[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2020 11:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
I re-read the fourteen chapters, so I'm all caught up... I enjoyed the few extras you put into the story... they definitely enhanced it.
And now I'm ready to have those two shipped off to Amsterdam to be in the 'service' industry.
I do have one question though...
Was it one of Justin's grandfathers that left Vic some money to help ease their lives, but that they gave it to Michael, who ended up squandering it away?
Really looking forward to the next update,
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Hey Cathy,
I'm glad that you've been enjoying the stoy. I still have some edits to do, but I've already began chapter 15. In reference to your question, yes it was Justin's grandfather Alfred Matthew Winston, who gave Vic the money. But of course, queue Michael with the violin-worthy sob story, Deb buys it, and Vic agrees to the 'loan' that hasn't gotten paid back.
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 22, 2019 1:12 am Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Ooohh... Ronald you old dog. You stuck it to Lindsay good. Heads up, and all that.
I really do hope that Foxx left Lindsay $1.00 so that she cannot contest and challenge the will. it will be interesting to see what you have planned to be revealed about Lindsay's conception/circumstances of her birth and what subsequently followed.
Did the butler purposely let Lindsay believe the Netherlands, as there is an Amsterdam, NY-too. But IF it is the Netherlands, that will take MONEY to find him, something Lindsay and Michael have none of.
INTERESTING.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 10:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Great update. Always happy to get one. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 6:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Thank you for the update Nichelle!
It's not good news when Lindsay or Michael are seeking information about Hobbs.
I can't wait to "see" Lindsay's face when she will discover her inheritance!
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 5:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
I am so glad to see you updating older stories and enjoying where you're taking this one. Looking forward to seeing how you manage to stop whatever it is that Lindsay is planning.
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 5:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Yes the best way to handle Lindsay, Michael and Nancy is to give them just enough information to distract then while keeping everything else close to the chest infinity are ready to destroy them.
Lindsay thinks she is about to inherit a fortune so whomever is dreaming her castles in the sky as Queen Brian and Melanie can get Gus away from her and her one brain cell minion.
Plus they can get everyone together to plan their next stragey of bread crumb dropping and Babylon is the perfect place to drop a few bread crumbs about Brian and Justin that will have Michael frothing and Lindsay steaming.
She wants to play with Justin's reputation to destroy him so Why not use a false rumor to hook some stupid fish even harder on the line and have them thinking they have the prize to split Brian and Justin apart Forever?
Thanks for r the Update and I am Happy more will be coming for your other stories too😃