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Reviewer: TrueIllusion Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2018 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Read this last night and I’m in love with it...please, please continue! I need more!

Love the premise, and I want so badly to find out what happens! I’m so scared for Brian too. I feel his anxiety.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

Why has this story never continued ????????????  It is really annoying when stories are left unfinished.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 4

Will this story ever get an ending?



Author's Response:

Yes, we are going to start back on it again VERY soon x

Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 10:16 am Title: Chapter 4

Uh... I'm done. White flag. I'll be back, armed with issues and steal nerves. 

That kid would be only one to make Brian forget about his problems.

Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 3

At least Justin and Brian sorted it out that Justin was staying.

Ah, sweet Mother Taylor. I always love her interactions with Brian. She's right, thinking too far ahead will overwhelm him.

Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:39 am Title: Chapter 2

Ah, denail. I completely understand him. I want to wrap him up in a big hug and protect him from everything. 

I bet Justin's feeling terrible. He'll have to be strong for Brian.

I'm curious about Michael...are you keeping it canon?

Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:21 am Title: Chapter 1

I think I already commeted on this first chapter...but I'm starting reading this story again and....damn. The emotions. The feels. The heartbreak. 

I can feel exactly what their feeling - despair, horror, panic. Amazing work, ladies!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 4

You've put down in words exactly how Brian must be feeling.  It's something that's hard on everyone.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

Omg I'm sitting here at my lunch hour, at work, trying not to cry. My heart is breaking for all of them....Gus....he's so sweet! 

This is so good! Please let an eye specialist fix him! Now onto Road to Recovery lol

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2017 7:36 am Title: Chapter 4

Ugh! This is going to be so hard for Brian, but all the people around him are just going to make it worse. I don't think I have enough 'poor Brians' for this story. Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, it's going to be tough for him, and you're right, people aren't going to know how to act around him - but some people may surprise you :)

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh my God this chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. It's just breaking my heart....poor Brian! Gut-wrenching...the passage from The Lost & The Damned was very good writing but so random. I was like...what?! Lol talk about angst! Yikes! Looking forward to the next chapter. Please tell me that Brian is going to get his eyesight back? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

All I can say is 'audio books'.  That and Jennifer was a better choice than the others.  Let's hope that Brian doesn't try to push Justin away anymore.  It's not going to work.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 1:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hi Ladies,

 

This is another great update. I feel really bad for Briand Justin. This so new to both of them and Brian really doesn't know how to deal with what's happening to him. Although Justin understands better than anyone what Brian is going through because of the bashing. Brian and Justin both need time to process what happen. Brian is going to lash out a lot. He is going to need Justin, But he isn't going to want to depend on Justin because they are broken up at the moment. They are going to need to deal with that. I love the fact that Justin had Jennifer come and sit with Brian, and she was mothering him. Brian is also going to need a lot of love from his son. It will be interesting reading how everyone else deals with Brian possibly being blind. I would love to read more scenes of Brian and Jennifer too.  Please post more soon!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 3

So glad to see a new chapter, even if the angst meter went up drastically with this one. Can I just use my standard 'Poor Brian' comment for this and all subsequent chapters? LOL. TAG



Author's Response:

Haha, you can most definitely say that - as that is mostly what has been going through my head as we have written it. We're glad you're excited by new chapters of this. Lots more to come for 'Poor Brian.' :)

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 5:58 am Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see where this story goes, so much of Brian's life, both personal and professional, is reliant on his sight 🙁



Author's Response:

It really is. We can't wait to share where this story is going with you. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh! 'Poor Brian' doesn't really seem to cut it here. This is going to be so hard on the Studly One. Please hurry with the next chapter! TAG



Author's Response:

We know, right? Poor guy. Working on the next one now :)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy to see an update on this one. Thank you ladies. I'm off to read. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh my goodness, poor Brian! He lost an eye...he's a very proud man, don't know how he's going to cope. So glad to see this second chapter, keep it up ladies! I can tell this is going to be quite the ride.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2016 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hi Ladies,

 

You have just made me the happiest camper in the world. I love the update and I feel so bad for Brian. I feel for Justin too. I'm wondering how they are both going to deal with this? How is the family going to deal with this? Oh, Guss your daddy is going to need you. Please post more soon !!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. We are glad you're enjoying this as much as we are writing it. It's good you mentioned Justin, people might forget that this also affects him too, poor guy!

Gus will come into this very soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian might be blind?  The angst level just went up.  Good job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be intense.  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: sophie'smom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2016 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really hope there is more to this story. I really like the twist. No matter what happened before Justin will be there for Brian. That is if Michael allows it.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi Ladies,

 

I don't know what happened to my feedback that I left for this story. But I really love the start of this story. I feel really bad for Brian and I don't dobut this is goin to be a rough journey for the boys. I know Justin is really going to have be really strong for Brian. I'm hopping Gus will be able to help his daddy. Please post more soon!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 4:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Not sure if my reviews on that other site survived my banishment, but I just wanted to say again how excited I am about this new story. More, please! TAG

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 5:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Sally & Annie, I've been planning to read the first chapter of your story, so it seems fitting that it's the first one I try on the new site.

Wow, does this first chapter ever pack a punch! I felt like I was right there at Babylon, suffering the effects of the bombing with Brian, Justin, Jennifer, and everyone else. I wanted to vomit, seeing Todd without a leg.

Of course, I'm terrified for Brian, who's apparently mostly blind. I flashed back to the bashing when Brian claimed to be Justin's partner and rode in the ambulance with him. Now, it's Justin's turn to take that role with Brian.

You've pulled me completely into this bombing AU. I'm not sure I can say I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but I certainly want to know what happens next, how their love for each other helps Brian and Justin cope and move forward. I want to hear about the rest of the family, too.



Author's Response:

Aw thank you for that lovely review. That's what we tried to do here, draw you and get you feeling all the emotions from that night. And you're right, this is now Justin's time to step up and be Brian's partner. Hopefully he can handle it :) More to come VERY soon :)

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