Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Noooooo. Please let Gus be alright.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story! The suspense was killer. Thanks for writing and for posting this here on KD! TAG
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG... please let Gus be alright!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such an emotional roller coaster you created! Great job explaining about head injuries and hallucinations. Poor Justin! I cried with him and Brian, then was so happy it was all a dream.
Wonderful job and imaginative twists.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:16 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW! Hooked already. This looks like it is going to be one hell of a story. I can't wait for part 2
Date: Nov 02, 2016 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my! What turned out to be an innocent night of fun turns into this tragedy! I hope Gus comes through this. My heart is breaking!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 02, 2016 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I cannot wait to read chapter 2. Great story
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi,
I love the start of the story and I love the connection that Gus has with his dads. I know Brian is going to tear up about what just happened to Gus. He is going to need Justin to get through this. It's like the Bashing for him and Bombing all over again. Pleae post more soon.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Could have sworn I hit liked.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah! This looks to be a humdinger of a story. Please post your next chapter soon!