Date: Sep 13, 2017 1:18 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
This is such a great insight about Brian only allowing Justin to love him in increments, just enough to survive... 'It's a comfortable cruelty between us.'
You're such a good writer, and as someone who edits and proofreads for a living, I don't say that lightly!
Date: Sep 13, 2017 1:09 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Wow this is a really prescient scene that reminds me of the episode in season 5 where justin stays over at Ben and Michael's and Brian comes over rip roaring drunk to accuse Michael of 'infecting' Justin with his conformist assimilationist pseudo heterosexual life!
Date: May 09, 2017 6:27 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
I like the insight into what Justin is thinking through all of this.
Date: Oct 09, 2016 7:30 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Is the crisis over?
For once, Michael was correct and understanding.
Date: Oct 04, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Mikey didn't take long to shirk the blame, but I like that he comforted Justin and sympathized eventually
Date: Oct 04, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Here is some feedback. Lol
I was hoping for Michael to be blamed but he skated by. Will he be a good guy in this story?
I had a question about what Justin said. I know that he said that Brian was finally opening up to him , that he is letting Justin love him back. The part about Brian let's him love him back in increments and not all at once, that he rations it and gives you only what you need to survive. That part I don't get. Brian can't control how much Justin loves him or how much he will take. It is what it is. He can control his own love. In the show Brian never opposed Justin's love and did accept it. He just couldn't admitted his love for Justin ,to him. Brian opening up to Justin is saying that Brian is trusting him because he loves Justin. What does increments, and ration and gives you only what you need to survive mean?. How can someone ration someone else's love for them and give you only what you need to survive? I think I don't understand what Justin is saying. Can you set me straight. Lol
Author's Response:
This was a deleted scene and one written from one character's point of view. It was posted because it adds a bit to the story plot wise, but it was written 12 years ago, so I'll just let it stand as is. :) Thanks for your feedback!
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 1:45 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
URGH, that is just so typical of Michael, I just wanna punch his face.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Michael and his innocent act. So typical. There have been many a time when I wanted Mikey to be at fault and this was one of them. You give words to what happened in a wonderful way.