Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 12:40 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Voyeur indeed- very interesting-   I hope Justin listens to Melanie and pushes for Ethan to pay-  he ended up in the hospital and it was Ethan's fault.  So glad to see an update and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Why and how are Ron and Nancy spying on Justin? Scary  and just gross .

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 3:39 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

I need more, everything is leading up to the big confrontation... Write faster!!!

Hugs Kathleen 💟

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Okay so I had to stop in the somewhat middle to say this...NANCY WAS THE FUCKING WATCHER?!? LAWD HAVE MERCIFUL! Now back to my scheduled reading.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Ummmmmmmm...gotta say, that first part...B&J, HOT AS HELL! I mean the whole scene of them together sounded really beautiful. I was wondering who it was watching them. the idea kinda creeped me out a bit. I had various names running through my head. Sam?? Dr. Dave?? I even considered Dixon, but he doesn't know lindsey. etc. then it occured to me it could be a woman. I though, Mel perhaps? Obviously it was someone who knew Lindsey as the witch she is. Then out of the blue.........EEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKK!!!!!!! Brain bleach!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG! Nancy?!?!? then Ron was there too?!?!? GAH! I get being turned on my those 2 (B&J I mean...not R&N *shudders*), really I do. But holy shitballs man...that'd be like knowing your parents are watching you in a home porn video. GAH!! Give a girl some warning! LOL!!

So Phoebe did tell Mel everything thankfully. Now Mel has to figure out how to proceed. At least Ben is there too. Sadly they have both come to the realization of what their true places were int their partner's lives. Placeholders. How devestating is that?!?! they both are dreading having to tell B&J what's been going on. Don't blame them. I hope it doesn't effect Justin's progress. Hopefully he just gets pissed off enough to make him fight back. I like that Mel wants to get Lindsey in as a co defendent too. Oh this is going to be great! Now I wonder what carl is going to do. What is Deb going to do/say about Michael's involvment?

B&J are heading home. I'm a bit nervous for what lays ahead for them both once they get back. Glad they've talked a bit about what they both expect from each other. All justin as really asking for is some respect from Brian. Plain and simple. Something that one should expect from anyone really. Brian sees that and understands and appears to be very open to the "don't do stupd shit" rules. I think...I hope that going forward, their relationship is going to be stronger now. That this time away wasn't just a blip, and that people around them are going to see them both in a new light. soemthing that is NOT going to please 3 of them. Will there be some kind of confrontation coming up? I'm a bit on pins and needles just thinking about the possiblities.

EXCELLENT update. I'm so happy that you posted. Pretty sure I need a drink though thinking about Nancy and Ron watching B&J. LOL!! (It's only 9:30 am)

Cheers,

Elaine