Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

It might be interesting to see what Lindsay has to say about all of this. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 11:57 am Title: Chapter 14

This could be my favorite chapter from you ever.  It is frustrating, emotional, silly, heavy, crazy, and hysterical all at once.  The complete evil is met with anger but also with that awesome sense of humor you have (Teds sexy authority).

That being said -- He hit my baby with a pipe? A pipe?  You horrible creature. Lindsay and Debbie are just as scummy. 

Loved the extra update!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:50 am Title: Chapter 14

BUSTED!! HA!! I don't think Michael can be seen as innocent in Deb's eyes anymore (not that his rat bastard ass ever was). Not only is he a petulant five-year old trapped in a thirty year old body, but he's also a criminal- both as a thief and a batterer. What a pickle and pill to swallow about her delusional, spolied pain-in-the-ass! 

As for Deb's conversation with Lindsay: What a joke! Lindsay holds all the cards as she probably has the evidence of putting Michael in jail if she wants to. Although I can't stand her ass, I have to admit that Lindsay is devious and I wouldn't put it passed her to have recorded the conversation with Michael either when he confessed the first time or this last time when he badgered her about coming back to Pittsburgh. Deb really would be smart to wash her hands of both of them but we all know she won't do that. After all her baby runs the risk of jail time on many fronts, including but not limited to embezzlement since he's stealing from his job's profits.

Blake, Daphne, Emmett , Justin and Max are a MESS!!! I really loved their banter back and forth while planning. I could certainly imagine how insane that whole meeting was for Brian and Ted who were trying to act reasonably and responsibily (to a degree in Brian's case). 'Take Charge Ted' is HOT and he learned it from the master. I chuckled when Daph said that it was time to go find her boyfriend because her girly parts were tingly. That little firecracker has surely been around all of them too long and she had the pleasure of making 5 gay men blush, LOL

I'm really glad that they are piecing together Lindsay's involvement! That bitch thinks that she has gotten away with her machinations. Once again, I think it is a brilliant move to use Sam plus now Mel is going to get involved! She'll definitely have some helpful insight to the bitch she dissed and dismissed!

WRITE On Star!!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 14

Death really is too good for all three of these vipers but abject humiliation and prison sounds like a real treat.

Deb is willing to ignore what her son did to Justin so she can keep trying to get money out of Brian and Michael in his bed (Eewww I need to bleach out my imagination), they both deserve the retribution that is about to be heaped on both their heads.

Lindsay will come just so she can gloat her ego will be her biggest down fall, I think the press hounding her is just what she needs before she is sent to prison, I mean she wanted the spotlight so I say let her have it with both barrels.

Daphne, Emmett, Blake and Max are too funny for words they can't plot a revenge, but they can lighten the mood and it was needed.

Looking Forward to More :)