[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2016 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love what your doing with this. Mrs. Winterbourne was a favoritemovieof mine too. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. I'm having so much fun with this one. Even with the death its not as dark as some of my other ones.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh Brian doesn't realize his mother's love
Author's Response:
Nope, and he may not like it when she gets to really start meddling.
Date: Aug 24, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Wel, I was just wondering how you would connect the dots as regards Justin recovering his memory and all his past with his present and you started doing that. Hope that the white lie doesn't last longer for the sake of Justin, Brian and Ciaran. Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I was going to end it soon but then I changed my mind. Sorry, a few more chapters of lies. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just read all four chapters and I see quite a bit of angst ahead. I'm just taking a guess here in saying Patrick is actually Ethan and will cause as much trouble as possible if he and Justin are in the same place at the same time.
Author's Response:
i think you may be right on both of those things. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's interesting to see where everyone shows up in this story. My thinking is Joanie hopes Brian will become attached to Justin because of the baby's name.
Author's Response:
I think you might be right on that.
Date: Aug 23, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
So weird to learn what Justin was doing for money; but I guess it could explain why he doesn't want to tell the truth about his memory loss.
I loved how Brian's mother let everybody hear that she knows that Lindsay is with Melanie, implying she is Brian's beard.
Maybe Patrick was Ardan's or Brandon's lover? Is that the reason he is present?
Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Patrick wasn't their just his parents. I don't want to spoil anything, especially if I change my mind. Lol. I liked the part about Lindsay and Mel too.