Date: May 19, 2018 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was sneaky, it's not who we thought it would be!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing this. I have to warn you, it's not finished, but I am currently working on the next chapter now. I sort of suffered a little writer's block. But it feels great to know there is new blood reading my work and wanting to read what happens next. Thanks again xx
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2016 2:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Brian. It's a good thing I've read this before cause I know he's going to find someone better for him than Adam.
Author's Response:
RIGHT? Adam doesn't deserve him :(
Author's Response:
RIGHT? Adam doesn't deserve him :(
Date: May 20, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I said in on MW and now I'll say it again here, the Brian/Justin dynamic in this story is just fantastic. You've knocked some of Brian's rough edges off but that is in keeping with a Brian who's been in a relationship and been let down. It's a more compassionate iteration of Brian which doesn't diminish his original appeal.
I can't wait for the next update but no pressure. I can't really complain as I'm a complete snail as a writer.
Kearney
Author's Response:
Firstly, THANK YOU so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. And it's nice to know I am not the only slow writer out there. I don't know what my problem is LOL. But seriously, I am so happy with what you said, it's exactly what I was going for. I wanted to keep Brian who he was, but soften his edges a little - and you got that, so YAY :) I am almost done with the next chapter xxxx
Date: May 18, 2016 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi SunshineSally
I really like this story. It is very good. I like it when they build up their relationship slowly.
Please when are you going to uppdate it. I can not wait any longer. I have waited so long allready. You can not end it like that and not continue. It's teasing.
This was my very first review. So you should be proud. I hope i did not write anything stupid. If so, it was not my intention.
Cesku
Author's Response:
Hi Cesku
Thank you so much for your review - and the fact that I was your first makes me so happy. I PROMISE I won't leave you waiting too much longer. I am actually working on the next chapter now. Sorry for being such a slow poke :) But I am SO happy you are enjoying it, thank you xxxx
Author's Response:
Hi Cesku
Thank you so much for your review - and the fact that I was your first makes me so happy. I PROMISE I won't leave you waiting too much longer. I am actually working on the next chapter now. Sorry for being such a slow poke :) But I am SO happy you are enjoying it, thank you xxxx