Date: Jan 08, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Chapter 38
Overall, this was enjoyable. You took your time with each character and I got to know your vision of each of them. I like how you grew and changed Michael. That was an interesting surprise. You did it well.
There were too many pregnancies for my liking and that made it difficult for me to believe. But, that's just me. I'll end where I started, overall, I really enjoyed the read.