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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Realization - Brian's POV

Great start. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 14-Brian/Justin's POV

Love this chapter so much! Omg Brian is the sweetest most  adorable man on a sleep aid. lol This is so touching....

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 10-Intentions-Brian's POV

I'm gonna have to read this all over again from the beginning.  Because I'm getting confushed what with so many stories being posted.  I'm enjoying each chapter even if it takes me awhile to figure out what happened earlier.  Let's see if I have this straight, pardon the pun.  Justin is going to LA.  He's having problems with garages.  Ted, Emmett and Daphne are in on the hotel thing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2016 6:06 am Title: Chapter 9-Denial-Brian's POV

That was some dream.  I'm guessing that Brian really doesn't want him to go.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2016 1:47 pm Title: Chapter 13-Intimacy-Brian's POV

the conversation while they were "making love" was beautiful... and perfectly them!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 12-Privilege-Justin's POV

Doing EVERYTHING to make Justin happy... such love!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 11-Luxury-Brian/Justin POV

Brian is so generous... the thank you gift to Em and Ted was basically new wardrobes for them??? that's awesome!

 

He is not holding back from Justin, which is great!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 4:59 am Title: Chapter 12-Privilege-Justin's POV

Excellent! So many things that make this chapter a great one.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 11-Luxury-Brian/Justin POV

Excellent! Brian and the clothes... lots to say about that.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 10-Intentions-Brian's POV

I loved the banter between Daphne and Brian; they are so uninhibited.

Too bad the main subject wasn't funny at all: poor Justin, still trying to deal with the aftermath of the bashing.

What a cliffhanger...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 9-Denial-Brian's POV

Started angsty, but the end!!! Beautiful, hot, funny, tender, emotional...

Very well done!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 10-Intentions-Brian's POV

I can't wait to find out what this big surprise is... I'm so excited for it!!!! :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 9-Denial-Brian's POV

Brian's nightmare is awful.... my heart breaks reading it... but endings like this chapter are THE BEST!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2016 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 8: Spoiled-Brian/Justin POV

That was so freaking hot! What metaphors for fucking Brian...wicked! More please!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: Nostalgia- - Justin’s POV

Emotions, love, anger, despair,... Great chapter!

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 11:48 am Title: Chapter 8: Spoiled-Brian/Justin POV

Well that's one way to get the truth out of someone.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2016 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 8: Spoiled-Brian/Justin POV

First off, do we find out why Justin hasn't been going to his doctor?  Second, what plans are Emmett working on?  Third, how sweet that Gus now has a kitten.  Reading about Brian in Pet Smart was amazing.  Catnip, because drugs don't count as a toy?  lol.  Last, poor Brian relates being fucked by Justin to drowning.  Want another chapter asap.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2016 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 8: Spoiled-Brian/Justin POV

I cannot wait for the surprises to be revealed... that closing scene was amazing... loved the analogy to the beach... hot as hell!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: Countdown-Brian's POV

I'm impatient and can't wait to see what Brian's plans for Justin are... and yes... I want him to go to LA with Justin for a while too!!!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Nostalgia- - Justin’s POV

Wow. That last scene left ME breathless never mind them lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: Rage - Brian’s POV

I like when they share their thoughts with each other. Sometimes I think they are both afraid of their thoughts so they just put on a facade. Great chapter 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 7: Countdown-Brian's POV

Our boys can never catch a break can they?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2016 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Rage - Brian’s POV

Rough chapter with emotion: I loved the scene in the bathroom stall; Brian was letting Justin know what he means to him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2016 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: Countdown-Brian's POV

So much.  Sounds like Brian is working on a picnic.  Love the dialogue between Brian and Ted.  Too adorable.  I really need to rewatch this storyline.  Is Brian getting the manor house?  Ok, where does the hospital play into it?  Great chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2016 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: Nostalgia- - Justin’s POV

Justin should have told him.  Now everyone knows, even Brian, but not from Justin.  Nothings going right.  Brian even gets Emmett to help Justin get the things he's going to need.  Of course the main problem is the ring tone and which one to use. 

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