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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2019 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

Yay for Vic! But I do have to wonder how Debbie could put the house up for his bail, even if she wanted to. Doesn't she owe a large mortgage for money she borrowed to give Michael? And as I commented once before, she WILL lose Carl over this. He is NOT going to throw his badge and career away for someone like Debbie. But, I have to wonder if Debbie knows EVERYTHING Michael has done. Not only the stolen money. Does she know about Ethan, Hobbs, and the babies? If not, she's once again gone off half-cocked and will lose everyone. Open mouth, insert foot syndrome.

The fact that Brian and Brandon could possibly be brothers is very interesting, especially when you threw in there about Jack having a twin brother. I have only read a couple of stories with them being brothers, but never from the identical twin father arc. The main reason this is interesting is that my 17 yr old granddaughter just studied this last May in AP Bio. She talked very animatedly during dinner that evening while relaying things about 'markers'. Besides the fact of how expensive this testing cost. (in all honesty... she kind of lost me.)

I find it interesting that the four of them talk so openly in a cafe. Lots of available ears there. But I do like Claire and Lynette together. Cute and fun bosom buddies.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

Claire and Lynette are most definitely and unlikely alliance. I’m very glad they are team Brian and Justin! I can’t wait for Brian and Justin’s reaction!

So, Brandon and Brian are brothers? Wow I didn’t see that coming! Brandon doesn’t seem to be a bad guy here, at least not yet. Can’t wait for Brian’s reaction to this bit of news. And how will Brandon react to his brother’s beautiful blonde partner!? That will be interesting.

Deb is unbelievable. She’s just as, if not more, delusional than her idiot of son. The apple obviously didn’t fall from that tree lol. Her constant “you owe me and Michael” mantra is really grating on my nerves, ugh. I was impressed how our boys remained a strong united force against Deb and finally booted her out of their life. She really didn’t deserve the house they gave back to her. It shows how much character they have and how little she has.

Thank you for the update and off to read the next chapter!

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

Wow! 2 updates in a matter of a couple days! What a treat! Thank you!!!!!

I was wondering who did that to Lindsey. HAHA! Claire and Lynette definitely seem to be bonding. :)  Seems like Brandon is going to become a part of the tribe as well. that was a surprise. Nice twist! Cynthia of course seems to be leading the brigade. Oh what funs will lay ahead with this little group involved.

Pretty much have a massive hate on for Deb right now. Her shpeil about Brian "oweing" them...ARG!! That his only importance was to keep Michae lout of trouble. Yup...freaking hate what she's doing. she's completely blind to her son's machinations and will continue to be. Until he does something against her that is, then she'll want everyone's sympathy I bet. HA! yeah right. Well, she has her house back now. what she does with it is entorely up to her. Wonder how long it will take for her to realize how much damage she's done. Either way, the gang is done with her. Washed their hands of it all. Glad Vic was there to lead her out as well as support the boys.

Sad sad day for our boys and the gang. Realizing that someone you've loved has a checks adn balances list.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

It's great that Vic was there to witness Deb's arrival and support the boys during her scene.

Justin did the right thing with her house and it's clear that it's the last thing he will do for her, ever.

Thank you for the double update this week!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 5:49 am Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

Wow you wrote fast. The Brandon thing was unexpected.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2017 3:52 am Title: Chapter 33: CLOSER Part 1

This is some chapter.  Interesting to learn that Jack isn't Brian's father and that he might have a brother.  Hope Debbie finally gets her head out of her ass.

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