Date: Jan 02, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
What are Lindsay and Mel doing? Is Brian really with Michael? I need to read the next chapter. Great start.
Date: Nov 30, 2016 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Typical Emmett. LOL. At least they did a little something between them adn he's satisfied for now. Lovely name for the new addition to the family.
TWINS??! OMG!! Brian is going to be the size of a house much to his disgust. Should be aninteresting time. I feel bad for the guy in a tiny way. OK...not bad, but empathetic. Very excited for them both!!
Impressed wit hMichael's maturity. I'm now belivinghis sincerity. He understands his priority is Jenny. He put it in his shoulders and too respoinsibility for his actions. I wasn't prepared for the fact that he knew Justin was there watching. Not surpising considering how manipulative he was back then.
another great chapter!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so I've started this and am hooked instantly... all of this is misunderstanding between Justin and Brian and I hope they can work thru it quickly and deal with everything else TOGETHER... they are always stronger together!
Date: Nov 09, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
So glad those 2 got to talk. Much was discussed and now Justin knows what really happened. He took responsiblity for his own actions and placed Brian's squarely on his shoulders as well. Now that he has the correct info, when michael inevitably tris to get in teh way, he won't run, but will stand by brian.
Hopefully Ben will understand Justin trying to work things out with Brian. that won't try to intrude either, but will be a friend much like Daphne. I doubt Michael will like the fact that Justin and ben are friends.
Looking forward to the next update. I so needed this to read! Election has been so emotionally draining. This was just the salve I needed. Many thanks.
Cheers,
Elaine
Cheers,
Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Justin is getting some of the long held anger off his chest. It's only the start I know. he has lots more to unload, BUT...he also needs to listen to Brian and keep an open mind. will be hard to do because he's had 12 years of anger and bitterness to hold on to and it's not something you can just shrug and say, "Oh, OK...I understand" and then carry on. 12 years is a long time, so he and Brian are going to have to straight up and honest with each other.
Ben's convo with Brian was so honest. I was glad he said what he did. Brian didn't intend to be malicious or hurtful. to him, in his eyes, he didn't see it as anything but getting Michael to stop with the white party crap. He went about it entirely the wrong way though and there definitely were consequences. It was a bad scenario all round and so many people were hurt by it. I am however, glad that brian and Michael's friendship ended. I don't think the Michael will let things go however now that justin is back. He's going to react very badly.
How is everyone else going to react once they find out about Justin adn Jacob? I'm hoping Jen will be able to help Brian in the Justin and Jacob department, especially once she finds out why he left specifically.
Am waiting with baited breath now to find out what happens in Toronto. What excuses teh girls have, their reasonings behind the order for Brian etc. Kind of hoping that the girls screwed up enought that Brian can somehow get Gus.
congrats on teh start of what looks like another fantastic story..
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 04, 2016 2:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is gonna be good ! Poor Gus...that episode with Brian & Michael had to be a misunderstanding .
Date: Nov 03, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Off to a great start. angst plus. Very excited to see what happens next. I can't really blame Justin for taking off like he did. He was young and terribly hurt. If it were almost anyone else I would've wanted him to tell Brian, but with justin thinking Brian and Michael were together?? YEah....I think I'd do the same thing in all honesty.
Go Daphne! I so love her in all your stories. She is teh exact opposite of michael and shows what being a "best friend" is all about.
Justin seems to making a success of himself in a farily short period of time. Especially considering he was also pregnant and having Jacob.
What the hell is up with the girls? How the hell can they not realize their son hasn't been home in 2 days?!? WTF!!!!! they aren't even in teh story yet and I already want to flay them alive. and not allowing Brian to see Gus...ARGH! What's with that order against him? What did the uber bitches do?
Another exciting start. Can'twait for more!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Justin’s reaction is exactly that youth. Brian should have thought about Justin when he was trying to teach Michael a lesson.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story premise. Ready for more. TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! I don't even know what to think right now. I'm certainly pissed off with Mel and Michael. Strangely, I'm a little peeved with Justin too because he didn't wait for the answers he needed. But in all fairness, when does a teenager EVER wait before acting on impulse (I'm dealing with that again now and have gone through it before with my oldest son who's 21 and still impulsive)?
I feel really bad for Gus. No child should have to feel like they are unloved and unwanted. Mel should really be ashamed of herself and seek therapy for that mean streak she has and her control issues. To tell him that his father doesn't care about him is beyond cruel and Lindsay's lack of a backbone didn't help matters. She had ample opportunity to tell Gus the truth but something tells me she didn't have time if she's 'impressing' her boss the way I think she is....<eyebrow raised>
As for Michael, I think there is a little more to this than meets the eye and Michael is at the bottom of it. I don't blame Justin for not wanting to share Jacob with Michael as he had to with Brian. It would have just been one more thing for Michael to whine and criticize Justin about.
Well this is surely a tangled web that I am looking forward to unraveling!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Everyone is flawed this time. Brian for thinking he was helping Michael realize he didn’t want Brian and Justin for being afraid to find out the truth.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Shit Justin always running away looking forward for the next chapter if its like the show Justin needs to grow up awwww and no Anti Mikey Lindsey or Mel
Author's Response:
I haven't really decided which direction I'm leaning on this yet. But the tags will appear soon.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please tell me that Brian was: drink, high, body swapped with Ben, or that Michael somehow blackmailed Brian into kissing him. Please let us know what was going on...I hate when Brian is without his Sunshine😇.
Seriously, Mel could win an award for worst parent ever. I have never loved her but I am hoping I don't hate her by the end.
Author's Response:
I promise he didn’t do anything that bad.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Few things are as distasteful as B/M pairings... ick! Poor Justin, I would have left too. I hope Mikey set it up some how. My poor Sunshine seeing that awful kiss while preggers with Jacob, poor baby. I love that Jacob knew about Gus and Brian. And loved it even more that Brian knew Jacob.
Looks like Brian is heading to court, we can't have Gus running away and unaccounted for now can we? And, Mel's on the bad list this time, I hope.
I adore mpreg and you so I am excited! Thanks for writing!!!
Author's Response:
I wrote this with the idea that Justin sees the scene in the comic book store when Brian offers Michael what he wanted.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
You've got me hooked already! Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 5:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy. Yet another fantastic tale. Oh the misunderstandings. This is going to be fun! I've been working on a story using the same premise sort of. So don't be surprised ok. Really, really want to know about the Mikey connection. Please tell me Brian isn't that stupid. BTW love Jacob.
Author's Response:
I love your stories and can't wait to read it. Michael isn’t going to appear for a few more chapters, but he will.
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay What The Hell is going on?!?!?!?
Who am I suppose to loathe right now cause so far Brian, Michael, Lindsay and Mel are competing for first place?? (Brian and Michael...Ewww!!!)
If Brian is still sending money to Lindsay for Gus then there has to be a way for him to get his rights back???
Not surprised Mel is acting like a royal Witch she insisted on the move to Canada just so she could have control, it is what she lives for the power to keep Brian away, too bad she didn't figure Gus would have his own opinion and a voice to state it loudly.
Ready For Another Adventure :)
Author's Response:
II haven't tag this yet because I'm leaning in two directions but it's most likely going to be less Michael and more Mel and Lindsay.