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Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 45: W Bay and S Howe Streets

How could anyone hate this chapter? It was so long & fabulous! 

Lily is the best! That little girl is so amazing! I hope she can share her daddies better once her sister makes her appearance. lol

The sex was wicked hot! I understand some people don't 'get it' or enjoy when a gay guys licks his own cum especially from his lover's ass but...to each his own. Where do you get yout knowledge from hun? I've heard of that before but you're so young. lol

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 45: W Bay and S Howe Streets

Loved it!

I'm glad Brian let Eric have it for just up and leaving.  He had to know how Brian must have felt.

And fuck Louisa!

 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 45: W Bay and S Howe Streets

I love this chapter. I feel so bad for Eric's family they will never truly embrace the wonders of LILY. It's his mother's Loss

 

Thanks for keeping the story going

Teresa

Reviewer: Hotesse Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2017 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

Me like !!!  
Brian is amazing! I did know he was coming tho... You had Em give that away :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

Thank you so much for the update!!!

It's a great chapter, with a big surprise at the end, some angst in the beginning and a new dynamic between father and son.

Can't wait to see how the mother will react to Brian.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 1:00 am Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

I think this may be one of my favourite chapters, even though it did make me mad on SO many levels. Firstly, you don't just take someone's kid while they're sleeping. Even if you are their grandma or your intentions are good... Secondly - THAT BOOK... that was no coincidence, she truly believes that Lily is missing out on something because she doesn't have a mom. I hated how she asked Lily that and referred to Brian by his name, and not Daddy when talking to the small child.

Eric's dad, bless him. I think he loves his son, but seeing his wife so upset put him in a difficult position. I do think he wants to try. At least, I hope he does.

Lily playing celebrity rehab with her toys was literally one of the funniest Lily moments. I could totally see her doing that and Emmett being all WHOOPS about it lol.

I'm glad Eric has Amanda. He needs someone on his side (blood family, I mean, obvs he has Brian) and omg, Lily's reaction after his mom asks about missing out on having a woman in the house... how she wanted to go with Eric, even though he was just going upstairs. It's like, who was she comforting, herself or her papa???

AND THEN BRIAN <3 Yay that he surprised them. Eric needs him right now. And look how happy Lily was to see her daddy :) Watch out, Louisa :p

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2016 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

I have to admit that if I woke up and couldn't find my child I'd be upset too.  Would it have hurt to leave a note.  We see that Eric's mother is not much of a mother at all.  Lily would happily tell her she has a mother who gave birth to her in her life, and she also has two fathers who adore her and want her to be happy.  At least Eric's father is trying, and his sister is in his corner.  If his mother never comes around it will be her loss.  But Brian will be there for him and that's what makes this the fantastic story that it is.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2016 12:34 am Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

Loved it! I feel so sad for Eric...he's having such a hard time with his parents. What a sweet conversation though between Eric & his dad....perfect timing jumping in the ocean lol Christ that was funny! And Lily, that kid is the best. Hysterical that she was playing Celebrity Rehab with her dolls!!! Laughed right out loud at work! Eric's mom really needs a lesson on unconditional love parents are supposed to have for their children. Totally unreasonable. And then Brian surprises them, yay! Omg the next chapter must be intense, can't wait! Welcome back hun, great job ! 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2016 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 44: S Caswell Ave and W Bay St

So glad you are back. I love this story. Poor Eric, but Lily is the best. I'm happy Brian showed up ,what a surprise. Please write again  soon.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 43: River and Cape Fear Drive

Please, could you let us know if you will post more chapters to this amazing story?

It's been a long time.

Hope you are doing well.



Author's Response:

I would like to start writing the new chapter soon but have two jobs and work 65- 70 hours a week. I should have a little more time in October since I will only be working 58 or so on my most loaded weeks. I haven't given up on this story yet! I will be posting to Ao3 first so definitely look for it there. :) Feel free to email me for any updates or if you want to kick my ass into gear. I could certainly use it. Thank you for checking in! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 43: River and Cape Fear Drive

One can't help but feel for Eric.  It's surprising since his mother should be more sympatico.  Do they ever find Ellie?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 2:06 am Title: Chapter 42: Chartres and Saint Ann Street

It's great that Brian and Justin can hang out together.  A shame that Emmett thought the worse.  Little Lilly is her father's daughter, and evidentally inherited some paranormal behavior from him.  Hope nothing bad happened with Lily and Eric.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2016 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 41: Norfolk and Rivington

There is something still there and that's nice to know.  Maybe after the baby comes Nathan will find being around a little one isn't so bad?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chpater 40: 31st and 5th

Amazing how Lily always gets her way.  She wanted a sister and she gets a sister.  lol.  Frankly I'm surprised that Brian let Eric out of the bedroom and was actually civil to Emmett, Drew and Nathan. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2016 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 39: S. 4th and Bedford

I'm so glad that Justin was the one who found Lily.  Brian and photography?  It makes sense.  I think the reason Brian didn't cash the check is because it would have meant they were really over.  When Justin becomes a dad he's not going to find it easy.  He'll need all the help he can get especially if he end up with twins!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2016 3:10 am Title: Chapter 38: E. 14th and Broadway

Oh no.  A lovely day ruined when he loses Lily.

Reviewer: addicted-to-romione-bedward Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 43: River and Cape Fear Drive

Ohhh! I hope the next chapter will come a little sooner. No pressure. Just bring it to us NOW! (insert Lily's voice)

Why do I have the feeling that Eric will stay here? Hmm....

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2016 2:39 pm Title: Chapter 37: Winchester St. and Broadcast Lane

Poor Lily.  Even though it's not the first time her papa's been gone, it hit her hard.  At least Justin said the right things to help make it better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 36: Passeio Baltico and Av. Berlim

Ewan comes at a time when Justin doesn't know what to do and gives Justin answers since their sitiutations were so similar.  Shame they didn't hook up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 35: 22nd and 8th

Love Justin and Duncan.  Emmett obviously is going to miss his son.  Poor Justin wanting a family and losing someone he loves because of it. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2016 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 34: Franklin and Park

Love this look at what is going on with Justin and his family.  It just goes to show everyone has problems.  I can't help but hope that Nathan decides to take a chance with Justin.  Frankly I think that, like Brian, Nathan will be a better dad because of what he's gone through.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2016 2:11 am Title: Chapter 33: 31st and 24th

How appropriate that Nathan writes a letter to Justin after helping Lily with hers.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 32: 21st and Queens Plaza North

Brian is soooo happy.  Shame Justin isn't.  Good to see Daphne.  Great to hear that the baby momma is going to be interviewed.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 43: River and Cape Fear Drive

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

It's a delight to read a new chapter as the previous ended with a little angst.

Can't wait to read more

;-))

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 31: Rue des Normands and Rue de la Plage

First off I'm wondering why anyone would be offended.  This chapter was HOT and sweet at the same time.  Love that they are buying the house.  I can see Emmett and Drew vacationing.  There's so much room that Ben and Mikey, not to mention Lindsay and Mel could go stay.  Hell, I want to go stay too!

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