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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2018 11:12 am Title: Don't You (Forget About Me)

Great, thanks

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 1:36 pm Title: Don't You (Forget About Me)

I thought this was terrific, particularly loved all the tension in the first half

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 3:11 pm Title: Relax

You really capture Brian's acerbic style and wit here ... You made me laugh with the 'zippy Di do dah' masturbation comment, and the observation about Mel as a junk yard dog ripping someone gave off is priceless and really spot on! 

 

Enjoying your stories a LOT! 

 

 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:38 am Title: Don't You (Forget About Me)

What a sweet ending. Thanks!

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:25 am Title: Sledgehammer

That asshole! I hope karma will bite him in the ass

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:18 am Title: Should I Stay or Should I Go

Poor sunshine :(

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 6:04 am Title: One Thing Leads To Another

Oh no...he was progressing so well

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 5:46 am Title: Hot, Hot, Hot!!!

Of course justin want him. Who wouldnt? Lol

 

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 5:27 am Title: Heart of Glass

Im so proud of brian with his progress. 

Im a parent of two adorable kids. Reading this remind me to be more supporting and be happy for them with their choice of life.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 5:16 am Title: Boys Don't Cry

Yesss....ive been in love with you brian....

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:53 am Title: Tainted Love

Oh justin is so in loooove with brian.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:45 am Title: Shake It Up

Daphne n justin is so funny

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:31 am Title: Don't You Want Me?

I feel like climb on brian lap too and hug him.... poor boy

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:16 am Title: True Colors

Well that make sense... im glad this therapy progressing something

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 4:01 am Title: Hungry Like the Wolf

I almost thought justin lost his virginity to brian.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 3:38 am Title: Relax

Mel is very brave for admit that

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 2:16 am Title: One Way or Another

I want to hug brian in this chapter

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 2:05 am Title: Sweet Dreams

Omg!!! I laugh so hard at this chapter. First : the gym scene where brian trying to keep up with the ram. Second : where mel tried to rat brian out, thirs : emmet dream and brian inner comment.

im so glad i read this story

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 1:52 am Title: You Spin Me 'Round

Naughty brian

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2018 1:38 am Title: Take On Me

This is very interesting story and im so excited reading it. Brian indeed is a sex addict

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2017 3:28 pm Title: Blue Monday

Gotta admit the first time I read this I thought Brian Kinney and a sex rehab facility, why?  Then I saw he was rooming with Mel and I thought this is going to be good.  Finally you have Justin show up and that was it.  I'll be reading this one for sure.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Don't You (Forget About Me)

What a great ending. I loved it. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:09 pm Title: Sledgehammer

Chris is an ass. Maybe now Justin will pursue his art career. Or he could work as a counselor in Pittsburgh. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:03 pm Title: Should I Stay or Should I Go

Nooooooooo. That can't be how it ends. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2017 6:54 pm Title: Need You Tonight

Yippee. Now they only have to work out how to go on from here. 

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