[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2019 10:12 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
I want to start by saying chapter 22 was beautiful.
Chapter 23... I'm so glad Phoebe bared all to Daphne and that mel is on her way over... but Mel already knows everything, unless Phoebe has some other info that's missing.
Hmm... maybe Ethan won't be going to Harrisburg afterall.
But HOLY COW!!! Who's the voyeur?!
On to read...
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Apr 01, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
Great chapter Darling! So great to see new chapters posted...
Hugs Kathleen 💟
Date: Mar 19, 2017 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
*grabs some popcorn and settles in* I wonder who has been watching them all this time?
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
Such a great story- all the intrigue and the edge of your seat writing. Glad Phebes had a change of heart, but who is watching Justin and Brian? Can't wait for more
Date: Mar 19, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
So, why don't they just turn off the computer or even simply turn it a different way? Lol. TAG
Date: Mar 18, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
OMG Talk about a cliffhanger!!! That came out of left field!! Who in the world is watching them?? I doubt it's Michael because he simply doesn't have the brains to pull that off. Probably not Ethan either because he clearly doesn't know B&J are back together. Now Lindsay is possible but something tells me no. I think if it was any of those three they would be way more frantic. I have a feeling it's going to be the last person I suspect. I really hope the next chapter will be posted soon because I can't wait to find out who it is!
I love Phoebe and wonder why she's childhood friends with the chin rat. I didn't think him capable of having such a friendship. I'm happy that she gave Ethan some food for thought although I don't think he'll listen especially when he finds out Justin and Brian are back together. I'm also so so ecstatic that she decided to tell Daphne what she knew about the three stooges. Hopefully we'll get to dispensing some justice to the psycho freaks!
Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment. I'm a huge fan of your writing and am in the midst of a Nichelle marathon, even the WIPs! Keep up the good work.
Laura
Date: Mar 17, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
Omg who in the hell has been watching them?! Wtf?! 'Enjoy the free porn', love it! Lol
Phoebe is cool, finally coming clean about Ian, good for her! Daphne is always the best! Get 'em girl!
Michael & Lindz are fucked, and not in a positive life affirming way....please tell me we're getting another chapter this weekend??
Date: Mar 17, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
Ewwwwww.....don't like the idea of a video of B/J being forever on the internet. Like it even less that the voyeur could be Ethan, Michael or Lindsay. Awesome story. Been waiting through 5 chapters for Brian to learn that Michael stole a used condom from his Loft. Hope it happens soon. I enjoy your stories soooooo much I've read and reread several of them...even the wip ones ( which I hope are updated soon).
Date: Mar 17, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
I was wondering if/when Phoebe will tell what she knows to someone. I can't wait to read Mel's reaction.
I didn't get at the end why Justin didn't disconnect the skype session before going to bed. Was it intentional?
Author's Response:
Hey Claire,
A strange thing with computers in general is that if one knows what they're doing, it's not hard to access the webcam on a computer, even with bypassing the firewalls set up. If Justin is always signed in and available, which in the context of this story he is, it makes it easy to tap into Justin's camera via the Skype feature. So saying, it definitely wasn't intentional- at least not in that context. A lot of Justin's business takes place on Skype since he has clients based all over while he's been stationed in Pittsburgh. Video conferencing is primarily how they keep in touch without Justin having to travel every few days, especially since he's in California working. Don't worry though. We'll know exactly who received the free porn next chapter and whether or not they will keep Brian and Justin's secret.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Mar 17, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL
Ethan, while starting off a bit scary, at the very least seemed to listen to Phoebe's words. It made him pause for a moment. Whether he actually takes anything she says to heart is another matter altogether. He seems far to narcissitic to do that in all honesty. He's another character who has this level of entitlement that is so undeserving.
Phoebe is very observant and thought provoking. She's able to look beyond the life long friendship and now see Ethan for who he really is. I doubt she'd have been able to do that without having overheard the conversation she did. Thankfully, she knows what's going on and is telling all to Daphne. Now that Daph is in the loop, and Mel too, Justin will have the support he's going to needs as well as the legal help.
OK now...that last scene? who teh hell is watching them? That is freaking creepy as hell! I wouldn't put it past any of the 3. I don't see Lindsey as being able to do that kind of thing, nor even think of it unless told to. Michael I can definitely see doing it, but would need instructions (in picture format) and a map in order to do it. Ethan is also fully capable and probably smart enough to do it as well and LeRoy would probably help. there's also the possiblity of someone else we don't know about, but I'm putting that theory to the side for the time being. (yes...as usual, I'm talking things out in my head. lol) whoever it is, is in for a real sight!! As Brian said, Free Porn! Still though...the very idea is scary as hell.
Thrilled to see an update! Thank you!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Phoebe definitely has definitely given Phoebe some food for thought. The best part is that he can never say that he wasnt told. Like Michael and Lindsay, Ethan likes to blame others when his actions are less than stellar and he's caught in them. It will definitely be interesting to see what his decisions will be especially since Melanie's and Michael's ultimatums are still hanging over his head. I would hate to be him on any given day but now that he's stuck between a rock (Mel) and a WHINY place (no doubt who that is), I really don't envy him. And he really needs to pray for the gift of invisibility at least for the next 24 hours because if Daphne sees him.... yeah, that will be one promise she'd be all to happy to break!
As for who's that peeping in on Brian and Justin, that answer will be revealed in the next chapter and so will their intent regarding disclosing Brian and Justin's secret rendevous. I think you'll be surprised at the answer...
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle