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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 1:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

OH FUCKING HELL!!!!  How could I forget such an important part of this story?!?

(maybe because I'm old!) ... good excuse. (I hope.)

Now, thanks to Tag's, The Britin Trap, I remember the term: Superfecundation. BUT. due to the fact I have NO medical training, just because both Michael (and another male) donated sperm, does this GUARANTEE that they will both be biological fathers? or could the same sperm impregnate both eggs?  And how does Michael intend for Lindsay to not claim parental rights once the babies are born? I see flaws in his planning! (just saying!) And when the hell is Ben going to find out about the embezzlement?

I used the term: another male. I don't believe for a minute you would subject us to Brian being the father along side Michael and Lindsay. Is it Justin's? Did Brian let someone else top him? Or, to use another of Deb's plot bunnies, did Brian allow someone to use his loft at some point?

The last thing... what the hell did Debbie mean by: Why shouldn't Brian have the same? The answer when it hit me, made me angrier than I think I have ever been at Michael before.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Slugger07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Good Lord Michael and Lindsey are all sorts of delusional.  Brian is going to  flip the F out when he finds out.

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Excuse me !!! Holy crap !!!!

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Oh God... I feel sick to my stomach, but not as sick as Brian and Justin will when they find out. Can Michael be arrested for theft of sperm? Who knows, maybe it's Justin's sperm? Wouldn't that be a bitch... Either way, someone's going to kill him!

Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Holy shit!  So was not expecting that bombshell.  I do hope the baby/babies are Michael's.  Brian is going to flip a nut if they are his.



Author's Response:

Stay tuned, Jessica!! There will certainly be surprises in store for Lindsay and Michael! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Omg, what the hell? Is he for real? Unbelievable! Holy shit! He is beyond stupid and delusional! 'As soon as the babies are born'...wtf? I kept reading that and I'm like...what? huh? what? seriously? Please update soon, the shit is going to hit the fan! 



Author's Response:

LMAO!! Yeah Shine, things are definitely going to hit the fan SOON!! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

All I keep saying is What?  Seriously. My mouth hung open four the last part entirely.  Please don't disappear for November we must resolve this.  Lol, 

Again, What??



Author's Response:

Hey Gretchen!

First don't worry. I've decided not to do NanoWriMo this year. In addition to my outstanding work here on KD, I am also in the middle of finishing up two novels. So I've opted not to put that kind of pressure on myself this year especially since I have to actually deal with Real Life sometimes (No one has managed to ban that yet huh? LOL). That said, everything will be resolved in due time! I know....these here folks...Girl they are going to drive me CRAZY! LOL

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Well I don't know what to say here. I really can't get my thoughts together because what Michael and Lindsay have done is really fucked up. I can't wait until they find out they stole the wrong jizz....then Justin will have even more reason to take Michael down.



Author's Response:

LMAO! Michael and Lindsay ain't ready for Justin!! Girl they just ain't READY!! LOL

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 9:55 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

OMG!! A baby?? I love this turn of events! Michael is as clueless as always. This method didn't work for Lindsay, does he really think that it will work for him? Of course he does, this is Mikey afterall! His plan is sure to backfire because our Brian will never fall into his arms and live out Mikey's happy hetero dream! I'm sure our dear Lindsay is the brains behind this operation and if Michael thinks that she doesn't have an ulterior motive, he's dumber than I thought he was! This is going to get even more interesting! Buckle up and hold ono for a very bumpy ride!!



Author's Response:

Hey Laura!! 

Babies....as in more than one, but that is explained next chapter! *evil grinning and rubbing hands* You are right about Lindsay. She just keeps making suggestions that Michael 'must' act on if he wants to see his dreams realized. It's funny though that Michael is not recognizing a good portion of himself within his ally. Lindsay and Michael are two sides of the same coin only she has a bit more finesse to her approach. Definitely some bumpy roads and hard lessons to learn for Michael! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 5:04 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

So, Debbie is, for once, questioning her way with Michael; that's interesting; I juts hope she will continue until he says he's sorry to Justin.

Happy that Justin was able to listen to Brian dismissing Michael.

Babies? Really? They are out of their minds if they think Brian will act the way they think he will.



Author's Response:

Hey Claire!

Deb is one of those concrete reasoning people just like Michael where everything is either black or white. Unfortunately for Deb, she's now learning that there is also a gray area where there is no right or wrong answer. In this case she knows what Michael did is absolutely WRONG but in her heart he did it for all the right reasons. She wants Michael to learn a lesson from this but she doesn't want Justin to take action against her son resulting in loss of his store or jail time. I always found it funny that Deb could spout the moral high ground to everyone, except Michael. Instead her responses towards him were based mostly on feelings and not what was morally right or wrong. By putting her in this position, Deb now has to take a stand and not waver. It's an age old battle that Debbie is going through, it will be interesting to see how she wins the war that is happening within herself. Vic gave her some solid advice when he told her to take Michael out of the equation and think about it as if this were her own situation. The question is: will she listen?

Brian is doing his own brand of growing and it's amazing to see. As far as the babies.... whew! There is going to be some hell to pay! 

Happy reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Oh my freaking God!  There's dumb, there's dumber and then there's these two.  That is one heck of a clusterf**ck coming and I can't wait to read it.

So good!

MissMerlot



Author's Response:

Hey Nicole!! Honey, clusterf*ck is putting it mildly. Michael and Lindsay are just plain MESSY!! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)

Holy shit.  Michael's in more trouble than I realized.  Stealing sperm which might not be Brian's, now that is fuuunnny.  I do hope they put his ass in jail for what he did to Justin.  Emmett meeting George means bye bye Teddy.  What will Ben do when he finds out about the little kiddies?  No way Deb's going to be able to excuse Mikey's behavior.



Author's Response:

SMH.... And to think that when I started this it was only supposed to be light-hearted and fun. Ahh Phyllis they just couldn't stop themselves from bringing the angst... Blame Michael, Lindsay and Ethan aka The Three Stooges- Drama Edition for all this insanity!

Happy Reading and HUGS

~Nichelle 

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