[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2016 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aha! It appears that Lindsay and Liddy are the same person. With Max, Emmett, Ted and Daphne around to help Lindsay is sure to find herself in a mess of trouble. I wonder if that means that Mikey and Deb knew where Justin was as well?
Date: Oct 22, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 11
I so love your fic! This one is Fabulous, so love anti- Mikey,Linz and Deb. Can see their is going to be trouble. Like Max he is going to be someone Mikey, Deb and Liz isn't going to wqnt to mess with. Maybe Em will get someone to love and be loved back.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 21, 2016 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
Jesus! This Debbie & Michael are the worse! I hope they do get arrested. Wow!
Justin is as smart & clever as ever!
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh scheming Deb is so different -- she's a calculating monster. She deserves a ding bat like Mikey for a son. Mother and son should always plan for bail money -- lol. I sure hope Vic is dead or far far away from them -- and yes dead would be better. I abhor evil and these people are evil!
Fantastic chapter, way to leave us wanting more.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
And Max gets better. I'm glad Brian can like him without worrying about him and Justiin.
Ohh so sad waking up in a dumpster.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
I know you spoil us with daily updates but...FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!! You must give us more today. Let me know if begging works😇😇
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
I am a card carrying member of the Max rocks club! Poor stupid Mikey... Lol.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
Unbelievable. Justin is smarter than Mikey and Deb. Now they can't get within 500 feet without being thrown in jail. Just how do they expect Lindsay to help?
Date: Oct 21, 2016 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMGGGG!!! OMG! This was a fabulous chapter. Justin is so freaking smart! He made Michael and his mother look like complete and utter liars...which they generally are.
Now Lindsay is coming back to the Pitts. Definitely looking forward to finding out if my theory is correct in thinking that she is the one who has been wreaking havoc in Justin/ Jay's life since his career began. I don't put it passed the bitch to kickstart another custody suit thinking that it will make Brian and Justin bow down to her whims to avoid the drama.
Bitches and Mitch I swear fo' cheese I want to fold myself inside the story and cuff all of them upside their heads!!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 21, 2016 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Love what they did to Michael...perfect place for him...in the dumpster! Yay! So glad Brian & Max had that conversation, it said a lot about both of them.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 10
I really do adore Max and Molly! They may look innocent (Molly) and act ditzy (Max) but they are bold and brainy underneath their respective facades.
LOL@ Brian's face when they pulled up in the driveway!! LOL! He can't even deny that in his pre-kid days, he wouldn't have done something similar to what Daph and Jus did. He may be a 'responsible' adult now but I always thought of Brian as Bad Boy Charm personified. I have a feeling with the Dynamic Duo (Daph and Jus) + Max back in effect and the Dastardly Duo (The Idiot Twins) + Deb (the Den mother of Dumb and Dumber), that Brian's wicked sense of humor is going to resurface if for no other reason than to preserve what he is trying to rekindle with Justin. I'm glad that Max is restoring Brian to his former self. If he wants Justin, King Kinney will have to return in more ways than one.
I am sitting here at my desk here at work in TEARS from laughing my ass off at that last scene!!!! Michael is well on his way from getting the ass kicking he needed to have a LONG time ago- both metaphorically and physically! OOOOhhhh I CAN'T WAIT!!!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loving Max more and more. Nice how everyone important helped with the throwing out the garbage. Michael trying to have Justin charged with assault is so not going to happen. Love seeing new chapters on this fantastic tale
Date: Oct 20, 2016 7:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm absolutely loving this story! I always liked Debbie and thought she was pretty cool, but it is good to write her as a bad guy every once in a while, just to keep things interesting. I would love to be able to write as well as the authors on the site, but my mind only seems to be able to come up with a plot for a story and that's it. Anyway, I can't wait for another chapter, or two or three, lol!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 4:52 am Title: Chapter 9
Excellent: Michael in a dumpster! With Daphne and Emmett to the rescue.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, Daphne is back!!!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 4:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Evil genious the video
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh God. How did Michael find out that Justin was there? If Deb hadn't incited Michael he wouldn't have even been there. I wanted to punch him when he talked about 'his mistake'. So glad Justin did. Great idea dumping him in the trash behind Babylon. Thank goodness Daphne was there. Love how the kids are all for Daddy and Dad. Wish Max had been there. Between him and Daphne Mikey and Deb don't stand a chance.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 9
Love that Michael got what he deserved and can't wait to find out what he thinks about being in the dumpster.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow.....so now Mikey knows and soon deb will too.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG! Chapter 9 so rocks! Love me some Daphnie! That's a true friend who held you hide or dump a body!
Date: Oct 19, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
So glad that Justin and Daph got a chance to talk before getting interrupted.
The nerve of that little rat bastard!!!!! I was cheering aloud when Justin knocked him the fuck out!! OMG I would have paid my entire paycheck to see that live and in color! I can't stand that schmuck!! I think having him wake up with the trash is an excellent idea but NOW we have the problem of when he does wake up. There is no longer the full element of surprise because he will certainly go running to his loud, overbearing, bullshit artist of a mother. I can't believe him yelling, 'We got rid of your ass...' Daphne should have kicked him in the mouth while he was knocked out, LOL Yeah she's definitely a BFF if she's helping hide the body. Michael betta look out because they are not playing with his whiny, degenerate ass!
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 19, 2016 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved Max remarks on Debbie's look.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Teasing, teasing...
Also, they want to give their "relationship" a second chance, better balanced.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Delightful chapter!
Brian is not letting amnesia keeping Justin away.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
What an end of chapter! Well done!