[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 12:18 am Title: Chapter 36 - It’s All About Trust.
Dr. Ruby is one EVIL, but amazing doctor, I love her. This was EXACTLY how I had pictured it in my mind. I wish I could have seen Brian's face when he realised he'd been scammed LOL
Author's Response:
It worked really well. Good call on that wily plot device. Thanks for helping me slog through this part. TAG
Date: Jan 16, 2017 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 36 - It’s All About Trust.
Wow.... I was about ready to slap the good doctor into next week.
Author's Response:
Gotcha! LOL! She's evil but effective. TAG
Date: Jan 16, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 36 - It’s All About Trust.
Great chapter! The tension is slowly built and Justin is forced to face some truth.
Author's Response:
Yep. Now that Justin's willing to trust Brian, nobody can stop them, right? . . . (evil author laughing in the background - just ignore her) TAG
Date: Jan 16, 2017 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 36 - It’s All About Trust.
What an AWESOME chapter Tag! I love how Dr. Ruby got Justin to get out of his shell! It was hard, but it needed to be done! Justins' protective nature, as well as wanting to stay with Brian really drew him out! I am so excited for more!
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lisa. Our Dr. Ruby certainly is crafty. Now, we just have to get Brian to admit how much he already loves Justin too and everything will be HEA, right? LOL! TAG
Date: Jan 09, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 35 - PC Tricking and Jealousy.
Way to go Tag! I'm loving this more and more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Trying to get back on a good writing schedule now that the holidays are over. . . Thanks for reading! TAG
Date: Jan 08, 2017 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 35 - PC Tricking and Jealousy.
OMG! So wanted to punch Dr Dave out! He is horrible! Brian had better warn Michael about that scumbag!
Author's Response:
This Dr. Dave is definitely dastardly! Lol! Punch away! TAG
Date: Dec 15, 2016 12:37 am Title: Chapter 34 - Nobody and Nothing.
I really hope all that is involved, ei. Craig,Stockwell,Bellweather all pay dearly. I hope you bring down them as well as the establishment! Bunch of *#!!@**!! lol
Great job pouring on the angst, Tag!
Date: Dec 15, 2016 12:34 am Title: Chapter 34 - Nobody and Nothing.
I'm sure it's going to get more angsty before it gets better but...poor Sunshine! He needs more loving from Brian. I do hope the sun comes out for you Tag...we need passion and intimacy babe!
Date: Dec 14, 2016 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Nobody and Nothing.
Thank goodness that Cynthia has decided to be pro-active in protecting Brian and Justin's interests after hearing that spineless scuzzbucket Lapointe summoning Vance. It's clear from the foreshadowing during the last chapter featuring Satan's Twin Brother Stockwell, that he's going to obey and have Vance sack Brian. Definitely a perfect idea to start his own company but not the most fortuitous timing. But then again life rarely presents situations where you don't have to close your eyes, jump on with both feet and hope you don't drown in the tide. Yeah I'm a cynic which we've established awhile ago.
But back to the review: I felt so bad for Justin. My heart actually ached reading of the emotional, mental and physical abuse he suffered because his father is a homophobic idiot with powerful fairweather friends. Perhaps the meeting with B&O's VP will yield aome serious results- like paying Justin's contract off- and provide some opportunities to proceed with litigation against all involved in making Justin a PC to suit their own ends. If that happens the first and second orders of business is that Hobbs should be brought up on formal charges aince I imagine the statute of Limitations would allow for auch an action. Plus there's no SOL on murder so it would stand to reason there's none on Attempt Murder either. The second should be Craig having to answer an enforced prostitution charge especially since Justin was incapable of making the decision to enter into the PC world on his own. He traded his son for status and NOT because he lacked the money to pay the hospital bill but because of a political viewpoint and an alliance with a Senator. WHAT AN ASSHOLE <in my Ted voice>. Great work as always Tag!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Dec 05, 2016 7:48 am Title: Chapter 33 - All That PC Plot Stuff.
Thanks for the update, at least there wan,t any scary PC stuff.
Author's Response:
Nope. The scary stuff is in Chapter 34 . . . *author runs and hides before you have time to read it* TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 31 - PC Sunshine.
This chapter started off making me so happy, Justin was just so excited to FINALLY feel loved and adored by someone. I can only imagine how that must have made him feel, and I loved Brian's little teasing gestures, he totes finds Justin adorable ;) He can lie all he wants, but we know it's true LOL.
When Justin didn't want Brian to go, I just wanted to cuddle him. He has lost all confidence in people and even though he knows Brian will be back, his brain is probably telling him otherwise.
And THEN URGH, Lindsay, she is the dirty piece of trash in this. She is a close minded BITCH. She knows of Justin's background, a little of it anyway, and yet she still thinks he's a little whore, well screw her.
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 31 - PC Sunshine.
These are the times I want to punch Lindz! Jesus what a bitch! Yes poor Sunshine....he's in love with Brian....awwwwwww
Author's Response:
Justin is in love, but he still doesn't trust it. It's going to take a lot to get him to believe that this is real. Let's hope Brian's up to the challenge. And, yeah, Lindsey is a great foil for my bad guys in this story. LOL. TAG
Date: Nov 14, 2016 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Investigations and Manipulations.
I'm almost afraid of where you're about to take us....
Author's Response:
Be afraid. Be very afraid . . . LOL. TAG
Date: Nov 14, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 31 - PC Sunshine.
I'm starting to wonder what Lindsay's real problem is regarding PC's. Could it be that she is actually the product of said situation? Or maybe she has siblings as a result of these circumstances.
Date: Nov 13, 2016 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 30 - How to Deflower Your PC 101.
Hiya T.A,
Started rereading this one from the beginnig and what an amazing way to spend a dreary sunday.
I love the way this story unfolds. The way you alternate the chapters in points of view is really good. Now we get to see what Justin is actually feeling and thinking.
Poor Justin to end up this way and lucky Justin to end up with Brian. Yay to Brian to stand up for Justin and taking him on and not letting those disgusting perverts get to our Sunshine.
The build up to this chapter was so well done. To see Justin slowly crawl out of his shell is so moving and so well written.
*smut alert* for this chapter well given! This was piping hot and very moving. Loved Justins point of view in this chapter.
Let's leave our boys to bask in the afterglow and no doubt the morning will bring even more lovemaking for that was what this was. The tenderness and caring way Brian lead his PC into it was deeply moving.
Now that Brian has iniated Justin into the pleasures of gay sex no doubt Justin will want more. Let's hope they can enjoy each other for quite a while for I think that nasty bottomfeeder Bellweather hasn't given up hope to get to Justin. I forsee Howie hatching out all kinds of plans to get his hands on his so hotly desired blond.
This story is so different from the previous stories. It reminds me a lot of Smoldering in the way Justin has been damaged to such a massive degree. Once again you wrote a Brian I really love. A caring, warm and loving Brian. A Brian who deep down is lonely and wants to be loved and taken care of as well. A Brain who is able to get a damaged teen to trust him and find himself again.
Thank you for another marvelous story.
Looking forward to more updates.
XOXO
Soirsa
Date: Nov 13, 2016 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 30 - How to Deflower Your PC 101.
Well Jesus Tag, if you waited any longer to give us some real sex...we'd be all dried up and dead...ooops did I really write that? lol Thanks for the sex Tag...you need a cigarette hun?
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2016 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
For odd reasons, such stories attract me... I won't even try understandng why. hehe But hey, you're writing it, so we must be the same kind of crazy.
Looking forward to read how this story unfolds.
Date: Nov 13, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 30 - How to Deflower Your PC 101.
It was definitely worth it. Now where the hell is that other shoe? Lol
Date: Nov 12, 2016 12:24 am Title: Chapter 29 - PC Feelings.
Woohoo! Give that boy all your charm & expertise Brian! The next chapter will be hot hot hot!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2016 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 29 - PC Feelings.
OH MY!!!!!!! I am so proud of how far Justin has come in just a few short weeks. Brian definitely helped relax the boy tonight, didn't he? Brian will take care of his Sunshine, that's for sure. I can't wait for the next part now :D I want Justin to feel loved and desired and I really think he'll start to feel that soon. To know it's not an act and that he can trust Brian :)
Date: Nov 11, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 29 - PC Feelings.
You awful tease
Author's Response:
IKR! LOL. Never fear, I'm already working on the fixit in the next chapter. TAG
Date: Nov 11, 2016 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 29 - PC Feelings.
Thank you for the distraction!! Hopefully his paintings go for a ton of money to help pay off his bid.
WRITE ON!!!
Sandy
Date: Nov 11, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The PC Artist.
Sending many positive thoughts from Europe! It won't be easy for us either...
Thank you for the update; this is a key chapter for Justin.
Date: Nov 11, 2016 12:19 am Title: Chapter 28 - The PC Artist.
Thank you for this, I know how hard this is right now ;)
Author's Response:
It's hard for everyone, I know. But I'm trying to do my part to carry on. I spent yesterday mourning the losses, because they are many, but today I'm going to return to celebrating what we still do have and value. Love will win in the end. Thanks for reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2016 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 28 - The PC Artist.
Of course, Sidney was blown away by Justin's artwork - HE'S AMAZING. And as I read this I felt really proud of how far our little Justin has come in such a short space of time. And it was so cute how he wanted to just go home and paint. It's like he's FINALLY starting to feel like Justin again. Even if it's for a small amount of time.