Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:44 am Title: Chapter 2 - Far From Fair.
Nooo Brian. You can't just leave.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:23 am Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Interesting concept.
I hope Brian will come up with some kind of idea to help Justin.
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:01 am Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
I sure am going to miss this story, it has been a rollercoaster ride of emotion - fear and anger, sadness and hope, and finally happiness and love. It's been an interesting and thrilling read. Thank you🙂
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:04 am Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Absolutely one of my favorites sometimes it got to the point where I was afraid to read the next chapters because I was afraid of what they were going to do to Justin. Also glad everything worked out for the other PC's
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
What an Awesome ride that was TAG!! I went from, thrilled, happy, horrified, sad, laughing, crying, reading through my fingers covering my face to yelling at the screen to being happy again lol a whole gamut of emotions!
You did a fantastic job if tying up all the loose ends. Rex and Luke also getting and happy ending was great. And the topping on the cake is that the PC laws are being changed and hopefully in the end they will abolish it all together.
You pushed the limits and that made it suspenseful, but never went over the limit IMHO.
Thanks so much for the entertainment!
Lisa :)
Date: Feb 19, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Great ending!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hope I didn't miss any loose ends! Thanks for reading! TAG
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Absolutely PERFECT ending! Everyone got exactly what they deserved. I hope they all get their asses kicked at some point in jail and that Sapperstein is receiving the business in of the devil's pitchfork in hell....LOL yeah, I'm still a bit salty with their asses but I have a plan for that within my own work *evil grinning and rubbing hands*
Such an amazing story Tag!!! Looking forward to more of your work!
HUGS and LOVE,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Thanks, Chelle. You've always been one of my biggest supporters and best reviewers, and I thank you for that. I'm with you on the fantasy of just how the bad guys are fairing in prison/hell. hehehe. Looking forward to seeing how you are going to deal with it. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Oh, and before I forget, please have a Mimosa (or two) to celebrate the end of an other story! It's so deserved!
Author's Response:
Thanks! You should have one too and we'll toast the story together! Cheers! TAG
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Thank you for this amazing, hot, haunting, sometimes disturbing story! Although it's a fiction, it rings a bell about the past and unfortunately the present.
Author's Response:
Thank you. That was exactly why I was writing it - it felt like something that had some relevance for everyone today. Even though it was fictional. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and for all your wonderful comments. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Ah! Merci Belle Histoire J'ai falli avoir une crise cadiaque sur le chemin mais tout est bien qui finit bien C'était très original ! Bravo
Author's Response:
Merci beaucoup! Je suis désolé de vous avoir presque fait une crise cardiaque. Heureux que vous ayez pu rester en vie et lire jusqu'à la fin. TAG
Date: Feb 19, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 54 - PC Epilogue.
Aggrrr a story with 54 chapters is way too short. Love this so much, I do want to read more. Please. Great story.
* hugs *
Author's Response:
LOL! I thought I was being overly wordy again - I had planned to write this one in less than 250k words but didn't quite make it. I'll try to write a longer story next time for you. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Feb 19, 2017 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 53 - PC Sunshine Arrives.
That scumbag dared attack Justin once more! Way to go Rex!!! Michael is finally getting rid David. Nice to see you won't end the story here. We need to know what will happen to the bad guys and girls. I hope you humiliate them publicly.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 53 - PC Sunshine Arrives.
YAY!!! Justin's back to speaking again. And what a way to do so! His history with Hobbs and the others really tore at my heart. Unfortunately, being 'too pretty' is the plight of too many people who are the victims of sexually-motivated crimes and the ready-made excuse for the perpetrators who are in reality psychopatic bullies and sociopaths. No one should have to be abused because of their genepool or the fact that they are powerful in their own rights. Justin standing up to Sapperstein and David took his power back. I am so proud of him and of you for addressing this issue head-on, intentionally done or not. It's such an important message sent to the survivors of such crimes! Justin is no longer a victim but a VICTOR and they can be too!
Rex is my hero!! I was a little worried when he left the restroom but he did what he had to do to help Justin. Michael was, for once, acknowledging what he was seeing. I actually felt a little sorry for him having to find out that he was dating such a sneaky slimeball in that manner. The only thing that good-for-nothing FPOS did was help Justin find his courage and his voice. I'm glad that there wasn't any way for Douchebag Dave was able to wheedle himself out of his misdeeds...ANY of them!
Looking forward to the wrap-up and looking forward to reading this again and again!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:01 am Title: Chapter 53 - PC Sunshine Arrives.
Love that Emmett wanted a karaoke partner in Luke! So cute! Poor Rex, trying to be brave for Justin against Dr. Douche. Glad he's gone!
Between Brian & Ted, their going to make history for PC's! You go boys!
Date: Feb 18, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
I love the interaction between Cynthia and Brian: they so get each other, and work so well together!
The poor PCs are completely lost in the "odd" environment: love, food, hot shower, no barking orders and humiliating behaviours.
I just hope they won't have to go back to any of this.
Date: Feb 18, 2017 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 51 - PC Repercussions.
This great!!! Carl and Cynthia to the rescue. Brian has Justin back and they will be able to face together what is coming.
They also have to take care of Rex and Luke.
Date: Feb 18, 2017 1:49 am Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
Oh this is pure gold sweetie....pure gold!
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2017 12:32 am Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
No need to be sorry TAG. It was Great to see Brian and Justin through Rex's eyes and also to here his story. My heart goes out to both Luke and Rex and all the PC's. I hope they get the best in life because they deserve it! I also hope that out of this situation that there are laws passed, and monitored, that will better serve and protect the PC's or get rid of the program all together and come up with something better for people to pay their debts.
Lisa
Date: Feb 17, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
Poor darlings. Rex and Luke broke my heart. I really hope they are truly going to be free! Rex's story was truly sad... but on the upside, I'm so happy that haphazard plan paid off. Maybe Brian will give them both jobs and that way they will never have to worry about being mistreated again.
As for Lindsay, I don't trust her. She'll try to come off looking like the victim in all this when she was anything but. I hope Mel won't let her get away with that shuck-and-jive! Bitchzilla knew exactly what she was doing!
Great Chapter!!
Love ya!
~Chelle
Date: Feb 17, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
Poor Luke and Rex I feel so bad for them, they're so cute though. Justin is so sweet with them. I hope they can get better lives now.
Date: Feb 17, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 52 - The Surreal PC
I really hope these two get some kind of justice.
Date: Feb 17, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 51 - PC Repercussions.
Relieved that they all made it out of Sapp's lair! Now comes the real FUN- well for us readers anyway. I wonder who they will start toppling the house of cards with.... Hmm I vote for Lindsay and Craswell. The former will fold under the pressure and will definitely look for a deal. But I think she still deserves to be Big Mama and Bertha's Bitch for the part she played in all of this.
Will Justin talk now and tell all? I certainly hope so! His testimony alone will put several people away beginning with Craig and expose Stockwell's relation to Chris Hobbs. And to think, Amanda Hobbs gloating at the Lapointe dinner about her son and the strings Stockwell pulled for him, especially the out of court settlement. WHOO-WEE I hope that conversation comes back to bite them all in the ass HARD!
Looking forward to MORE!
WRITE On TAG,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 51 - PC Repercussions.
Wow!! I am so thrilled that not only Brian and Justin made it out of there, but they also rescued Luke, Rex and the rest of the PC's.
I cannot wait to see what happens with Bellweather, Stockwell, Lindsay and the custody stuff! Hopefully with all the losz ends this story will still last a while longer? *wink* *wink*, right? LOL
Thanks for another Great chaper TAG!
Lisa
Date: Feb 17, 2017 11:12 am Title: Chapter 51 - PC Repercussions.
Wow, they're saved. I hope they can fix this system because poor Justin, Luke and Rex deserve a life. Bellwether deserves some alone time with some mean prison peeps. Craig too.
Date: Feb 17, 2017 7:09 am Title: Chapter 51 - PC Repercussions.
Oh so happy.