[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
This is only the first chapter and I am already hooked. This is so completely different from anything else you have written - yet it still totally has the Tag feel to it, does that make sense?
I can't believe J327's father contracted him out like that. Did Craig know what he was getting his son into or did he not care and just want his debt paid off? It doesn't surprise me that he did it, Craig is a bastard.
You know what part broke my heart? When Sap said that no one buys a PC for their fucking brains... they're just an item on a shelf for him, you know?
I cannot wait to see what happens next (although I have read everything you have written and omg it's so good). Soooo excited to have something new from you to read :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sally! I'm glad you're enjoying it even though it's a bit different from my usual. I like to stretch my literary wings a bit every so often, so I figured, WTF, let's go for some politically motivated dis-utopian fantasy stuff. If it works out the way I plan, you'll probably be seeing a lot more of those pointed dialog lines like the one you mentioned from Sapp. This should be very cutting and hopefully will deal with some of the issues we see even today, like rampant Capitalism, prejudice, and harsher and harsher class based societal issues .. . all wrapped up in a sexy Brian and Justin story to make it palatable. Wish me luck that I can pull it off. Happy reading. TAG