Date: Oct 10, 2021 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
I just finished reading this story. It was a long time coming, but the payoff was great!! I loved everyone telling Michael off. He deserved everything he got and more!!
Date: Feb 19, 2020 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
Date: Sep 22, 2019 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love how Brian and Justin have each otherâ€™s support.
Date: May 27, 2019 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 17
Date: Aug 25, 2018 1:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how many times I've read this thing, but I love the whole series! I could probably quote it verbatim, but it recently occurred to me that instead of WALAAS, it should be called 'The Squeal of the Weasel', you know...to go along with the theme! ðŸ˜„
Date: Jan 04, 2018 9:04 am Title: Chapter 15
I can’t read chapter 16 or 17. I’m getting a server error ðŸ˜¢
Date: Apr 19, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ted is so funny trying to hide his laughing at Woody's.
I thought Michael will use what he thinks he heard at Woody's and I was right. What a fool.
Jenny has some way to explain Hunter and Matt's reasons to be at the loft.
Emmett can be such a strong guy when he's in protective mode.
Mel is shooting back at Lindsey (about Justin and NY): that's a change; before, she was shooting at Brian.
Brian's speech at the end!
Bravo! Wonderful story!
Date: Apr 19, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 16
Brian and Blake exchange: hilarious!
Emmett is such a warm, funny and true friend and Mel is way too patient with Lindsey.
Brian is a fair boss: I loved the way he informed the whole building.
Jenny's and Michael's future: what about Hunter's? Michael has already written him off.
Mel's arrival at the diner!!! Yeah, well done and so deserved! After that, Alice will have to tell what happened. Michael will be in big trouble very soon if everybody has something against him.
The last laugh was the Total Moron! So funny!
Date: Apr 18, 2017 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
Brian is so attentive to Justin: I bet he wouldn't mind playing doctor/patient!!!
Jenny has some character! Almost as sharp as her mother, who should be proud of her.
David is maybe not such a bad guy if he sees Michael like he is and dares saying it.
Date: Apr 18, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
Brian asking Justin to drive in every sense of the word: I hope Michael got the double entendre.
Ted clearing things with Michael: way to go Ted!!! It was time for him to let go.
The call of Michael when Brian was just out the shower: I love how Brian and Justin can't keep their hands off the other.
So happy for Hunter: his life is shaping well now.
David is fitting well with this crazy family; he's seeing what Michael is capable of and is not afraid to say so.
Date: Apr 17, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 13
There is so much in this chapter that it's difficult to list everything I loved or laughed at. The running joke on Justin's attempts to get more foods is hilarious, so is Emmett wanting to get a new recipes.
The building of the friendship between Brian/Justin and Zee/Faal is great to read (I loved that Brian wants to give Cynthia a bigger percentage on some occasions when he's happy to have new friends). Zee calling for the cavalry when Hunter thought his dick was broken was funny too.
Even Michael was funny when the ziti went bad.
What I don't understand is how David might be dangerous for Zee (I read why before I think, but it's not clear).
Date: Apr 09, 2017 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
Some sad things, some funny moments (Deb breaking Captain Astro); as you wrote, let the games begin! I thought it has already started with all epic previous events!
Date: Apr 09, 2017 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Glad that the incident at the girls' anniversary is known. Glad that Emmett decided to kick Michael out. But, Jenny thinks her father thinks about her future. She is in for big surprise!
Date: Apr 09, 2017 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
I thought Brian will be a bit rough with his answers to Hunter, but he did well, just to the point.
Date: Apr 09, 2017 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
Kaboom! The big reveal!!! Brian and Ben, plus Justin topping...wait for it...Brian! Take that Mikey and go crawl under a rock.
Date: Apr 09, 2017 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 8
So, Michael is staying with Drew and Emmett: what a delight for them! For once, Deb listened to Carl, that's a major change.
Date: Apr 08, 2017 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a nightmare this Michael: always jealous and disrespectful. Poor Hunter: not only he's HIV+, but his "father" is an asshole.
Date: Apr 08, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 17
So, first it's Justin and Ben, then it's Ben and Steve, now it's Justin and Ted? LOL!
Jenny is seriously brilliant! Lindz didn't know what hit her.
It's hilarious how Michael not only seems to always believe people owe him apologies, but that by deigning to grace them with his presence, they will fall to their knees and beg forgiveness. The fact that he seems to tell himself this repeatedly about different situations, yet it never happens, doesn't seem to register in his pea brain.
I'm glad Deb's finally opened her eyes about her dipshit son.
Ugh... Lindsay panting after Faal. Gross. And, I'm not sure who's more selfish - her or Michael.
I'm surprised Justin can call Brian his muse without it bringing up gross thoughts of Ethan.
Wow, just wow. That reminded me of one of those ceremonies where someone is shunned. I half expected all of them to turn their backs to Michael when they were done speaking. And, of course, Michael ran his mouth again. I'm just surprised Lindsay would immediately start defending him without getting more of a sense as to what was going on. Sloppy, especially for a WASP.
Loved it, loved it, loved it!! I can't wait to see the wedding and more smackdowns for Lindsay and Michael!
Date: Apr 07, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael's rudeness knows no bounds. And he still is totally delusional about being the entitled 'best friend.'
Poor Jenny. Go Mel for giving Michael another smack! Unbelievable that he'd then invite himself to use the brownstone!
High-five to Hank for screwing over Mikey!
Date: Apr 07, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Definitely must be nice to have a private plane! So glad Justin's okay. It's really nice to see the way the whole family rallied around them. The friendship between Zee/Faal and Brian/Justin, especially, is really beautiful.
Wow, now Michael's horrid attitude is even extending to Jenny? Every time I think he can't get any worse...
Jenny is definitely a Marcus! I love how she put Michael in his place!
I'm cracking up at Michael first thinking he's a good person, then that Brian and Ted will help him get his money back.
Date: Apr 07, 2017 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
That's good the "kids" are so well together, now that Jenny and Gus have cleared the air.
Date: Apr 07, 2017 11:04 am Title: Chapter 14
Applause for Ted ripping Michael a new one! I really do love how you're continuing to mature Ted, for lack of a better word. It was one of the only good things to come out of the last 2 seasons. I wish they would've given that sort of growth to some of the other characters. Instead we got some stagnating, some actually regressing, and in the case of Justin the development of something akin to bipolar disorder.
I hope Ted really helps Ben put the screws to Michael.
Woot, go Zee and Faal! Love seeing them kicking ass and taking names!
Aww, so sweet that they brought Lilah to the Treehouse. The place sounds amazing!
It's truly pathetic when it's Dr. Dave having to knock sense into Michael. He is so unbelievably selfish!
Date: Apr 07, 2017 9:25 am Title: Chapter 13
How has Michael never learned any sort of manners or social graces? You would think between Brian, David, and Ben he would have caught SOME sort of clue. Sometimes I think he does know better but chooses to appear as though he doesn't.
I'm surprised Charles would be okay with David romancing Michael, or does he not know David took it as far as sleeping with him?
I'm glad Ben was smart enough not to leave it to Michael to tell Jenny.
Oh, here we go again with Lindz and her entitlement issues. I hated her from the moment she appeared in the show. I know a lot of people didn't have problems with her until later seasons, but she always seemed so fake and manipulative to me. Her and Mel were so horrible to Brian I wanted to wring their necks. And the way they used the kids was disgusting!
Ohh, that egg sounds so good!
Brian the Sex God to the rescue! LOL!
Yeah, I'm just not buying that Michael is unaware of how cruel the things he says are. Free in all aspects of your life - with Hunter right there! - there's just no way he's that clueless. Here's hoping the food poisoning is just a taste of the karmic retribution headed his way!
Date: Apr 07, 2017 7:54 am Title: Chapter 12
I actually got a little teary right along with Faal. I get the feeling he and Zee haven't really had true friends before who just loved them for them. Brian and Justin are just what they needed, I think, and vice versa. Talk about two power couples that together could probably take over the world.
*cackles with glee at them planning to take Mikey's store*
Poor Brian. I'm glad to see Carl acting as a father figure to him, he certainly needs that. Damn Michael.
Date: Apr 07, 2017 7:06 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow, Matt's dad is a complete dick. What kind of parent rejects a kid due to a disability?
Yay, Michael got punched! LOL. I can't help it - I'm not a violent person, but I swear!
Sometimes the dialogue gets a bit confusing as to who's speaking, especially when there are a lot of characters. It might help if you tag the dialogue a bit more often (like 'Brian said' etc.)
I'm so glad you had them bring up the anniversary party. It has always bugged me how it just got blown off. That is not something someone says in the heat of the moment unless they are a truly heinous person. To even think something like that requires a level of near sociopathy in someone's mental state, I think.
Ha ha, thank you for not writing a Michael/David lemon! Ewww!