Date: Sep 18, 2016 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 23
Ah ah ah, the scene with the cat and the tuna can... hilarious. Brian is up for more weird things until the baby is born.
I love that you made Blake pregnant too. It was so much fun when you made both twinks a devilish duo in another story. I hope we will have some funny parts in the coming chapters.
The reaction of Justin towards Joan and Claire lets us hope that they will stay put. One can dream.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 22
The payable words and Jackson and Gus’s college fund were very funny.
Brian and Molly: he has a strong effect on the Taylor's blonds.
Brian and Mel exchange about Lindsay eating meat was so them.
Poor Jackson, not too discreet about the baby, and poor Justin, shoving food in his mouth to avoid replying.
Smart remark from Jackson about the T-shirt that must be designer for Brian to wear it.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 21
Hilarious!!! Justin wants to kill the father of his children and Brian want to shout that his super sperm struck again...
Ted, for once, knows something huge before anybody else.
So sad that Gus thinks he will have to go live with his mum. That means he was not happy with her, and that he fears losing his father. Fortunately, Justin and Brian told him he was their family and then, not leaving.
Jackson is too much fun, looking for Cynthia to let her know.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 20
It would be great if Daphne moved to Pittsburgh.
Brian and Justin discussing about tricking or not and also about check-ups. Does Brian suspect something about Justin weird eating?
Michael is still in contact with David? I guess David will have quite a surprise when he will discover what really happened to make Michael call him.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 19
Jackson and his experiments are so much fun!!
Justin in leather pants: everybody will be drooling in Babylon tonight... It must be something to remember.
Yeah!!! Michael is KO and almost ashamed. Can't wait to see how it will go on.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 18
The dinner with the pretentious asses was instructive for everybody. Brian learned about "the face of God", Micheal learned more about Justin and his jealousy went very high.
What about Justin and his reaction to greasy bacon? Is he sick or something?
Lindsay is finally doing the right thing: leaving her son.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 10:44 am Title: Chapter 17
Poor Jennifer having to deal with the kids comments on their dads; so funny to read:
I think I need to have a talk with the two dads, exercising, that’s all they could come up with? I look at the two matchmakers and decide to help them before Jackson hacks into the wrong sites.
I heard Mama say that Dad likes to eat Trix.
The description of Michael was so realistic and eww...
Natalie and Daphne are so much fun (the man sandwich idea with Brian and Ben).
Date: Sep 16, 2016 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Brian now knows how Justin started writing books and also why "Jacko and Gus" was created for.
Their relationship is going well; I hope Brian will be officially moving in. It's a great family.
I can't wait to discover the content of Ben's film and what they are going to prepare with it.
Date: Sep 16, 2016 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ha ha ha!!!! I knew we will have more fun with the cat!
Brian and Emmett are too much with it. The litter box without the bag to keep the gifts from the cat is really hilarious; both Brian and Emmett were so proud to have bought this magical box...
Jackson with his experiments is another hilarious part. Justin has to demand Brian and Emmett not to help without his consent; poor Justin, he has 4 kids to manage...
Jennifer was really nice to Gus.
As for Simon, he was just the additional motivation for Brian to stay home with Justin.
I have a doubt regarding the scene in the shower: was there any condom?
Yeah!!! Daphne is back and Nathalie seems to be quite a character.
Date: Sep 15, 2016 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jackson is so smart and witty: “You want to shake my hand? Wow, I mean, Nana hugs me silly and my new Nana pinches my cheek then kisses my head, but you want a handshake. It won’t change the fact that my Dad was gay and got pregnant with me. It won’t change the fact that you told him he didn’t exist anymore. It won’t change the fact that I want to build a space shuttle to put bigots like you in and shoot you to Uranus. So take your hand and stick up your butt.” Jackson tells him. Turning to me my son says loudly “Dad, I didn’t say the bad word for butt.”
Date: Sep 15, 2016 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Another hilarious chapter!
I loved:
- “If you and Brian decide on another marathon, you should soundproof your room. Do you know how hard it is to find a reason for the moaning and thumping that would explain it to two little boys.”
- "I don’t think she understands enough English for it to matter Emmett"
- "I wanted to point out until the cat was able to digest the ten pounds of food it has already been fed, it probably wouldn’t play with anything but the litterbox"
- Brian's reply about a date with Justin
Date: Sep 15, 2016 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ha ha ha!!! Hilarious!!!
Brian, Emmett and the cat: they are so ignorant that they would feed it with anything they find as soon as it purrs... I guess we are headed with some funny part with this cat. And the trip to the shop to get everything they thought the cat would need...
Lindsay and Michael in the water: I wouldn't have seen Lindsay so ballsy. She might have been really angry to go this far. I thought it was a new version of Thelma and Louise.
I love how she rewrites the history about Justin who stole her place.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 3:32 am Title: Chapter 29
Just finished this fic. It is a great read.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, it’s great you liked it.
Date: Sep 07, 2016 8:49 am Title: Chapter 29
Hiya,
Such a fitting end to one heck of a story. I love this story from start to finish. I'm gonna miss the antics and the fun.
Looking forward to your next story.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Sep 07, 2016 4:50 am Title: Chapter 1
One of my guilty pleasure, Mpreg. Loved the story. I'm sure gonna check the next story out. Loved the fast update, too. Thanks!
Nadine
Date: Sep 07, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 29
Greaat story, well written and I absolutely love the anecdote in the notes. Congrats!
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2016 12:56 am Title: Chapter 29
Another wonderful ending to a Fantastic Story that I will enjoy reading again.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 29
I loved this! I really need to step my writing game up lol.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 29
That was a wonderful Story. Thank you.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 29
This one of the best mpreg I've read in a longtime awesome fic can't wait for your next story super excited what your going bring us next
Date: Sep 06, 2016 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for this wonderful story. Sad to see this ending.
* hugs *
Date: Sep 06, 2016 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 29
I loved this story....all your stories actually! The tuna was hilarious and even more so that it was a real experience. I'm looking forward to your next and future fics. I like your writing style a lot. I'm not a fan of major character death fics because I can't stand the the thought of Brian living without Justin and vice versa. But I'll give it a shot since you promise they'll be back happy 😊. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2016 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 29
I love your ending. Riley is growing up loved. Gus and Jackson are just alike. Mikey is alienating everyone. Brian and Justin are getting married. Even Lindsay had a happily ever after. Enjoyed this story from beginning to end and look forward to your next.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 28
AS per usual on the weekends, a ew reviews in one.
Blake and Ted's babies have arrived! YAY! Poor Ted...not one for the world of hospitals I guess. Very happy for them both.
Sadly the joy was interupted by Michael. (can I just say BWAHAHAHAHHA about Justin and Blake's involvment there! While that may come back to bit them in the ass...for the moment it was bloody funny!) T&B are going to have their hands full that's for sure!
I'm surprised Justin didn't reach over and throttle the receptionist. He just may have if she hadn't mentioned the guy in Brian's office. Yup....her job was definitely short lived. I'm thinking no reference there either!
Grat name BTW! Raily. Really like it. Well done Brian. what a doting father he is already. This should be an interesting household now. I have the feeling the boys will be just as doting as Brian is.
I have to say....the blake and Justin payback was from left field! I was really wondering who had sent Michael the phone #'s. It honestly never occurred to me that it would be them! Brian and Emmett planning together for their own payback will be fun! As long as they keep in mind that it was 2 pregnant men that were doing this and not their normal behavior.
I had a nice weekend catching up with this. am throughly enjoying it of course. I love the chuckles I get out of it. Definitely lightens the angsty moments.
Looking forward to sitting back tonight and reading more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Sep 06, 2016 1:57 am Title: Chapter 28
I loved the whole chapter, especially the last sentence.