Date: May 09, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
Finally it is out in the open. I wonder how Justin will react.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 1:55 am Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
This gives a whole new prospective on what happened.
Date: Oct 02, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
Another great chapter, ending with a short, but big question.
I guess it was "When are you leaving?".
You have a way of letting the words make us feel what is happening. It's amazing. And a lot is happening...
I love "Pat Benatar? Love is a battlefield?" for Mel & Lindsay.
What is Brian's ring tone?
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in due time. And yes, a lot is happening for both of them. :) Thank you!
Date: Oct 02, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
that last line made my breath hitch... the thought of it is killing Brian.
I don't know if this is your take on brian's pov for the canon story line or if you are gonna make me a happy cookie and make Justin stay and they just keep each other happy happy and lots of sex!!!! lol
Author's Response:
The story will switch POV's as we go and there is always lots of sex. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
It's funny, I always pictured Brian keeping the loft cold and Justin ALWAYS being freezing in there, I don't know why, but I love how you included that. It feels so canon to me lol.
Brian being worried he hurt Justin = FEELS.
I love post cancer arc stories, Brian was so vulnerable during that time, it just makes me want to squish him. But look at where he was, not being able to get it up - and then look at him now LOL.
I cannot wait for the next part. Eeep.
Author's Response:
I want to squish him too. Like big time. It's so hard to write from his POV when he's emotional because he's a very zero to sixty type of person, and I often have to step far back to get a balanced perspective on him when he's vulnerable. Thanks for the comment.