Reviews For Stand Alone, Still Together
Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Up
Date: Oct 27, 2016 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Up
Ooooo, I want more! That ending was too open for me, I like to hear how you'd have it wrap up. Or was this more a gap filler with the canon being the ending?
Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Blur
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Blur
that wasn't what I expected...
even with his thoughts, I'm still confused about what Justin is thinking too
Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Focus
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Focus
Ok, that was such an ambiguous ending to the chapter... I don't have time, but now I have to read to see what the question was lol
I think it's safe to say I'm a bit hooked on this one lol
Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Outside
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Outside
Seriously, did Michael just NOT get that he was being so insulting to Justin? Sublety is lost on him....
I'm hoping we see Brian and Justin both get spirits raised soon... I like them happy :)
Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Inside
Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Inside
I really like the beginning of this... introspective Brian always makes a good story to me...