Date: Oct 17, 2023 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my. Yes! Oh, I do love me a good "Whoops, we stole the wrong sperm!" story.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 5:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I’m only at chapter 1 and I’m already squeeing! I’ll be up all night reading this :):).
Date: Jan 06, 2017 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning. I wonder how Brian will react when he sees Justin and Aiden.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:18 am Title: Chapter 1
for some reason, I thought I had read this already... someone posted about it and I clicked on it to refresh my memory of it and BOOM... it's new to me!!!! I was just gonna do a quick browse, and now I'm hooked and I somehow bet I wont stop until I finish it (or fall asleep then finish it tomorrow!)
Michael and Lindsay - assholes!!!!!
and so happy to hear Brian DID look for Justin and even adopted his baby, and now they have one together! so excited!
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this fic! I can't wait until Brian and Justin are reunited. I can just see the two of them raising their kids, and all that will ensue...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in awe of Michael's stupidity! I mean Holy shitballs!!!!!!!!!!! WOW. All 3 caught up in their own machinations. No wonder there were so many hits on youtube for that video. LMFAO! Priceless. thankfully all 3 went down. Shame that Lindsey got a reduced sentence, but that's the way of things in the legal world and at least it got Michael nailed to the wall!
both weddings were lovely and thrilled that they finally happened!!
Had to laugh at the end part with Eric. serves the little asshole right. Emmett is one ballsy character! Love him! Eric was definitely shown teh door adn in public even! well desrved.
Brilliant chapter! Everything seems to be ending up exactly the way it should and looks like you're tying everythign up in a pretty red bow.
cheers
Elaine
Date: Nov 02, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, I wanted see Mikey arrested in his footie Captain Astro pjs... Lol
Max's inscription was so perfect. I love Emmett and I love stories that find him love and happiness. I wonder if they'll live in NYC or the Pitts?
I hope Mikey writes to Brian cuz they only let them use small pencils and the writing would totally look childlike... Lol I'm so cruel to the ding bat.
Debbie should have gotten the deal and Lindsay hard labor.
I guess the next wedding is our boys. Awwwww.
Date: Oct 31, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg! that was bloody HILARIOUS! Oh I'm so glad Max and Emmett saw that! No wonder there are so many hits on that video! WOW! I absolutely cannot wait to see the fall out from all of this! Hooray for Youtube!! BWAHAHAHAH! Oh I can't stop laughng over it all.
All three are going to go down! I thought the snub at the gallery was epic. This has it beat by a country mile!
I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter in this!
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping someone smack Lindsay before they let her leave the gallery..but for now i'm so excited about the wedding but let Maxie & Emmett do the wedding first so no one can steal the attention from our boys when it's their time to walk the isle...Please another baby soon for them...ðŸ™ðŸ™ðŸ™
Date: Oct 22, 2016 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaaaay i was right that Liddy is non other than Lindsay..!My stomach is in a knot while reading this chapter...i could have punch the bitch and tear into pieces for letting Brian suffered of Justin's disappearance while she knows all along where he was,and i think she has something to do why the PI doesn't have any leads of finding J..aaaaaarrrggh
Great Job Starlight as usual...thanks for the great yet another chapter..!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 7:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm absolutely loving this story! I always liked Debbie and thought she was pretty cool, but it is good to write her as a bad guy every once in a while, just to keep things interesting. I would love to be able to write as well as the authors on the site, but my mind only seems to be able to come up with a plot for a story and that's it. Anyway, I can't wait for another chapter, or two or three, lol!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent and interesting beginning!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to believe that Deb is actually more manipulative than Michael and Lindsey combined! I mean WOW!! What a C*&@#!! She's been manipulating and using the boys since day 1. I'm re ally going to look forward to her demise!!!! At least it's starting. HAHAHA! The fact that everyone at the diner is aware of the video now and their reactions...Priceless!
Interesting that Justin seems to have taken on Brian's eating habits. An unconcious thing? will he ever recover his memories? Hypnotherapy someday maybe? Either way, I doubt he's going to stay hidden long and everyone will be aware of his return. Michael will whine and stuff, Lindsey will do her usual. I'm more nervous about what Deb will do or try to do.
I'm loving Max more adn more every chapter! He's totally supportive of Justin and Aiden, and looks like Brian as well. He seems to have fit right it. He's also someone I never want to piss off!! :)
Daphne's here! YAY! Feel sorry for Justin being in town with so many people knowing who he is, yet he has no memory. It's gotta be hard. He's holding up very well though. Daphne will get that he really doesn't remember her adn will be the supportive friend she's always been. He'll reconnect with her I'm sure, just as an adult rather than the friendship since childhood.
Terrific story! getting better adn better. More intriguing!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like to see a badass Justin,we'll see how little sunshine grown up and risking everything just to protect his loved one..loved uncle Maxie too..Can't wait for the video working around Liberty,so better watch out Deb..!!
It's been running this scenario in my mind for hours about Liddy,could it be Lindsay?And all along she knows where J is,and prevented B from finding out when B bought the painting from the gallery..?
Good Job Starlight and good luck for more chapters..!
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Way to open a fic with a pow, pow, pow! I'm going to enjoy this.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 1
This is crazy but I love it. *rushing off to next chapter*
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Taking an a new story as well as the other?! WOW! Very impressed. More chapters to look forward to. More nighly reading!
A terrific concept to this one. Justin has certainly brought himself up by teh bootstraps thanks to Max. Gald they found each other. Max is a terrific character. A great friend to Justin and Aiden and I belive will be a good friend to Brian in the long run. Brian will adjust to having Max in their lives and will grow to appreciate him I think.
I was thrilled that Emmett was the one who saw Justion first. Perfect. He'll be protective of Justin adn Aiden, as well as Brian , Jewel and Gus. He's such a wonderful friend.
My heart burst for Jenn. finally being able to hug her son. I can't imagine what she's gone through. so glad that she and Brian are so close. That they share custody of Jewel.
As for Michale Lindsey etc....how frigging convol;uted are they?! I can't believe all they did. Their actions are beyond reprehensible! And that Debbie is in on their side too....That she lied as much as she did. Makes my skin crawl!
Now we have to wait and see what happens when everyone discovers that Justin is back. I'm sure that they won't believe he has amnesia, that he's lying about that and will do all they can to get in the way. Definitely going to be anangst filled story and will leave me wanting to throttle Lindsey, Michael and Debbie. Looking forward to Justin and Brian really finding their way back to each other. Justin is all grwon up now and will do everything to protect his kids. They will come first, so M,L and D had better watch out. they won't get away with much. Brian will have a whole new respect for Justin as well I think. He'll see that he's going to have to work for this relatioship, but I do believe he's ready to do that.
Terrific new story!! I can't wait to really sink my teeth into this one even more than I laready have!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so hooked! And I usually don't care for MPreg fics but this is awesome! So happy I started this, you're a great writer!
Date: Oct 17, 2016 7:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so Fucking excited I love mpreg like this
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this so far - definitely want more :)
Author's Response:
I posted the next two, I hate waiting.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Another story already! Wow! You're inspiring me to try and keep up with you in my own writing. Keep it up! TAG
Author's Response:
That's the plan.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Another exciting story of you Starlight..I am bouncing the walls right now from excitement,you always did that to me with all your amazing stories..can't wait for the next chapter..Goodluck and more power!!
What would Brian looks like when he see Jay the first time in years..
Author's Response:
Thanks for encouraging me to keep doing it.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 1
YES!! YES!
POST THEM ASAP!
I really like your stories you're really a good writer.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the next two.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 1
You have some of the most interesting ideas. I love your stories. Please post more.....please please
Author's Response:
This came from a combination of bunny plots. So than Deb tanner for making me think.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is sooooo good. Justin or Jay having a son who he just happens to name Aiden. Michael having a daughter - gag- who turns out to be Justin's. Now that's poetic justice. Love the name Jewel. Justin moving back to the Pitts and running into Emmett who tells all. Can't wait to see what else you have.
Author's Response:
I couldn't stomach Justin sleeping with Michael. LOL