Date: Feb 14, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Getting to the PC Gist of It.
I think I will hide the Mimosas once more... he he he, evil reader can strike too!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha! You really ARE evil! I guess I deserved it though. If I hurry with the next chapter can I have my mimosas back? TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sale of The Century.
Now Brian just has to come up with the purchase price. You don't make things easy.
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2017 5:47 am Title: Chapter 2 - Far From Fair.
This was a hard chapter to read,
Date: Feb 14, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
Just read the last two chapters. Horvath really is digging up the ants on this one!! Stockwell is as corrupt as they come and I can't wait until he's completely exposed. I'm also looking forward to Craswell's downfall. I wonder what Sydney is going to do now that he's heard all- go to Brian or try to contact someone within the Pitts PD, which has some of Stockwell's snakes in there. I vote for going to Brian, especially since Cunty Craswell inadvertently mentioned Stockwell's contacts in the PCRA.
Poor Justin and Rex!!!! To be left to the mercies of bastard Bellweather and Scuzzy Sapperstein is just so.... sooo.....UGH!!!!! Hopefully Rex will make good use of that phone. Pictures, 911 calls, recording conversations and tortures- the possibilities are endless and all of it will work to send all of them to a cellblock wedding of their very own- especially Craig’s conniving cruel ass! I wonder if his current wife knows about what he's done to Justin because of his bigotry and for personal gain. Furthermore I hope all of the crap they did to protect that shithead Hobbs backfires all the way through to Amanda Hobbs too (Oh don't even think I've forgotten about her). Which brings the question, are they going to be able to really investigate Justin’s personal history prior to becoming a PC since they are looking to get the contract invalidated?
Looking forward to more!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Feb 14, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
OMG. Poor Rex. I hope they all get what they deserve.
Date: Feb 13, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
The tension is high... Carl is getting closer and Rex might have kïng of a key to be saved...
Can't wait for the bastards to pay for what they have done, even if won't ever be enough!
Date: Feb 13, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
I'm trying to hang on Tag....I promise I really am. I hope those fuckers get caught soon.
Author's Response:
I know I'm taxing your abilities to the max here. We are getting sooooooo close to the turning point. Really. I PROMISE. And just wait till you see what I've got planned for the bad guys . . . Thanks for hanging in there. TAG
Date: Feb 13, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
OMG. Poor Rex. I hope they all get what they deserve.
Date: Feb 13, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 47 - PC Investigations.
No I don't love all the tension...I want happiness & rainbows lol That is, after Bedwetter, the sap, Jimmy boy & scumbag, I mean Craswell...suffer and suffer a lot.
Author's Response:
Did I mention I dreamed up a new ending last night - It involves at least one of those you mentioned paying the ultimate price for his actions . . . *dum dum dummmmm* TAG
Date: Feb 13, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
At least, Carl is progressing. He's a very smart and intuitive cop.
Author's Response:
Yep. He is. And he's getting closer to the truth . . . Read on and you'll see. TAG
Date: Feb 13, 2017 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
Hi TAG,
It was hard to read the torture, but understanding it is needed for the story. I am glad it was a small part though! I am happy to see that Brian and Cynthia are making progress! They are an unstoppable team while working together.
I loved how Horvath toyed with Craig lol He is so easy to get a rise out of. Bastard. I am really looking forward to how you make them all pay. The thought a certain body part of Sap's getting any where near Justin makes me want to gag. Cannot wait for more.
Lisa
Date: Feb 13, 2017 2:59 am Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
Please tell me the Sap gets his before this is all over.
Date: Feb 13, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
Oh my goodness, all these torture scenes do really hurt but I know there necessary. So glad the next few chapters are going to be a bit of a reprieve...
Date: Feb 12, 2017 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
OMG!!! Find him!!! Please!!!!!😩😩😩😩😩
Date: Feb 12, 2017 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
Hope they find Justin really soon, before something more terrible will happen. Aggrrr .. update asap.
* hugs *
Date: Feb 11, 2017 5:35 am Title: Chapter 45 - PC Lost.
Thanks for this amazing chapter. I felt somewhat relieved that half the chapter had to do with Horvath and trying to find Justin. I needed a little respite from the horror and cruelty facing the PCs. I am so glad that Justin has a cell mate, Lukas. Also, I would like to put in a good word for Rex. After all that has happened to him, he still seems ok. Although I have to wonder for how long?
It will be interesting to see where we go from here. Will they be able to find Justin using that internal GPS? I don’t see that happening as it seems too easy. But could be? Maybe Lukas could do something. Maybe? Does Lindsay know? I doubt it. Well – I am looking forward to the next chapter as I am loaded with so many questions.
DavidR
Date: Feb 10, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 45 - PC Lost.
Another Great chapter TAG!
Lindsay should of kept her mouth shut lol She is really digging herself into a bigger hole. And it will be funny to see her reaction, when the PC she call's a gold digging whore is helping Brian raise her child lol
Between Luke's Bronze, and Justin's brain's (hopefully they will meet up with Rex) and come up with a plan to get themselves out of there. You are the master and I know you will make it all work out in the end.
Lisa
Date: Feb 10, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 45 - PC Lost.
Argh...!!! Carl didn't get lots of info, except that Lindsey was lying. Mel wasn't more successful.
I'll have to go back to find where Luke was.
Thank you for the update.
Date: Feb 08, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
My vote is to LET HER FRY!!!
She has no regards for Justin, and Brian needs to get Gus away from her.
Author's Response:
I hear and obey! LOL. TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
Feeling so heartbroken for Brian, Justin and Cynthia. Hopefully Horvath will be able to get through some of the Bureaucratic red tape he'll probably encounter dealing with Bellweather and Stockwell. No way either of those bastards should be let off the hook by using a scapegoat which in this case is Lindsay, Craswell and the Thugs.
As for whether to let that guttersnipe off the hook I say NO!! I still think her ass deserves jail time on conspiracy to kidnapping charges. But I also think that she should plead guilty and get a reduced sentence in exchange for turning state's evidence against Bellweather, Craswell and Stockwell. Stockwell as a Senator should be brought up on both State and Federal charges since he's abusing his power on both levels and Lapointe and Vance should be brought into this too since they aided Stockwell and Bellweather to cause Brian to lose his job. Also please don't think I've forgotten about Craig's cunty ass throughout this whole mess. LAWD HAM TURKEY!!!! I just want all of their corrupt asses to go down hard and fast!! Raggedy Rat Bastards all of them!
HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Your opinion about Lindsey seems to be the consensus of the majority, so down she'll go. I'm working on it now. Thanks for the guidance. Now, off to my evil author machinations. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
Your are so amping up the tension, I have trouble waiting patiently for the next posting. Please do throw everything you can think of at Lindsay -no punishment too big in my opinion. I would love her to suffer as Justin has suffered. She should get a taste of being a PC herself and no mercy. Her vicious self cannot be redeemed.
Author's Response:
Yep. I'm having fun with the tension thing. Like all Evil Authors, I'm having fun reading all the angry reviews too. LOL. Now, off to figure out how to take Lindsey down . . . TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
I am usually all for redemption, but Lindsay has been nasty throughout this story. Even though she did not expect what happened to be so severe she still opened up Brian's door and invited this BS into his home. All because of her petty jealousy Justin is in serious danger. She deserves to be banished from Brian's life.
Lisa
Author's Response:
Okay - so Lindz is gonna get what's coming to her. Just gotta write it now. Thanks for weighing it. And thanks for reading too. TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
Poor Brian. I am so glad you updated so soon. Lindsay deserves the same treatment.
Author's Response:
I'm with on you the 'Poor Brian'. And it looks like everyone agrees about Lindsey. Off to write her demise . . . Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
Let that bitch go to the wolves...there is no redemption for her actions.
Author's Response:
You got it, Babe! TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
It is necessary to throw the dogs and suffered a long and slow, such as to be just short of the PC. Some grasp and understand.
Author's Response:
Long. slow torture it is, then. LOL. Off to go write Lindsey's demise. Thanks for reading. TAG