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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Short review as I'm on my tablet and I literally use one finger. Very time consuming. 

You're off to an excellent start! Really looking forward to what you do with this and where you take it. Love how you've given a good basis for all their relationships. Should be interesting to see how they all move forward...or in some cases lag behind.

Fantastic start. Congratulations on getting your fic out there. Looking forward to updates.

Cheers 

Elaine



Author's Response:

Thannks Elaine.  C2 hopefully will be posted next weekend.  No prizes for guessing who gets left behind.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

So excited to see your first story up! Great job. Welcome to KD! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you TAG!  C2 is plotted just working on dialogue.  Hope to post next weekend xx

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