Date: Feb 20, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 24 - PC Panic.
I'm glad Brian decided to stay with Justin. It will go a long way towards trusting Brian.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Thanks for this amazing story. One would think that with the
rescue of Justin, the story would have een. But nooooo. I needed
more. I wanted those cruel jerks to suffer and suffer badly for
what they had done. I am not a nasty person, but though I tried
to ignore it, I couldn’t help but see the parallel in the ‘real world’. It made some of the horror doubly horrible.
DavidR
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 23 - PC Therapy.
I loved your playful Brian. Why would it be difficult for those two to be in love though? It doesn't really matter what happens behind closed doors, does it?
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
This was fabulous! Amazing ending, appropriate & sweet. Glad everyone got what they deserved, loved Rex & Luke's photos! Looking forward to your next piece. You always have my vote Tag!
Date: Feb 20, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Intrigue and Intimacy.
I wonder how long it will take Brian to figure out why Justin is pissed.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 21 - PC Speech.
I knew Gus would get to him and Justin was able to talk to Brian. It's a start.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 20 - PC Craziness.
Poor Justin. He is so confused. Maybe if he listened to his heart instead of his head? But I know that's really hard to do.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Hi Tag! Most excellent ending. All got what was coming to them, for those that needed it. Rex & Luke aka Lucious (can I just say WOW!) came out of this amazingly well. glad for them.
and of course, yay, yay, yay, for B&J! J had his tattoo removed. I have to say, that part caused a lump in my throat. what a truly emotional time for him.
Lindsey, well what a c-word she is. You'd think after turning herself in, after everything she's put everyone through she'd have some sense of remorse. Nope, not her. Still thinks she teh queen B. I guess she is. Queen bitch that is. ;)
I'll admit to skimming over many parts in this, just to avoid the more violent aspects. That's just me though. I have a low squick factor. lol. I loved how you always develop your characters so beautifully. doesn't matter if they are friend or foe, I always have a good idea of who they are, what they're about. The foe's really give me the ick feeling, or anger, frustration etc, the friends give me a sense of warmth. That's a gift. being able to make the reader FEEL when they're reading. Granted, there were time I felt a bit too much during some of the hotter scenes if you catch my drift. lol.
Nicely doen and well put together. great endind and all tied up beautifully.
Looking froward to your next projuect whatever or when ever that may be.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Feb 20, 2017 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 19 - PC Adjustments.
I loved the shower scene. It seems appropriate to Justin's behavior beforehand.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 18 - The Aftermath.
Seductive? I don't think that is what Brian is going for at the moment.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 17 - After Dinner.
Thank god Brian managed to get there in time.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 16 - PC Dining.
You did a great job. I hate them too.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 15 - PC Preparations.
I didn't think there would be so many people. It's going to be bad. I can feel it.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 3:32 pm Title: Chapter 14 - PC Controversies.
Is somebody listening to the doctors office?
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 13 - PC Musings.
I like that Justin is getting more comfortable with Brian. It's the first step to trusting him.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Fed Up Being PC.
I like angst. But not too much please.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 11 - All About Your New PC.
I'm really scared of what might happen at this dinner. Are those people allowed to touch Justin without Brian's consent?
Date: Feb 20, 2017 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Casserole Chats.
I like the way the story is going right now. I hope after the creepy part will come something good.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
The food will probably only last two days.
Vance is an ass. He would have been just as mad if Brian didn't get the account.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 8 - PC Problems.
Lindsay's reaction was extreme. I hope she will come around for everybody's sakes.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Hurt and Comfort.
The baby is born? Maybe it will help Justin to open up. It is innocent and not dangerous at all.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 10:44 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
Maybe the not speaking thing has something to do with the bashing? Like his father telling him not to talk until he is "normal" or some stuff like that.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 5 - Meet The PC
It's great that his friends are so helpful.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 10:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - Homecoming.
Drunk Brian is hilarious. He will have one hell of a hangover when he wakes up.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 10:07 am Title: Chapter 3 - Sale of The Century.
I hope he can come up with the rest of the money. But how is he going to take care of him? Justin probably knows more about it than Brian.