[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2019 6:35 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Wow! The level of cuntiness of Lindsay is almost beyond believable. I wonder if they can bring the Salem Witch Trials to town for a main street execution?
I think Michael can kiss away his best friend status, and any hope of Brian coming to his rescue.
I was surprised it was the police station that Brian and Justin showed up at. I was sure it was Debbie's when Justin asked Brian why they were here.
It's going to be interesting to see where you take this with the whole Debbie/Mother arc. Since she has already left Michael to his own vices and gone off with Carl, I do have to wonder if she will stick to her guns, or if she will play 'My son is not responsible', once again.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2017 9:25 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
It's nice to see a 'good' Claire for a change. TAG
Date: Sep 15, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Thank you for the update!
Brian is going to suffer a lot during the coming weeks/months; he will have to work on "forgetting" his friends betrayal and Deb's reactions.
Now that he made his choice, Justin knows where he stands and will be able to help and support him.
I can't wait to see how Lindsey will have to give her new clothes back.
Date: Sep 15, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
I was just thinking about you and WHAM! There you are. I hope all is well with you.
What an incredible update. I ws so excited to see it. Duplicitous doesn't come close to M&L's behaviour. I'm over the top angry, disgusted and heartbroken all at once. So looking forward to their cumuppence.
All that Lindsey was thinking was....ugh...gotta say, gave me the willies! What a manipulative C-word! Her and Vance?!?! YICK! Lynette showing up, and the fact that Claire is turning over a new leaf was brilliant! I like how they are both working together to help bring down Lindsey.
Curious as to how Deb is going to react to everything happening. glad that Brian was so assertive in his insistance that he won't be helping, no matter what Deb does or says.
what a glorious chapter. Readit at least twice now. :)
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Sep 15, 2017 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Oh yes, my pleasure as well! This is very interesting...Claire & Lynette...hmmmmmm cannot wait for Lindsay's arrest and how Deb will react to all of this. Hopefully she'll know when to let go. Now my dear Nichelle, I've been concerned about it honey. I hope everything is alright, missed you girl! xo
Date: Sep 15, 2017 10:06 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Good grief... Lindsay is a harlot of the first order. Her seducing Vance (among others) is proof of that. Yuk! Not the image I wanted to start my day with lol.
Lindsay is so psycotic and delusional it's a bit frightening. I'm so glad everyone is on to her otherwise she'd be much more dangerous. It's great to see Claire and Lynnette helping with her demise. I cant wait for her arrest.
I feel a bit sad for Deb and what is coming her way in regards to Michael. I have to wonder how he turned out like this, did she smother him way too much? Deb is going to have to decide if she's going to support him now or let him go. There is no hope for Michael, he's not getting out of this hole he has put himself in. I do hope she makes the right decision.
Thank you for your update and looking forward to the next!
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
It's my pleasure too.
Saje
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2017 2:08 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Can't wait to see how Deb takes things. Looking forward to Lindsay's come down. She's finally messed with the wrong people. Knowing that she was conspiring with Gardner just makes it all worse.