Date: Oct 19, 2016 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 45
I so LOVE Daphne! I think if I was her, I would have the same suspension of disbelief but it's great to know that no matter what, she's on their side.
Ben....Ben, Ben... BEN!!! Man Justin is NOT for you! He may not want Michael (and for that I seriously don't blame him- UGH!) but he betta understand that Justin isn't what he wants especially not with Brian to deal with!
Em got to see his future- YAY!! Matt Battaglia aka Drew is FINE as wine!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 45
Glad to see Ted taking Jennifer under his wing. He's smart about money. Emmett and Justin seem to have found not only Drew but Ben as well. Want to know where you take them in this timeline.
Date: Oct 06, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 45
While I have every intention of re-reviewing previous chapters, I want to keep up with current ones. I think that's just as if not more important. Perhaps I can pay more attention to my spelling and such in my rewrites! lol. I tend to do them so quickly that my fingers go faster than my brain. I need to slow down a bit an pay attention. Otherwise it just looks sloppy. shame this comment area doesn't have spell check. Anyway......... ;)
Marilyn covered nicely. Daphne however wasn't fooled for a minute. Sharp as a tack that one. Her reation to the actual truth was funny though. I can just see her trouncing out with "Whatever...." coming out of her mouth. Will she be forced to believe the truth eventually? Hmmmm.
While the convo between Ted and Jen was natural and all, I could just imagine Ted's, or any male's reaction to Jen's breastfeeding comment. LOL! nice touch there.
HEY!! I'm a bank teller! One thatwill happily help screw over Craig. Hmmmm amazing how well you know me after such a short period of time. ;) HAHAH! 4% bucks per account. I can't wait to hear about Craig's reaction to that. At least it's for the kid's. Is the full amount there or has he been dipping into it?
Justin and Emmett together is always a good time. Emmett gets to see his future honey, and knows now that he's going to have to make Drew work for it. He w on't be a push over this time, waiting in the wings for the guy to grow up. Nope. Emmett knows he deserves more than that.
Whew..glad justin laid it out to Ben that he has a boyfriend. I can totally see Ben being attracted to Justin. They seen a much better match than Ben and Michael. I remember Ben noticing him at Babylon that one night. I guess he thought he'd found his opportunity. He gracefully backed off at least.
Terrific chapter. Off to read the next one.
Cheers,
Elaine