Date: May 09, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
Interesting beginning. What is it about these two that they just refuse to talk to each other.
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2016 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I loved meeting Jake! I hope you write more about him in the future. It would be nice to see his hero worship of Justin continue. And the fact he connects with Brian through fashion is awesome. Maybe he could come to Pittsburgh for a special art program at PIFA? Just throwing it out there!
Matt also gave great insight into Brian. He seemed how what I always wanted Michael to be, but never got through the show. Even strait he was a better friend to Brian than any other character.
Thanks for this story. I liked seeing a different side of Brian and Justin as they prepared for the separation.
Great original characters added in with established characters was done extremely well and believable! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2016 5:52 am Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I absolutely loved loved loved this story -didn't want it to end. I would love to revisit sometime in the future -another few epilogues would be very welcome:-)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
Great start. TAG
Date: Oct 02, 2016 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I love how you started this story.
Brian's thoughts are raw and emotionally charged. Justin is buying time before dropping the bomb.
The small details help creating the atmosphere and the coziness of their home, even if Brian would abhor this notion.
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you liked it and felt the cozy. I wrote this story 12 (!!) years ago, so it's kind of awesome to get new readers. :)
Date: Oct 02, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I love when we get inside Brian's head to hear what he's thinking...
Author's Response:
thanks!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I like it. It reads really well. Are you changing what happens? I guess this is one of the episodes I skimmed over, I did that for the Hollywood arc and the Ethan arc and the well you get the picture.
Author's Response:
Hi! This is a post 414 story that I wrote 12 years ago before S5 came out, so it becomes AU. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
So very excited to have you posting here on KD! Welcome. TAG
Author's Response:
thanks!!
Date: Oct 02, 2016 3:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
Aaaargh, for him to hear from Michael! I love this and look forward to more.
Author's Response:
I know, but it's so the way QAF would have written it, lol!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I am beside myself that you are here!
I am in for the long haul, I have read some of your stuff elsewhere and am already hooked on this one! Please, don't stop!
Saje
Author's Response:
Thanks! So glad you like!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
*Jumps up and down* I am soooooooooo excited to be able to read your stories on here, you have no idea. Actually, you probably do - or at least, you will once you read my fangirly review of chapter one LOL.
I love love love all the little details you include in your writing, such as the way they touch each other or the little looks they give each other. I'm quite a descriptive person so when I read something like this it makes me so happy.
I can't believe Justin didn't tell Brian about LA and that he had to hear it from Michael (or all people) and that Brian asked Justin to move in and he's more or less kept him waiting. It took a lot for him to strike up the courage to ask, so I can only imagine how he's feeling. Poor guy lol
Author's Response:
So glad you like! This was written 12 years ago, so it's kind of crazy that new people are being exposed to it. :)