Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Aug 02, 2017 4:25 am · Chapter: Chapter 40

Lindsey out "her home" without the new key... Feels like Mel took a major decision!

As for Michael, he will feel less cocky when he will discover who is his landlord!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 30, 2017 8:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 39

Whoa!!! What an explosive and revealing chapter!

So, Brian was in NY with Justin for a few weeks/months? What an amazing information. No wonder they are monogamous.

Jenny is as feisty as her mother, she doesn't let anything go with Lindsay and Michael.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 30, 2017 7:37 pm · Chapter: Chapter 38

Leda all alone in a big house? Is Zee preparing something about Leda and Mel? That would be a great idea as Lindsey is getting worse quite every day.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 30, 2017 2:01 pm · Chapter: Chapter 37

Hilarious, Michael kissing a girl!!!

Why is Lindsay giving Brian's address? Maybe doesn't she want Mel to see what she got? What is Lindsey expecting to find in NY? She doesn't have a good reputation in the art world.

I bet Zee bought Michael's home.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 30, 2017 10:16 am · Chapter: Chapter 36

You have some hilarious quotes in there; my favorite is from Deb: "No you won’t.  We actually want them walked in the fresh air not you two go to the loft put them on the treadmill and go fuck."

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 29, 2017 5:09 pm · Chapter: Chapter 35

Great idea to have Lindsey without money for six weeks; will she dare saying that to Mel?

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:53 pm · Chapter: Chapter 34

They had to christen the galery... These two, they will use anything to get a reason to get laid!

Lindsay just dropped a bomb that will explode in her head later I hope.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:07 pm · Chapter: Chapter 33

Excellent! Lindsay is once again too "busy" so she missed a huge opportunity to get some money.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 30, 2017 6:57 pm · Chapter: Chapter 32

Yeah! Take that bitch!

So happy the cat is out of the bag. Maybe Lindsay will slow down a bit with Zee.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 17, 2017 9:32 pm · Chapter: Chapter 30

Ha ha ha, Sam is back! I hope he will try to convince Lindsey to have a second chance and she will go for it. It should give Mel some "balls" to stop this farce of a marriage.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:11 pm · Chapter: Chapter 29

“Cataloguing and Rehang Fridays?” Lindsey better not miss another day, especially a Friday!

Hunter and Lindsay in SF at the same time? It's going to be explosive...

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:56 pm · Chapter: Chapter 28

Lindsey has a tight leash and she can't do anything!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:09 pm · Chapter: Chapter 27

Diamonds? Really? I was surprised by the ring, which is certainly beautiful, but I don't see Justin wearing that; as for the earring, it's so not Brian, maybe Emmett because he often wears jewellery. Sorry for bursting out because I love your story, but it's out of character for both of them.

Leda handled Lindsay and Michael, like a ninja, then Tucker added his touch. Leda is so much more in synch with Mel than Lindsay; I do hope you will let them have a second chance now that Lindsay is slowly, but surely going out of the marriage. Lela and Mel in leather on bikes: hot as hell and gorgeous!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 06, 2017 6:31 pm · Chapter: Chapter 26

I loved how Justin put Michael in his place with his residual payment and how he told him he will fuck his fiancé into the mattress.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 06, 2017 4:09 pm · Chapter: Chapter 25

Each chapter is a delight for the taste buds! It's another way to make us salivate.

Jenny is becoming a master mind when it comes to counter her father.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 24

The tension is getting high between Michael and Jenny, as well as between Mel and Lindsay. Now that she's fired, it will become more as she won't have any income and will depend on Mel and Brian.

The chess part was interesting: Gus, as his father, doesn't say a lot, but it's sharp and smart.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2017 6:06 pm · Chapter: Chapter 23

I love Deb in this story: she sees how her son is behaving and acts on it. Ben is cool too; no more a fool.

The moment everyone knows what Blake told Michael is hilarious.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 04, 2017 11:27 am · Chapter: Chapter 22

There are so many good lines in your story that it's difficult to point only few. Those ones, I loved:

“Ma, I’m not a dog…”

“No you’re not, a dog learns.  Now sit.”

"Yes that’s correct one penny"

"Captain Twink and his Mighty Ass"

The analysis of Blake about Michael and his addiction to Brian is so accurate.

Name: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2017 3:42 pm · Chapter: Chapter 13

Ah, gotcha...Thanks for clearing that up. Must have missed the reference somewhere.

Name: kellydeer (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2017 1:54 am · Chapter: Chapter 13

Brietling? Is this a British thing or am I just that old and don't get it?

Author's Response:

No this is a MissMerlot thing.  Basically, Zee did something so sexually amazing to Faal that he bought her a Brietling watch in gratitude, so any time she says that to him, he knows he's in for a good time.


Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2017 4:53 pm · Chapter: Chapter 21

Michael and Lindsey really choose to put a damper on anything they can!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2017 7:25 pm · Chapter: Chapter 20

Some more lies from both Lindsey and Michael...

This time, Mel has enough, and I bet Brian is waiting for the fallout. Deb is also very determined.

I can't wait to read about the renovation results and the party that Emmett will throw.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2017 8:38 pm · Chapter: Chapter 19

So much happened in here!

Most of all, Gus and his mother: how can she still call him "Lambskin" especially after being so mean to him! I was so relieved when Mel asked Jenny to call Brian and they took Gus away.

Hunter and his first sell: great news after the debacle that was caused by his mother.

The keys: every kid has one for almost all houses, except Michael's of course!!!

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2017 9:33 pm · Chapter: Chapter 18

I hope someone saw Michael give money to Rita.

I can't wait to see how Lindsey will try to explain why she lied to Gus about his conception; as if he misunderstood...

I loved how Brian gave the week off after signing the huge contract.

Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2017 5:24 pm · Chapter: Chapter 17

Mel is gonna explode when she will find out what Lindsey told Gus about Brian and her and also Justin and Daphne.

So happy Deb refuses to give money to Michael and called him on his toys' expenses.

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