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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2016 4:47 pm Title: 4. Taking the Young Writer Under His Wing

Interesting to note that Brian feels that it was unrealistic of one lover to keep an illness from his lover.  I'm glad that Brian is worried about how to talk to Justin about his manuscript.  He'd decided to wait to tell him his ideas for improvement.  I think he just wants to see more of Justin. 



Author's Response:

I threw in that bit about the illness as a little ironic twist.  I think you may be right as to Brian's motives where Justin is concerned.  Time will tell.  Thank you for commenting.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2016 10:44 pm Title: 4. Taking the Young Writer Under His Wing

I'm sure Brian will have no problem to teach Justin some things. ;)



Author's Response:

Yes indeed.  Brian is an expert teacher, especially with a willing student.  And then again, maybe Brian will learn a few new things himself.  Time will tell.  Thank you so much for the great comments, Susi.  Huge hugs, Grammy

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