Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
Diamonds? Really? I was surprised by the ring, which is certainly beautiful, but I don't see Justin wearing that; as for the earring, it's so not Brian, maybe Emmett because he often wears jewellery. Sorry for bursting out because I love your story, but it's out of character for both of them.
Leda handled Lindsay and Michael, like a ninja, then Tucker added his touch. Leda is so much more in synch with Mel than Lindsay; I do hope you will let them have a second chance now that Lindsay is slowly, but surely going out of the marriage. Lela and Mel in leather on bikes: hot as hell and gorgeous!
Date: Jan 18, 2017 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 27
Apparently Lindsay is totally out of the loop regarding her kids life's. I wonder what Michaels last strike will be.
Date: Nov 21, 2016 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 27
Gotta say, the whole casting part of teh chapter was great fun! what a concept! LOL! While Lidsey was being a stuck up prude, I kinda get Justin's reaction. I mean, it's all well adn good to have Jen do it, but it's kinda like catching your partent's having sex. You know they do, but DON"T want to "KNOW" they do. At least he's having it done too. lol
For being such a "WASP" Lindsey has neither class, manners not etiquette. The entire gathering for cocktails was too funny! I could absolutely visualize it all! Love it when Jen and even Deb smack her down for her lack of manners.
Have to say the best though was when she figured out who Adam White was and that he never takes a case he can't win. That the papers she was served was from that firm. I completely imagined in my mind's eye her reation to that! I have to admit to breaking out in laughter! What a fantastic image I had!! LOL.
The ring brian had made for Justin was a wonderful idea! Sounds lovely. and all teh gifts from Zee and Fall for the kids was incredibly thoughtful as well.
Lindsey being left "uncomfortable" huh? Hmmmmmmm. Interesting. Is it due to her lack of knowledge re: Money Mondays? showing her lack of involvement and interaction with her kids or perhaps something else?
Wonderful as always!!
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Yes, re Justin's reaction, sadly that was written from experience!
Ah you can always rely on Jen to get it across in a look and Debs to back her up with words.
Spot on with Lindsay's feeling of discomfort...but does she take timely steps to correct that?
Thanks for sticking with me, I'm having great fun writing this.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 27
Lindsay got served but she's not letting that stop her. She's still set on going to NY inspite of the fact that Mikey's money was confiscated. She actually thinks that asking Brian to give them money back on something they haven't paid for will work? If Mel and the kids weren't going to Faal's birthday lunch she wouldn't have been invited at all and how rude to invite Mikey. But then she wouldn't have learned that the lawyer that Emily is using is topnotch, so it all pans out.
Mikey, of course is a pain. Doing his best to insinuate himself into whatever Brian's does. He has the nerve to think Adam was being pretentious. That's a laugh. He even gets into a piss off match with Steve. Name calling, now that's very uncouth. At least he's down another strike for going to Portland.
Both of them make Faal's special day less special. But the gang does manage to leave Lindsay and Mikey behind as they go off and enjoy the stunt driving.
Brian got Justin an engagement ring! How cool was that. Now Justin needs to get a ring for Brian, even if it's one for his ear. Not to mention the special glass blown item that Zee is fixing for Justin, Emm, and Jen. I think Brian will get a lot of use out of his.
Diamonds, diamonds. Everyone's got diamonds. Zee, Justin, the kids. Bet Lindsay is sooooo jealous.
Author's Response:
This is Michael and Lindsay we are talking about...the delusions are strong in these two...so of course they see the end game and nothing else, which makes it all the fun for you to read when it blams them in the face!
Oh and Stud has his own casting plans...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Nov 21, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 27
I love that everyone is just calling Lindsay out on her shit... and Leda was fantastic!!! lol
the castings had me laughing out loud! lol
I cannot wait for Michael and Lindsay to get their due... I know it is still building, but I just wanna see them crash and burn for good!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Ah there's more Leda to come. And more casting of a certain stud too...
Oh there's a special place in hell for the gruesome twosome...
Happy reading
MissMerlot