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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 19

Poor Gus. It was hard to read how he felt. Mel doesn't deserve to be in his life.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 19

Let's hope Mel has the guts to show up. It would be great for Gus. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2016 4:44 am Title: Chapter 19

I agree that Mel has never seemed so weak

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 19

I am really enjoying this story. I love strong Justin.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 19

That chapter was gorgeous! Loved it all. Nice intro with Lindsey and Sam. I was giggling knowing full well that Sam is in on the plan and all of Lindsey's plans are going to go south in a big way.

Now....to the gut wrentching part of this chapter. That chat between Gus and Justin. Really lovely. Gus opened up, sharing his fears, his anxiety. I'm so glad they had that talk. gus's fears are natural with 2 families coing together like these 2 did. some blood, some not and inbetween. It's not the blood that matters and I think Gus is understanding that. Glad that justin was able to ease those thoughts.

adn that "little chat" between Justin and Mel. It was a long time coming. Really disappointed that she'd done anything up til now. Just giving excuses. Justin laid it out on the line for her. Basically shit or get off the pot. Now it's up to her.

He went straight ot his childhood home. He's really starting to remember isn't he. YAY!

Excellent chapter!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:20 am Title: Chapter 19

Brilliant update. Happy to see Justin giving Mel what she needs, a veral thrashing.

Hate to see Gus so sad and confused regardiing his mother's.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more!

JoAnn

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 1:03 am Title: Chapter 19

Omg poor Gus...he broke my heart...thank God Justin stepped up and their cool now. And good for him telling Mel off, she needed that. Hopefully she'll start putting Gus first.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 19

Oh my.  He's remembering and I love how he lit into Melanie.  Poor Gus.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 19

Damn, Justin is kicking butt and taking names.  Poor Gus.  I can understand Mel's point about healing, she was lucky to have Brian take care of Gus. 

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 19

YOU TELL HER JAY!!!! Poor Gus feeling left out😟. I cannot wait for all the shoes to drop.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 19

That was a beautiful gut-wrenching moment between Justin and Gus that is one scared confused little boy who just needs reassurance that he is loved and won't be abandoned.

Justin telling off Mel made me cheer (I Wish That Had Happened On The Show) she is just making excuses for why she abandoned her son that she wanted so badly, I mean she was so cold to Brian to get him to sign that million dollar insurance policy and his rights to Gus that I couldn't stand her.

Lindsay and Michael made her life Hell Gus was not the cause of it plus Brian did what she didn't think he was capable of, he stepped up as a parent and took responsibility for his son while she ran away (Not surprising she did that on the show after she cheated).

It is not Gus's fault that Mel became a doormat for Lindsay he was a baby, love isn't suppose to make you lose your spine, it is supposed to give you the strength to face any battle head on.

I hope she shows up to ease Gus's pain I think if she doesn't she will have to face the wrath of Justin again.

Lindsay should enjoy her moment in the spotlight cause it will soon be her last. lol

 :)

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