Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Max seems to know Justin extremely well. 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

So happy that Brian and Justin are at the loft. Although it wasn't very much, Justin's feelings of familiarity are counting for quite a bit and will surely add up into a more complete picture. But I agree that they should work towards beginning anew even as the past may show little by little. They are both completely different men from five years ago. 

LOL! Justin/Jay is even confounding Max a bit. It's good that Emmett is able to give the other gentleman of how Justin was versus what he is now. Both facets of his personality live inside of Justin (we've seen glimpses of Justin's steely side in the series too) and I really loved the last line by Justin/Jay himself. 'I want to be Justin but Jay still has some work to do," definitely sums up what needs to happen in order to deal with Dumb, Dumber and Bitchzilla.

So happy that Sam made contact with the Travelling Trollop. I can't wait to see how her Highway to Hell turns out!! 

 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 16

Each day, several times a day, I look to see if there's an update. lol. So anxious to see what is going to happen next. Every chapter has a morsel that whets my appetite, then I have to wait for the next one. :)

A few feelings of familiarity for Justin at the loft. Will he eventually get these memories back or will he and Brian simply forge ahead with this new realtionship? Both are intriguing aspects. Thankfully no one knows they're at the loft so they can have privacy.

I am in a state of giggles re: Lindsey adn Sam. Knowing that Sam is in on this plot to bring her (and the other 2) down is hysterical! She's going to stop with her machinations re: Deb and Michael thinking Sam is her route "in". Little does she know that he's really her very own "highway to hell" Oh what a trip she's gonna take. Can't wait!!

Sooooooooo...what is Jay up to? I love that he wants to be Justin again, (to a degree I would imagine) but I don't think he wants to lose Jay either. I'm dying to see what he has up his sleeve!! Going to be so good!!!! Is he going to go behind Max and the group's back to get his own desired end, or will he let Max do his thing? I think Max's idea will prolong the torture which is really a terrific idea!! Justin just want's Brian's misery to end. That shows his level of affection he already has for Brian.

Terrific chapter!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:55 am Title: Chapter 16

I want Jay to Completely Demolish Deb, Michael and Lindsay but I also want to see Max's plan out and too see what else is discovered about these three Nitwits.

They don't deserve another second of freedom but can't give up your hand just yet, the element of surprise and anticipation makes it more funnier cause they are waiting for the hammer to come down, instead it is going to be a bulldozer that knocks their house down around them.

Can Mommy and Daddy Peterson be there when Lindsay is humiliated the thought of Nancy's face turning purple makes me giggle? (That would be a great cover for the front page lol)

;)