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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2020 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

The end is promising; the will should be somewhere and if not, maybe the letters might help.

This is excellent: " "You heard me. Roll the fuck over. It's my turn for some mindless sex and you owe me." Brian stared at Justin in shock.". That was indeed very assertive!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

They have to find that will. It would be so great. 



Author's Response: Agreed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2016 4:16 am Title: Chapter 5

Finding that will is paramount.  The kids cannot go and live with Joan, that would be a travisty.



Author's Response: True.

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