Reviews For Smoldering
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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Gratification.

any chapter with Gus is a GREAT chapter!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Discourse.

I want the progress to continue... I get so upset by one step forward two steps back (personal preference only)... fabulous writing.. that fact this story is getting to me so much attests to the power of the story :)  thanks TAG

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

I think some of Justin's "trust" issues are out right jealousy... but that's not a bad thing.. just needs to be recognized :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Accommodation.

I'd love to take THIS Brian home and make him my pet... or have him make me his... but oh well lol

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Date: Aug 26, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Amelioration.

Joan had that coming, but poor Sunshine.. he was on such a high until that bitch

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Disclosure.

add me to the lynchmob please!!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Flashback.

Craig is such a bastard... never thought someone would make Jack look tame in comparison :( 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Inception.

I hope this starts working.... poor Justin... he is so messed up he can't even see that just because his father said it, doesn't make it true!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Resolution.

the blow job was hot... but I'm glad Brian stopped more from happening... hopefully this will get them both working their shit out. Obviously Justin has far more to deal with, but... given time :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Dichotomy.

Fantastic chapter TAG.  I really like the progression of this story :) 

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Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.

Don't let go Brian... stay strong and stay persistent

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Date: Aug 26, 2016 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Engage.

I love EmmyLou... but I want more Gus since he gets Justin to relax a bit

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Perception.

I don't care if Brian is OOC, I LOVE this Brian... and shame on Ted (and a little bit Em) for starting the scare Justin, even unintentionally

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - Misconception.

Freaking Ted... I love Ted, but THIS Ted could ruin the progress 

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Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:31 am Title: Chapter 6 - Confusion.

Gus to the rescue!

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Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:02 am Title: Chapter 5 - Rescue.

I want Justin to start speaking soon... At least a lil bit to Brian

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4 - Shelter.

I'm so hooked to this story already. I'm not usually a fan of angst (for the most part) but so far I love it!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:38 am Title: Chapter 3 - Refuge.

The connection between them is immediate. ❤️

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Waste.

I do remember this, good story!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.

I must have read the original smolder because this seems familiar, looking forward to refreshing my memory and getting to the "new" stuff

Reviewer: Sabrina Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2016 2:41 am Title: Epilogue.

Tag. I just have to say I love you...I'm obsessed with your stories,  I love the creativity and depth you put in each story. I love the complexities and anst. I love your sick twisted mind of the good, bad and ugly places these stories go...my mind is twisted as well and I am just as much in love with Brian and justin. Ive become addicted to reading your stories and will continue as long as you write. Thank you for the countless hours of entertainment you have provided 



Author's Response:

Hi, Sabrina! I'm taking your comment about my 'sick twisted mind' as a compliment! LOL! Glad you like my stories. This was a really great one too. Good to know you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I'll keep writing as long as you keep reading. TAG

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.

Hiya T.A.

Once again I reread this one. I think it is for the 10th or 11th time and still I have goosebumps while reading.

Time and time again I suffer, smile and celebrate with Justin while he claws his way out of the darkness he's in.

Brians patience is so moving and Gus's understanding of Justins troubles is so endeering. 

This story is defenitely in my top 10 of best QaF fanfiction ever written.

 

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Your review makes me so happy. It's good to know this story has enough staying power that you can keep reading it and still find new enjoyment. Thanks for being such a supportive reader and a good friend! Happy reading. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

I can't help but think Justin was sexually abused, whether by his father or someone else. Am I reading into it wrong?



Author's Response:

When I was writing this, I only imagined that Justin was emotionally abused by Craig. I think the symptoms would be pretty much the same though. And what Craig did do was pretty horrendous, so you're not completely wrong about how it would all manifest itself. Hope you made it through to the more happy ending! TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Confusion.

Omg I am loving this story! I just found it and the Gus scenes are the best! He's such a good kid, generous, funny, smart and so tender and understanding.

Yes I guess Brian does need 'Justin lessons' from his son. Hysterical! 

Can't wait to see what the diner scenes are going to be like...onward!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this. This is one of my own favorite stories. I love how caring Brian is in this one. Happy Reading! TAG

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