Date: Apr 07, 2017 4:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Whoa, just whoa: Michael lets me wordless!!! What an inconsiderate dumb ass!
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2017 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
The boxes won't fit in his car? Geez, how much crap did he bring to Britin in a few weeks? Guess he really was attempting to move in. I think I'd want someone to shoot me if I ever became that delusional. I know Deb always talks about how Brian gave Mikey just enough to keep him on a string, but I honestly never saw that. It's not like Brian ever said, or even hinted, at them being more than friends. I only saw Brian treating him like someone he'd been close to since childhood.
LOL @ Alice! Yeah Mikey, you don't get something for nothing, and you've already bled Brian for more than the average American household earns in 7 years.
Ben and Justin? Seriously, Michael? I think the reason he's so stupid is that he devotes 99% of his brain power to looking for an "in" with Brian.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 10:26 am Title: Chapter 5
It's good to know that Hunter and Ben are better now. Michael really needs to get in gear if he wants to keep his family.
Date: Sep 29, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how the family rallies around each other so well!
Author's Response:
Indeed and then some.
So pleased you are sticking with it.
Nicole
Date: Sep 23, 2016 1:41 am Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe Ben has left Michael yet. It's obvious that Michael isn't really interested in their relationship anymorw, and can't help wondering how much time he's spending with Dr. Dave?
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
Dr Dave time...none yet and that port in the storm that wittle Mikey thinks he has....
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 5
Michael the self-centered Ass expected Hunter to take care of the house, go to school and visit Ben in the hospital staying all night, while he sits at Britin trying to weasel his way back into Brian's face and into the lap of luxury?
I Swear I Want to Skin This Brat Alive!!
He just expects to stay at Britin and be waited on hand and foot while spending time with Brian and trying to undermine his relationship with Justin.
He is so self-absorbed that he just expects Alice to work for free, didn't realize he smelled of raccoon piss (HOW DO YOU NOT SMELL THAT!!!!!!) and didn't he spare anytime to get the food Ben and Hunter need, have Hunter's room clean or pick up family.
He acted like he was on some major business call and the world would end unless he took it (I had no idea comic books were in danger of disappearing...Quick Someone Alert a the Media!!).
I think Ben is starting to think about his situation with Michael his husband is ignoring their son and him to resume the 'Brain and Mikey Show' (When is he going to realize it got cancelled because the audience got sick of the Mikey character and his whiny voice??)
I Can't Wait For His World To Come Crashing Down Around Him!!
:)
Author's Response:
Skin that brat alive...let me work that into my fic. He really has no idea what is coming and karma comes in a Ben shaped bitch....
Date: Sep 23, 2016 12:20 am Title: Chapter 5
I so love this story. Ty for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you too!
Date: Sep 22, 2016 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh my....Michael is a selfish lying little shit
Author's Response:
Indeed! But karma is a Ben shaped bitch!
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2016 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Mikey, Mikey! How stupid can you be? Forget I asked that. Michael hasn't been working so how can he say that he's the only one bringing any money? What was it that Justin said to Steve? What treats are coming their way? Need more!!!
Author's Response:
More coming....thanks for liking!
Date: Sep 22, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Of course Michael assumes it was Justin returning his things. I'm looking forward to when that misconseption is brought to light. Well, that one as well as many others. LOL. Had to giggle right along with the gang. What will actually happen when he finally gets his much needed kick in the ass. I'm looking forward to everything you do to him. I very specific detail... "And annunciate." lol.
His assumption that alice would work fro free, or that Brian would cover it...I'd say it's astounding, but then this is Michael we are talking about. Can't be all that surprising. I think that hardest part when reading about him this way, that for Deb etc he's such a disappointment. (I remember as a kid my mom telling me she was disappointed in me that I had done something. that was probably the hardest thing to take. Knowing I had disppointed her.) I doubt that anyone's disapopintment in Michael is any surprise, not do I think that Michael eve cares, unless it was Brian of course. Maybe that's part of Brian's look of being flabbergasted.
Ooooooooooooooooo a new love interest for Jenn??? He sounds lucious!
I get the feeling Dr. Richards is just as anxious to have them leave as they are to go. LOL.
Michael's contaminated...lol!! that's funny. Seriously though...could he not smell himself?
Yeah...I still frigging HATE him in this! :) He's selfish in many fics, but for some reason, in this one, the little bastard makes my blood boil! Ben and Hunter are both aware of it. Until they are well though, there's not alot they can do. Once they've recovered though, I hope that Michael's ass gets kicked to the curb. Perhaps folks will figure out about David by then. Hell, they couls always go bck to Britin. Either way....Michael needs his cumuppence and in a really harsh way.
Good to know that at lest hunter will be well looked after by Jenn. she's such a peach. Love her!! She will look after all her boys.
Am definitely loking forward ot the nest installment. I'm excited and wary of these threats you spleak of. will definitely make for some more enjoyable and thrilling reading!!
thansk for the update!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Oh your wish for comeuppance on Michael is my command...my hatred for this character runs deep (will never write him positively) but he has to see everyone happy first. And that port he thinks he has in Dr Dave well...