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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 4:17 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Confusion.

What kind of dad is Justin's?



Author's Response:

The absolute WORST kind . . . TAG

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Date: Sep 04, 2016 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Rescue.

Sure I 'll be reading. I want to know what happened and how Brian will get the answers to his questions.

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Date: Sep 04, 2016 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shelter.

Mickey is as rude as usual. Glad that Brian has kicked him.

The drawing, the clothes and the money are too painful to find for Brian. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Refuge.

Justin sleeping on the cushions like a dog is gut wrenching as what he thinks of himself. Brian will have a hard time to build any kind of relationship with this wild and wounded boy.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Fallacious.

You were right. Poor Justin!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Waste.

Brian's altruistic side showing up is always interesting. How Justin will react to that once the door is closed?

Very impatient to read the next part.

69th comment: will it be a good omen for the days to come?



Author's Response:

69th comment is a REALLY good omen. Thank you for reading and for leaving all these great comments. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2016 8:57 am Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.

Very hard and intriguing beginning. I guess we are headed to a dark back story for the blond "kid".

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Alterations.

He got Daphne back. I'm soooo glad about that. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Betterment.

Justin is just too cute sometimes. He has stuff. Adorable. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Recovery.

It was said from the bottom of his heart.  No matter how much they try to ignore it. They can't change it. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Percipience.

I'm glad Justin is finally able to talk about the bad stuff. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Restoration.

I don't know whether to feel bad for Jennifer or to be just mad at her. 

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Revelation.

Well that's a nice way of waking up.

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Catharsis.

Finally Justin realizes who is at fault. I hope that helps him to get better.

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 1:18 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Adumbration.

Who would be looking for Justin? Maybe Daphne?

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Date: Sep 03, 2016 9:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Gratification.

I can imagine how overwhelming it must all be for Justin. So much is happening in such a small amount of time.

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Date: Sep 02, 2016 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

Giving Justin keys is a really great idea. That should reassure him.

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Date: Sep 02, 2016 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Accommodation.

I really like this part. It's a little easier to digest than the rest and I think every story needs this from time to time.

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Date: Sep 02, 2016 9:40 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Amelioration.

I feel for Justin. 

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Date: Sep 02, 2016 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Disclosure.

One step at a time. First the food then the rest.

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Date: Sep 01, 2016 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Flashback.

The sad thing is that there are actually people out there who treat others like that. 

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Date: Sep 01, 2016 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Inception.

Let's hope this will help. I'm almost afraid to know all of Justin's secrets.

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Date: Sep 01, 2016 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Resolution.

I'm glad Brian could resist. I don't even want to think what it would have meant for Justin if he couldn't have.

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Date: Aug 31, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Disconnection.

I hope Brian can help him. I should go to bed now but I need to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

I know the feeling - you're wide awake at 1 am and you know you need to get some sleep but you just can't stop reading some fanfic . . . LOL. Glad you're enjoying this story. TAG

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Engage.

Poor Justin. Brian is trying so hard and he just doesn't know how to deal with it. I feel for him.

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