Date: Oct 13, 2016 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 11 - All About Your New PC.
Plot is very important, you do what you got to do Tag! Extremely interesting chapter, although I can't help but be wicked nervous about that dinner party the boys have to go to...yikes!
Do you think you could give us an eta on when Justin will start speaking?
Author's Response:
Um . . . No talking until at least Chapter 18, I think. LOL. I know, this is crazy, but that's how its writing. Keep in mind though, that Chapter 18 is still only a week into this story's timeline, so it's really not that long. It just feels like a long time. TAG
PS - Be very worried about that dinner party . . .
Date: Oct 13, 2016 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Sale of The Century.
Wow, my head is swimming. Glad Cynthia at least sees that Brian did it to save Justin
Date: Oct 13, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Far From Fair.
Omg, I'm so glad Cynthia came to the rescue!
Author's Response:
I was really looking for a good platform to write Cynthia, and I think this story is it. I'm with you: Go, Cynthia! TAG
Date: Oct 13, 2016 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Ok, so I'm starting this one.... I can already feel their connection, so write quickly.... Pretty please â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Got ya! TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2016 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Casserole Chats.
I'm really enjoying this story, and the bending of canon to fit the PC plot. Debbie with her casseroles is pretty entertaining, and Justin seems to have remembered his real name. The bed and shower scene was very hot. Justin can't resist at least watching Brian. Those PC rules are pretty crazy on what they can and can't do. I'm looking forward to more chapters! ðŸ˜
Date: Oct 12, 2016 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Meet The PC
I love the way you make the gang interact at the loft and also Brian the morning after his drunken circus.
The usual "don't call me Honeycutt", Michael not as usual at all, which is interesting and the reliable Ted for the accounting.
Poor J who is completely lost with his temporary name.
Date: Oct 12, 2016 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Casserole Chats.
That was awesome! I think Justin needs to get stoned with Brian more often...to chill out and maybe he'd speak to him finally. Really enjoyed the playful times between the boys and Deb is always good for a laugh! lol
When Cynthia gets Justin's medical records, I bet their going to be horrified. I can't wait for Justin to get checked out at a doctor's office.
More please!
Date: Oct 12, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
That was a very close call, Justin really does need to start using that lovely voice soon.
Date: Oct 11, 2016 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
Love it Keep it coming sweetie :)
Date: Oct 11, 2016 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
Of course he's brilliant and a talented artist, can't wait to see what else he does! So on to a little home training in computers & office equipment. He'll be a star!
Love Cynthia so much! You go girl!
Loving this fic! Well done!
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
J sitting on Brian's knee to buy groceries made me go all squishy inside :)
Date: Oct 11, 2016 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
I like the slow burn of this story and it is being told in a very realistic way. When most people are under this type of control, they are often told that nobody wants to hear what they have to say or that they are too dumb to think for themselves. Gary has probably trained Justin to "not think" and to just do as he is told or there will be pain attached as a consequence. Justin doesn’t trust Brian not to hurt him yet so I think that maybe once he realizes what Brian has really done, he will start to open up.
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 8 - PC Problems.
It's funny how subconsciously, Justin feels comfortable enough around Brian when he's asleep, it's like his brain knows he needs that contact... but when he's awake, the part of his brain that is all "NO, DON'T LET ANYONE TOUCH YOU..." wins :(
Lindsey makes me sick, she is such a judgemental little cow - and how dare she threaten Brian with not being able to see Gus because of this. I hate her.
I hope he can get our boy talking soon :(
Date: Oct 10, 2016 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 - PC Problems.
Why you little tease! Thanks a lot...but poor J. Since he obviously needs a little or a lot of deprograming...is therapy in order...once he starts talking of course?
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Hurt and Comfort.
I wanted to jump through my computer screen and snuggle poor J in the grocery store. That whole experience must have been so overwhelming for him.
Is it weird how much I love that Brian is talking and opening up more in this because he can? Because J isn't talking so B feels almost safer saying things?
The way J's body just seized up at mention of bed just breaks my heart. He is just so broken. I just hope that Brian can fix him.
This is a great new take on Brian becoming a father and having to take care of Justin somehow.
Loving this... and I feel like that is an understatement lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Hurt and Comfort.
This is certainly a different take on the bashing, and how Brian has to caretake Justin, with it at the same time that Gus is born. It's exhausting just reading about it. I like that Brian is talking more because J isn't saying anything. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! You've hooked me again on one of your stories, Lol. Great job, as usual! :)
Date: Oct 09, 2016 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
I love your writing!!! Thanks for sharing your gift!! I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 5:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
This story is quite different than the norm but still interesting. I had mixed emotions about the types of PC's they were. I'd like to see how this is going to progress. As far as the way Justin is acting I think this is his way of showing he has some control over the situation he's in.
Author's Response:
Bingo! We have a winner in the 'Analyze Justin's Silence' contest! You just so get me! Glad you're enjoying this story so far! TAG
Date: Oct 09, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
As per usual excellent chapter. Silent Justin is interesting is it something to do with his father and the bashing?
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 2:46 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
Excellent and hilarious chapter! Brian is discovering that he has to give orders for everything to J327, LOL. I *loved* Debbie's comment, that Brian skipped dating and boyfriends and got himself a husband!! hahahaha!!! I guess he did. :D As far as J not speaking, maybe Brian has to order him to speak? Or perhaps he was ordered to never speak because as Justin, he does tend to babble a bit. :) Can't wait till the next chapter. I'm hooked!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
I think because those asswipes told him not to speak without permission, it's been drilled into his brain, and it's not something that he can easily snap out of. I can only imagine the punishments he received for not doing what he was told while in their care.
I don't think it's even fear stopping him from talking anymore - so much damage has already been done to him...the boy has essentially been brainwashed into thinking he cannot do anything unless he's told. When you're told something enough, it's very easy to start believing that's the only way.
You know what broke my heart? When they were in the diner and Brian told J to eat his food, and Justin would have gone on eating until he threw up if B hadn't had stopped him. It's like everything he's told he takes literally - which again, would make sense after what he's been through.
Thank goodness B has Cynthia. Can you imagine the mess he'd be in without her?
Bless Brian and his grocery store phobia.
I hope B gets through to him soon, or at least that J starts to feel safe around him.
Date: Oct 09, 2016 12:03 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
Loved it! Brian is going to have to continue with a lot of 'standing orders', so he doesn't have to keep repeating himself. That should be fun!
I think shithead & asswipe probably told Justin not to speak so it took away more control or sense of self from him. Maybe he needs to give him permission to speak. Heartbreaking...can't wait until Brian finds out his name.
Date: Oct 08, 2016 9:21 am Title: Chapter 4 - Homecoming.
Loved how you ended this chapter. J327 having some peace and not so freaked about his new owner.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2016 4:50 am Title: Chapter 5 - Meet The PC
I'm loving this crazy, f*cked up story and especially Brian's lovely altruistic heart. His friends are pretty awesome too. Poor J327, I hope he will loosen up a bit soon. I have to say, though, Brian's drunken rambling and (temporarily) sort of naming his PC "Fuck" was kind of hilarious, and J responding like it was his official name made me smile and cringe at the same time. An OOC Mikey, all sweet and no queening out, mostly, is a good thing. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 4 - Homecoming.
My heart breaks for Justin, but know that he is in good hands with Brian, but how will Brian get through this? Lol, he's adorable even when drunk, and Justin's reaction is pretty funny. :)