[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 28
Love this chapter. Brian being all Valley girl was too cute. Love the tee shirt Emmett got him. YumYum will be sooooo upset. No more tuna.
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 27
The baby is here, the baby is here! And smack dab in the middle of drama. That Cynthia didn't fire the receptionist right away is troubling. It's a good thing that Gus and Jackson are looking out for Justin, because if he'd fallen off a ladder things could have been worse. How sweet that Brian left to get Justin his tuna sandwich. I wonder who the guy in Brian's office was? Surely not Mikey, Frank probably knows Michael. You write the bestest stories.
Date: Sep 05, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
Labor for Labor Day! Nicely done!
i love that Justin asked for the sandwich, it's perfect!
Rileys here and now the two are in love it's so wonderful!
And checking the hand eye coordination is adorable. Jackson and Gus are too cute.
All that's to see its a terrific fast paced fun story and i thank you for writing!
Date: Sep 05, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 27
So Riley Taylor-Kinney has made her debut in spectacular fashion!! So glad that Brian was there for the birth of this child! I loved his little quip about naming her Chastity. It was so father-esque, how could anyone not love it? I'm glad that Brian told Justin what the real deal was and that he listened. That long-desired tuna sandwich probably won't taste the same now that Riley isn't 'asking' for it, LOL
As for the bitchy receptionist, I hope she enjoys her time on the unemployment curcuit. I can't imagine that she will receive a glowing recommendation from the staff at Kinnetik for being an arrogant asshole. Give a person a little position and it goes to their head, eh? Well 'Head' deez nuts bitch! No sympathy for stupidity!!
Great Chapter and lookinng forward to MORE!
Write On Star,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I miss one day of reading and all this exciting stuff happens ;)
So Happy that Brian was there to see his daughter come into the world I just love the name Riley, it is just too cute, everyone is just going to love trying to spoil these three babies.
That receptionist is such an idiot and now because she did not verify with either Cynthia or Ted she is out of a job, can't pity stupidity.
I would like to know who started that stupid bet so I can kick their asses, don't want Brian to scuff his Prada lol
Thank Goodness Michael isn't pregnant and my guess was right he is getting fat because he is a lazy bum, I wonder if David has kicked him out yet or is he still trying to figure out what he saw in Michael? (Definitely Not A Cute Puppy Anymore)
Lindsay and Sam need to keep their little relationship games in Italy, Rome, up their asses just stay out of Pittsburgh, though if she came back to try to get Mel I would love for Leda to break her like a pretzel then turn around and put the hurt on Sam.
Bring On The Next Chapter :)
Date: Sep 05, 2016 2:55 am Title: Chapter 27
OMG! A Riley and a tuna sandwich! What more could a man want?
This is such a fun romp. Can't wait for more.
Date: Sep 04, 2016 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 26
LMAO!!! Justin and Blake are EVIL!!!! LOL! I sooooo did not see that one coming! Mayhem and Mischief better watch out though if Brian and Emmett find out what they did; there's sure to be retaliation on both their parts.
As for Michael.... still NO LIFE huh? I'm glad that both Brian and Emmett shut him down. Nothing he has to say is important enough to give credence to. He's a jealous mongrel with verbal diarrhea. Take several seats in the middle of the ocean, Michael!!!
So Ted and Blake are PARENTS!! I can't deny that I love the names or Ted's reaction to seeing his children for the first time. Luciano and Renata Wyzecki-Schmidt are in for a whole lot of love from their family.
Looking forward to MORE!!!!
happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Sep 04, 2016 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 26
Okay at this moment I'm not liking Justin or Blake very much. Brian and Emmett didn't deserve the million and one calls from the whine brigade....although it will be hilarious once Brian’s suspicions are confirmed. Can you say major drama queen moment LOL.
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2016 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 26
Oh you evil person you. You had Justin and Blake e-mail Mikey. Even I did not think of that. I wonder if Brian and Emmett will figure it out. Two little babies! One of each sex. Perfect.
Date: Sep 04, 2016 5:24 am Title: Chapter 25
*snerk* hide the weenie...
Thank god Michael isn't pregnant, he's too whiney to procreate!
Date: Sep 03, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
Girl, your muse must be working overtime. Chapter after chapter hilarious fun and antics that make me crack up time and time again.
Supersperm, two pregnant eating machines, a bigger than life dufus (Mikey), an even dumber blond bitch. All in all one spectacular plot.
I particularly liked the part where Mikey and Eli got their come uppance and were really humiliated in front of their friends and neighbours. They really deserved it.
Can hardly wait for the next update to appear.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Sep 03, 2016 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 25
This was HILARIOUS!! I was reminded of the CLUE board game a little. It was Professor Crumb- or in this case Justin Taylor- in the Studio with a Tuna Sandwich! LOL! I'm glad Ted and Blake are having twins. Lord knows that if Blake was that challenging with a second pregnancy Ted might have checked himself into Rehab...WITHOUT an addiction.
Lindsay is really some piece of work. I think Justin has the right of it that Sam and Lindsay are addicted to drama. Lindsay just has to keep mess going! Now that Brian is firmly off limits, she's trying Mel again who's with Brian's twin sister from another mister?? OH that child seriously needs medication for that illness she has but I don't think they've come up with one specifically called "CRAZY BITCH" just yet.
Michael....LMAO!!! So much for wishful thinking Jerk! David won't be using the bi-line 'He ain't heavy, He's my lover' anytime soon. Besides Michael only would want to be pregnant so that he can brag and never have to work-or so he would think. I doubt that David would actually support him. He'd probably go for full custody and win then find a more appropriate man with the key ingredient of INTELLIGENCE to raise his child. But that's not going to be because Michael is NOT Pregnant!! YAY!! That means I can pretty much go on in my delusion that Michael is an asexual creature without a peen. OH HAPPY DAY!! LOL!
Looking forward to MORE,
WRITE On Star,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 25
Poor Justin. Does Brian have a microphone planted in the studio? He even knows about the sympathy ploy. Blake caring twins, did not see that coming. Love the dialogue between Leda and Lindsay. Not to mention Emmett's excuse for not leaving with Lindsay. "Simon says." lol. Jackson had some great lines also. Italy trumps kids obviously. Then we find out that Michael isn't pregnant. If he manages to lose the weight, I will not be happy. I've been trying to do that for years. Great chapter.
Date: Sep 03, 2016 4:12 am Title: Chapter 24
Don't tell me Mikey is riding the baby train too? If so is it David's?
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 2:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin going to Mass and putting Joan in her place was so funny and what she deserved, Claire is on crack if she thinks Brian would ever pay for her children's education, that isn't his job that is why those two boys have parents who should have thought about their education before they were born.
Brian and Blake sneaking their vices behind their partners back is funny of course what Justin did to Emmett had me rolling, at some point Brian and Ted are going to figure it out but in the meantime they get to enjoy their tuna subs and hohos.
Lindsay still hasn't realized that Brian is not coming to save Wendy anymore, he grew up and left her behind years ago, why is Sam trying to keep Lindsay around I would think he would be happy to get rid of her??
I really hope Michael isn't pregnant because that would just be so wrong, the poor kid might turn out to be like Michael or David *shivers* Ewwww and no child should be a boring, whiny, conceited egotistical snob.
I see David is thinking of kicking his sudo-stepford boyfriend to the curb because Michael is not meeting his expectations...Again
Paul is marrying Eli? GROSS!!!
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: Sep 03, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 24
Brian is on sex overload and Ted is in the doghouse!! Poor guys! Justin had me laughing aloud about hiding tuna subs and Blake's fetish with HoHos. Blackmailing Emmett was brilliant but will it really work? LOL I damn near fell out of my chair when Justin showed up at Mass!!!! I could just about imagine the pinched face on Joan. I swear she always looked like she ate a sweaty ball or something...LOL But the nerve of Cunty Claire saying that Brian should put her kids in private school too!! Really chick?! REALLY? Nevermind that Brian is providing for HIS sons but she expects him to provide for hers too. The only thing that makes Claire different from Lindsay is DNA. I'm glad both of her sons failed the entrance exam. Having to see Claire's sweaty ball-swallowing face everyday would have definitely been too much for Brian and Justin.
As for Michael.....LAWD HAM TURKEY GEEEZUSSSS you can't buy this mofo a clue. If it's been FOUR months and NO ONE is still talking to him about ANYTHING than it's time to give up the ghost and go on with his miserable life. In addition to that, the ass doesn't realize that Paul emailed him to #1 Talk to Deb (which I can't even say how angry THAT made me. I hope Steford Haven really does turn into Lierty Ave revisited) and #2 to rub his face in the fact that he is marrying Michael's ex-adulterer (I refuse to call them lovers- I still have problems with Michael anywhere near the idea of sex much less actually doing it- EWWWWWWW BRAIN BLEACH!!). Yet all he is stuck on is that Blake and Justin (mainly Justin) are pregnant. Then to fantasize about him and Brian having children?? WTF!!!!! <<mentally tossing my cookies at the mere idea of brian getting anywhere near Michael except to punch him>> What in the world of Fouled up Fantasies is this insanity?? Is he hearing voices now too, like Joan of Arc? Call the boys in the little white coats right now! Michael thinking of anything, even holding a spoon the CORRECT way, is too dangerous a pasttime. I really hope David catches him and tosses him out WITHOUT a plane ticket and tells Michael to make it the best way he can. Mooching mofo without a lick of sense!!
Looking forward to MORE!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Sep 03, 2016 1:27 am Title: Chapter 24
Ewww is Michael pregnant another great chapter
Date: Sep 03, 2016 1:20 am Title: Chapter 24
Ahhh is wittle Mikey preggers?? LOL... And with David's baby. Such karma.
I absolutely love the pregnancy characterizations. Reminds me of my good old days... mac and cheese and coffee. All the time. LOL. Of course, I was a perfectly wonderful angel. Never a harsh or nagging word passed my lips... and I *promise* I didn't lay in bed and plot my husband's murder because he snored and I was too uncomfortable to sleep. I swear I didn't. Nope. Never.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 1:11 am Title: Chapter 24
Just when I was getting bored, another chapter shows up. Hurray! This one is chock full of good stuff. Tuna sandwiches and Hoho's. Justin getting even with Joan and Claire. Now Michael's found out about the baby. Glad to see that David's being sensable. Michael wouldn't by change be pregnant too? That would be too funny. Icing on the cake.
Date: Sep 02, 2016 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
So hilarious!!! This texts' exchange is so funny.
For one, Brian admits he's lonely and doesn't like to wake up with Emmett. And then, the whole cat thing is the premise to delirious situations I guess.
Date: Sep 02, 2016 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
This chapter is delightful. Justin is having a very hard time focusing on anything else than Brian. The cilantro chicken recipe seems quite interesting. I'm going to try this.
Brian trying to be Dad of the year and his teasing about the poor cucumber is like pepper on a cut, highly difficult to manage, but so funny when you are just being witness.
The canon reference to the work they have to do with long and hard hours deep into the night is so accurate.
The Popsicle and the years of practice that you can't forget is hilarious as Deb almost asks for a training and Brian can't take anymore stimulation.
Deb is ready to help with the oblivious boys. Emmett is so going to gossip in the next hours...
Lindsey finally realizes who Justin is and is clashed by her dear hubby: it's not her day.
Date: Sep 02, 2016 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
This end... Poor Justin, so horny and no time to have his needs met. The night is going to be shaky, noisy and sweaty... Can't wait for that!
So much happened here:
- I loved how Deb ignored Lindsey'
- Justin found out that his family has expanded
- Michael let Lindsey know about Jackson
- Lindsey met JJ/Justin and asked about the famous Cole and his son
- Brian made his point regarding Justin both for him and Lindsey: for the first, it's "I can't wait until we are alone" and for her it's "don't you see I'm busy with this hot guy?"
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Justin and Satan Kitty in a battle for tuna and Brian Kinney is trying to keep sane lol
At this point Brian might have to start sleeping in the kitchen to keep Justin away from the tuna, I know he is hoping as the pregnancy progresses that Justin develops a craving for pickles or Oreos anything but that damn tuna! lmao
Ted better be more considerate of Blake or he might get kicked in the balls instead of locked out.
So happy that Brian and Justin are having a girl she is going to be so loved and cherished just like Blake and Ted's baby will
Bravo to Justin for telling off Joan and Claire they so deserved to be hit right between the eyes, I would be surprised if this is the last we hear from those two harpies, I would love for Justin to humiliate them in front of everyone at the church. Never Piss Off A Pregnant Sunshine He Will Destroy You!!
It was nice to have a Michael Free chapter, was like a breath of fresh air, too bad it won't last. :(
Date: Sep 02, 2016 3:05 am Title: Chapter 23
I think this was one of the hardest chapters to beta. I was laughing so much I had to keep wiping my eyes. That kitten is hysterical. I have five cats and know how crazy and demanding they can be. Great job.
~Lorie
Date: Sep 02, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 23
OMG....I love tiger!Justin and how he put the wicked witches in their place. But the tuna war HILARIOUS Lol