardboard box along the HO Stroll!
The texting between Brian and Justin was both HOT and adorable! I am glad that Brian remembered the details of their first 'morning after.' YumYum as the cat is simply the BEST!!! YAY! I will look forward to seeing what antics the Taylor-Kinney household gets into with a feline in the mix.
Can't wait for the next chapter! WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I avoid sex scene not because I don't like them but I didn't want to screw it up.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:23 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian waking up to Emmett? That is just so wrong. Ben has redeemed himself to me by signing over Deb's house to Deb. Just when I thought Michael couldn't sink any lower, he did. Can't wait for everyone to see the video Ben's compiled. If Michael didn't have friends before, he's really going to have none now. Then you started with the text that Justin recieved from Brian and I fell over laughing. Thanks for naming the cat after me. Was there really a cat or is Brian smoking weed? So funnnnny.
Author's Response:
The cat is real poor baby.