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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2019 8:15 am Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

I don't even know where to start...

Idiocy doesn't even begin to describe Michael. All he admitted to! Holy Crap! Did they actually pay Hobbs to BASH Justin, or was it the intimidation and maliciousness during school? If they paid him to DO the bashing, HOW MUCH did they pay him? Then he so stupidly signed everything over to Justin not even knowing what he was signing! hehe

I'm starting to see similarities to J2TU, yet they are so very different. And did I catch that Lindsay actually SLEPT with Chris? How old was he? Can they get her for statutory rape? And she actually paid him? So, they can get her for that (as if they didn't have enough with everything else.) Clarence is the best thing that has ever happened to her!

“Look, she said that she paid him to burgle the loft and to make Boy Wonder’s life worthless. I didn’t realize that she also fucked him to…”

And DEBBIE!! My god!!! She's willingly giving up Carl and her new life all for that little ingrate she calls her son. Wait until she finds out Michael signed her house over to Justin!!!

Altrujism?? Seriously? Oh my god, Nichelle! I've heard everything now!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2017 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Whoa what a chapter! WTF is wrong with Deb. Regardless of the overwhelming proof of Michael’s guilt she is still blaming Brian and Justin. I suppose it’s easier than admitting to herself that she raised such an awful human being. She will soon realize all she is losing and will live the rest of her days alone because Michael will be in jail and she alienated her liberty ave family. I have no sympathy for her. I thoroughly enjoyed Jen’s smackdown!

OMG Lindsay, that interaction with Clarence followed by her new wardrobe disappearing was priceless. It’s only the beginning. Her life is going to come down like a house of cards soon enough. I can’t wait for that!

As for Michael, where do I begin?! Good Lord, what a sad individual. A more stupid, narcissist doesn’t exist. Being a reasonably sane person myself, I find it hard to believe that he feels justified in what he’s done and is delusional enough to believe he’s getting out of jail. He’s going down and I want a front row seat! 

Now off to see what the next two chapters hold! Thanks for the update and take care of you and your family. Take your time, update when you can.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

So sorry to see Debbie going over to the dark side. Can she maybe be redeemed? I hate to see the gang lose their mother figure. 😞 TAG

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

I'm percolating right now ready to explode! So bloody angry at Deb! As a parent, I of course adore my daughter, but I am definitely not blind to her faults adn I also call her on them. If she doesn't learn from my lessons, then she learns teh hard way on her own. Deb needed to do that with Michael. She hasn't and I don't think she will in teh future either unless she really gets a serious wake up call. Either way, I do't think teh gang is going to welcome her back with open arms. A tiny part of me feels sorry for her knowing what that outcome will be for her, but the larger part knows that she has it coming. Mel we awsome! Telling her to get out of her house. Jenn telling her off like she did. wonder if there is anything that can be done or said to her to make her see the truth of it all. I simply hate it when she says that "they owe her". UGH! Now thatvic knows about what's goign on...will he get through to her or will she get thrown to the side by Deb as well?

Michael is a freakign idiot! OMG!! While I'm glad he can't seem to keep his mouth shut, he is such a complete and utter idiot! My goodness, he openly admitted to paying them all off, and all the other devious shenanigans he and Lindsey were up to. He also was foolish enought (thank goodness) to not read teh contract even after being asked about reading the previous one...sigh...DUMBASS! He deserves everything he gets! i hope we get to  see what happens in court. Wonder if Deb shows up. LOL. that could be funny. Wonder if that actually lets her know how far her precious boy has gone adn done.

Oh this was such a bloody good chapter! LOVED IT!!!!! Am so excited for the net one!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Michael fell in the trap and good luck to him to get out!

I loved how Lindsey was managed by Clarence and how she lost her new clothes: her WASPiness is quite all gone.

Deb's scene at Mel's was so dense and tense that I feared something dramatic might have happened. Everybody is going to feel sad/depressed about what Deb is doing.

Great chapter! Thank you for posting it!

Happy writing Nichelle!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Wow wow wow...omg! What a chapter! Holy shit! Amazing Nichelle! Well done babe! Michael & Lindsay are so screwed! Thank God! Deb has got to see reason at some point. Jesus...everyone is so sad that they've lost her...go Jennifer! Wow, talk about a mama bear! 

I hope you're doing better sweetheart, I'm worried about you...much love & hugs!

Reviewer: LuvableBz Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Hi,

Great update. Loving this story.

Sad though that Debbie have reverted back to being as she is.  She already going to lose her house because we all know that micheal will not pay the mortgage and even now since he in jail.  I do not see Carl taking her in either if she continues to harras Brian and Justin to drop the charges.

I like the back story on Kiki. And although she and Deb have been friends for a really long while she does not fully trust her either.

Keep On Writing.

 

 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 5:59 am Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Wow. You covered alot in this chapter. It was  great.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2017 2:19 am Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT

Wow!  Will Deb calm down once Justin gives her back her home?  or will he?  With her attitude the way it is, I wouldn't if I were him.  Michael and Lindsay are not getting out of this even if they think they are.

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