Date: Jun 18, 2020 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
I just saw you responded to this old review, and I thought I'd clarify myself... or what I meant: Back to Lindsay... her gig is up... but, by LAW... I can't see where she will have any claim to the babies... right?
What I meant by that, is that she STOLE the sperm, so how can she have any legal right to the babies even though her eggs were used?
Hmm... I just thought of something funny... I bet that would be a new one for the courts...I can hear it now: "Your Honor... they are MY babies." "How did you get pregnant, ma'am?" "I committed breaking and entering, and stole the sperm."
"LOCK THIS CRAZY WOMAN UP!" *the pounding of the gavel commenses.*
LOL...
Date: Jul 06, 2019 1:20 am Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
First to start... just a little flaw in Lindz' area of inner dialogue: Michael was not with the guys on Liberty Avenue the night Justin and Hobbs had their confrontation. Michael and David were fighting about finances that night. But... artistic license and all that crap... (I probably shouldn't have said anything.)
Lindsay is bat shit crazy. (I'm not touching that one anymore than that. Because if I start I won't quit!) 🙃
If Deb moves in with Carl... Who is going to be responsible for the mortgage she just took out against her house?
Michael and Ethan... *shudder*.... although, they DO deserve each other, and as Brian said, there are double headed dildos... THAT should help bring them together!
Back to Lindsay... her gig is up... but, by LAW... I can't see where she will have any claim to the babies... right?
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Hey Cathy. Just reformatting/ editing to reflect more of my writing style as it is today, and came across this. Lindsay's eggs were used; Taryn is just the incubator.
Date: Dec 09, 2016 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
What a big slime ball this Ethan is. I hate him even more than usual. LOL. TAG
Date: Dec 07, 2016 4:25 am Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
Where do I begin- been reading this wonderful story all night- go long stories. Such plot twists and turns- never would I have thought of the evil plot twist with a pregnant lesbian by Linds and Michael- well done- you have me at the edge of my seat wanting more, more ,more- glad that Mel through Linds out- worried that Ethan will try to hurt Justin- want Michael to lose everything and with a twist of fate that the babies are neither Brian's or Justin's but a trick that they shared- that would be aweome. Can't wait for more of this wonderful story. Thanks
Date: Dec 06, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
Nice to have some background story from Lindsay regarding the way she acts towards Justin.
I hope that Deb will go on with her new resolutions.
Mel and Ben can support each other as they are both crashed from their +1. So glad Mel finally threw Lindsay out with not that much possible action left.
Brian all worn out... That must be a first, well the fourth actually... They are on the right track, that's a relief.
Ethan is dumb, but he feels something is rotten. Can't wait to read about the return of Justin.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
Lindz is so self centered that she doesn't see the world falling down around her. Mel's on to all her shenanigans and has thrown her out. Ben will be around to help Mel get over her loss and eat all her lemon cookies. I'm not sure if I feel sorry for Deb, like Vic says she enabled Mikey to be the selfish twit he is. Ethan's lost everything and once Justin finds out he's the one who messed with the car that will be the last straw. If he's not careful Hurricane Daphne will let him have it. Things are going in the right direction for Brian and Justin and with the help of their friends they'll do okay.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 19: FOOL'S GOLD
Wow...I don't even know where to start. What an un-friggin-believable chapter! I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat reading it. From start to finish it was pretty intense.
Lindsey has been handed her walking papers thankfully. something she definitely didn't see coming. she obviously didn't think Mel was serious. that she was just being emotional and they'd work things out.
Dear lordy! she is WAY more involved with all things Justin and Brian than I even thought. SHE's the one that had the idea of Ethan. It seems while Michael is definitely a manipulator in all these schemes, I get the impression that he is as much a puppet of hers as everyone else is. She is definitely has been a master thus far. It makes sense mind you. Michael doesn't seem intelligent enough to think of all the details. He's the type to come up with an idea and just jump into it, rather than make plans, and sub-plans. Lindsey's level of self entntlement is nauseating! I felt ill at all she was revealing. All her schemes and machinations are for nought at this point however. Not saying she won't keep trying, but those won't come to pass either. Too many things are coming to light now. Too many people know of too many things that have occurred. That zinger from Mel that let Lindsey know Mel was aware of the kids was brilliant.
I have to say WOW as well when it came to Vic's confrontation with Deb. SO needed. I'm glad she's saying yes to Carl, but how much will she be sacrificing if she continues standing by Michael. Carl will only put up with so much, and seeing as he's also aware of what Lindsey is up to....well, needless to say, he's going to be putting a mightly large foot down when it comes to Deb and her involvement with Michael. I'm assuming he's going to fill her in on what happened with Lindsey....
Justin is still thinking kindly towards Ethan. I wonder what's going to happen when he finds out the truth? When will that happen? I hope before the Friday they meet up. I also hope that Ethan doesn't do anything stupid. Justin needs a break. He and Brian need to get stronger in their relationship. Oh man...what is Brian going to do when he finds out about that deal too? Shit hitting the fan is nothing compared to what is going to happen. I hope more legal ramifications are in the works if possible. He's going to seriously cut ties with all parties involved.
Ben is a dream friend! He completelyunderstand what Mel is going through and will so incredibly supportive. He won't let her fall backwards, but will help her to move forward.
Oh what an incredible treat it was to see this!!!!! naturally I took a break from work. I simply can't see an update announcement and ignore it. the call is just too strong. I have little self control. :)
Such a bloody amazing chapter.
Cheers and thank you!!!!
Elaine