Date: Oct 09, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Solitaire - Brian's POV
A little introspection, a little game, a little spanking... Hot and cruel for some questions, even if it was a game.
Date: Oct 09, 2016 7:30 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Is the crisis over?
For once, Michael was correct and understanding.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: Nostalgia- - Justin’s POV
My heart is breaking for Elvis. Justin should have told him.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 1:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Rage - Brian’s POV
Going to LA was the worse thing that could have happen to them. At least Brian has more or less admitted that Justin means a lot to him.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 4: Solitaire - Brian's POV
Very interesting game. What would happen if he said no?
Date: Oct 06, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 5: Rage - Brian’s POV
Boy this is going to be one angsty ride.
Date: Oct 05, 2016 4:37 am Title: Chapter 4: Solitaire - Brian's POV
I just got caught up....very interesting and hot!
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: Solitaire - Brian's POV
Wow, the yes game was so stinking HOT. But then it ended with Brian on his own and my heart broke a little. aw :(
Date: Oct 04, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: Solitaire - Brian's POV
I like the 'yes' game, so hot, but sad ending with Brian alone
Date: Oct 04, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Mikey didn't take long to shirk the blame, but I like that he comforted Justin and sympathized eventually
Date: Oct 04, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Here is some feedback. Lol
I was hoping for Michael to be blamed but he skated by. Will he be a good guy in this story?
I had a question about what Justin said. I know that he said that Brian was finally opening up to him , that he is letting Justin love him back. The part about Brian let's him love him back in increments and not all at once, that he rations it and gives you only what you need to survive. That part I don't get. Brian can't control how much Justin loves him or how much he will take. It is what it is. He can control his own love. In the show Brian never opposed Justin's love and did accept it. He just couldn't admitted his love for Justin ,to him. Brian opening up to Justin is saying that Brian is trusting him because he loves Justin. What does increments, and ration and gives you only what you need to survive mean?. How can someone ration someone else's love for them and give you only what you need to survive? I think I don't understand what Justin is saying. Can you set me straight. Lol
Author's Response:
This was a deleted scene and one written from one character's point of view. It was posted because it adds a bit to the story plot wise, but it was written 12 years ago, so I'll just let it stand as is. :) Thanks for your feedback!
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 1:45 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
URGH, that is just so typical of Michael, I just wanna punch his face.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter: 3.1- DELETED SCENE- Pieces-Justin's POV
Michael and his innocent act. So typical. There have been many a time when I wanted Mikey to be at fault and this was one of them. You give words to what happened in a wonderful way.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3: Regret- Brian's POV
This works prefectly.
Date: Oct 03, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: Regret- Brian's POV
Why is Brian throwing up often? Where is Justin gone at night?
2 cliffhangers at once... Too bad to have to wait 1 more night.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 3: Regret- Brian's POV
HOLD ME!!!!!!! He just left??? Just like that??? My heart, it's hurting, plummy - MAKE IT STOPPPPPPPPP :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 1:55 am Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
This gives a whole new prospective on what happened.
Date: Oct 02, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
Another great chapter, ending with a short, but big question.
I guess it was "When are you leaving?".
You have a way of letting the words make us feel what is happening. It's amazing. And a lot is happening...
I love "Pat Benatar? Love is a battlefield?" for Mel & Lindsay.
What is Brian's ring tone?
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in due time. And yes, a lot is happening for both of them. :) Thank you!
Date: Oct 02, 2016 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I love how you started this story.
Brian's thoughts are raw and emotionally charged. Justin is buying time before dropping the bomb.
The small details help creating the atmosphere and the coziness of their home, even if Brian would abhor this notion.
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you liked it and felt the cozy. I wrote this story 12 (!!) years ago, so it's kind of awesome to get new readers. :)
Date: Oct 02, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
that last line made my breath hitch... the thought of it is killing Brian.
I don't know if this is your take on brian's pov for the canon story line or if you are gonna make me a happy cookie and make Justin stay and they just keep each other happy happy and lots of sex!!!! lol
Author's Response:
The story will switch POV's as we go and there is always lots of sex. :)
Date: Oct 02, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I love when we get inside Brian's head to hear what he's thinking...
Author's Response:
thanks!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: Distraction - Brian’s POV
It's funny, I always pictured Brian keeping the loft cold and Justin ALWAYS being freezing in there, I don't know why, but I love how you included that. It feels so canon to me lol.
Brian being worried he hurt Justin = FEELS.
I love post cancer arc stories, Brian was so vulnerable during that time, it just makes me want to squish him. But look at where he was, not being able to get it up - and then look at him now LOL.
I cannot wait for the next part. Eeep.
Author's Response:
I want to squish him too. Like big time. It's so hard to write from his POV when he's emotional because he's a very zero to sixty type of person, and I often have to step far back to get a balanced perspective on him when he's vulnerable. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
I like it. It reads really well. Are you changing what happens? I guess this is one of the episodes I skimmed over, I did that for the Hollywood arc and the Ethan arc and the well you get the picture.
Author's Response:
Hi! This is a post 414 story that I wrote 12 years ago before S5 came out, so it becomes AU. Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
So very excited to have you posting here on KD! Welcome. TAG
Author's Response:
thanks!!
Date: Oct 02, 2016 3:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV
Aaaargh, for him to hear from Michael! I love this and look forward to more.
Author's Response:
I know, but it's so the way QAF would have written it, lol!