Date: Jun 22, 2019 12:33 am Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
The plight of Michael you described at Deb's hand (and foot) is something I think I would have paid good money to actually see. To have his ass handed to him like that from Debbie, and then STILL go alone with Lindsay's plan... well, Dumber deserves everything that's coming his way.
As for Lindsay destroying her home in a fit of rage and then blaming it on Melanie... I have to hand her the Dumbest award this time. Little Mel, seven months pregnant... And her little speech of Primary care giver and Mother's Love is going to be hard to prove when she's arrested for a false report.
Oh well... how the mighty WASP has fallen. Daddy will be so disappointed in his little darlin'.
Carl... God will forgive you. After all, you maybe could have saved them THIS time, but you might not have been around the next time.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 21, 2019 11:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 12: THE START OF SOMETHING
We really need to get him to understand that his action was unacceptable and should be reversed immediately. Not really something you want to announce in a roomful of people who adore Brian Kinney.
And yet that’s what we usually do to Brian. A truer statement has never been spoken.
It sounds like old man Foxx will have fair warning... that's agood thing... he won't be able to be mislead by Lindsay.
Yeah... Brian and Justin can continue to spout... love is bullshit... get in and out with a maximum of pleasure with minimal bullshit, theory... but we know the truth. We say it firsthand as they walked out arms wrapped around each other.
I just gotta ask... GEORGE... or better known as George Goodfuck. EP 2...
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
LMAO! I was wondering if anyone would put that together. Congrats! I just love being able to take secondary characters and feature them in a totally unexpected way.
I'm working on the updates for ALL stories, so definitely be on the look out for the continuation of this one.
Ciao Bella,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 20, 2019 11:40 am Title: Chapter 11: BANKRUPT
I have to backtrack here to last chapter...
This thing with the DeCampos, it affects us too, you know?" ... “Yes, and in ways that Justin Taylor cannot imagine. I wonder how he’s going to take it, finding out that we also do their advertising. It’s not common knowledge yet.”
Are Ted and Cynthia saying Kinnetik does Prada's advertising... but not only that, Justin's advertising?
Unfortunately, we didn't get to witness, what I hope was disgust, from Cesare. Let's just hope it's there, and from this point on, Cesare will be behind Justin supporting him and his quest to keep Craig from the family.
My, my, my... Nancy's extramarital affair just caught up to her, big time! And Lindsay just had her image shattered... how fitting in the same coffee shop so that everyone got to bear witness to it. Regarding Marcus Foxx - he sounds a dying, old wealthy man. 'estate'... Lord I hope he has his will in place so Lindsay isn't inheriting a lot of money! And Ron's pre-nup... I hope it contains that Nancy gets nothing in a divorce if cheating was involved.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 20, 2019 7:37 am Title: Chapter 10: DAMAGE CONTROL
I'm going to start this with - thank heavens Ben was one of the patrons dining and overheard Lindsay and Michael, and I agree wholeheartedly that Deb and Vic be given full disclosure. They will need to protect themselves from the fallout of Lindsay and Michael's schemes, and allow Michael to sink or swim on his own.
THAT said.... I've reread the conversation regarding Hobbs three times. I THINK I have it right now, but please let me know. I read all the comments to this chapter, and other than a 'confused' none of the others made comments regarding it. SO...
Dimitry is holding Chris, Chris has to do anything Dimitry says, Chris is Dimitry's little sex slave... I think everybody got all that. But... are his parents aware of it? Dimitry has the power to dismantle Hobbs Construction, so that's why Chris stays and doesn't say anything. But if Chris is in this enforced servitude, what good is his inheritance anyway?
Moving on to Charles Lucky... I gather he has a male escort service in Pittsburgh, called Lucky's, and more than likey, the one Brian uses. Justin is Charles' partner in the escort service, and Dimitry is who they get their escorts from.
Questions... are these boys employed willingly, or are all their situations like Chris Hobbs?
And just who is Charles Lucky to Justin? How would Justin know him, or of him, that they could start an escort service when Justin was only seventeen?
Side Note... Was Ted out getting lunch for everybody when he got the call from Ben? Or does he order Brian's lunch, sometimes?
Good Plot regarding Hobbs' demise. I gotta wonder what they can come up with for Craig.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 20, 2019 12:55 am Title: Chapter 9: SOUR GRAPES
Oh Lindsay... Your father told you to stay out of it... you should have heeded his warning. You just announced to a cafe of diners your plans to interfere in the Taylor's lives again. And if that little excursion into the Taylor's office was Michael's suggestion... let's just say I thought you were smarter than to listen to someone like Michael. She's going to make Ron so mad, that the deal with Harold Archer will even be off the table. And after Mel and Brian learn of her pretending to be Mel to get info about Justin gets back to them... as it should... she will not have a pot to piss in, and no child to use as blackmail/leverage.
What do you bet John Robertson will be out of a job with the Sun Times when this news feed hits his editor? Either that, or the article he writes disregarding Brian's warning? He's the perfect candidate to sit along side Craig and Arnold waiting for an interview at the Big Q.
I LOVED Brian's speech. He said so much without actually saying it. I have a feeling "Google" will be blowing up computers as they all scramble to learn to horror that is Craig Taylor.
I'm really liking this story.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 10:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Great update. Always happy to get one. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 6:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Thank you for the update Nichelle!
It's not good news when Lindsay or Michael are seeking information about Hobbs.
I can't wait to "see" Lindsay's face when she will discover her inheritance!
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 5:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
I am so glad to see you updating older stories and enjoying where you're taking this one. Looking forward to seeing how you manage to stop whatever it is that Lindsay is planning.
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 5:42 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: WHO’S FOOLING WHO?
Yes the best way to handle Lindsay, Michael and Nancy is to give them just enough information to distract then while keeping everything else close to the chest infinity are ready to destroy them.
Lindsay thinks she is about to inherit a fortune so whomever is dreaming her castles in the sky as Queen Brian and Melanie can get Gus away from her and her one brain cell minion.
Plus they can get everyone together to plan their next stragey of bread crumb dropping and Babylon is the perfect place to drop a few bread crumbs about Brian and Justin that will have Michael frothing and Lindsay steaming.
She wants to play with Justin's reputation to destroy him so Why not use a false rumor to hook some stupid fish even harder on the line and have them thinking they have the prize to split Brian and Justin apart Forever?
Thanks for r the Update and I am Happy more will be coming for your other stories too😃
Date: Jun 16, 2019 8:14 am Title: Chapter 8: ROTTEN APPLES
OH HELL NO!!! Lindsay... you jumped the gun and now you must deal with the fallout. IF she would have waited for Daddy to get back to her...
There is no way Ron would have advised her to go within a thousand miles of the Taylor's. Lindsay's mother was a HOBBS???? After that fiasco with Chris, I would suspect the Peterson's are almost scared of the Taylor's.And now, Roan and Nancy might have to deal with their "fall from grace" due to Lindsay.
She will now really have the wrath of Brian (and probably her family) ... but serves her right to find out she is NOT the original Lindsay Peterson! You naughty woman, Nichelle!
Is this where I tell you - I LOVE YOU?!?!
HUGS ~Cathy
(on a side note - loved your airplane spiel... I just wrote one this afternoon!)
Date: Jun 16, 2019 7:31 am Title: Chapter 7: COLLISIONS AND COLLUSIONS
Hmm, now I'm a little confused. I didn't remember too much about the story outside chapter 1. Now as I read the end of this chapter. the part of Craig being a drug addict, I remember.
But, I don't remember Lindsay calling her father...
“See Michael. It’s all about who you know. I have to wonder how accommodating Ron will be when he finds out just WHO Justin Taylor is. Lindsay should pay heed to the old adage:
Don't count your chickens before they hatch. because as soon as you THINK everything is going your way, you might find out daddy doesn't want to play hardball with someone who could ruin him professionally and financially.
How long before Mel amd Brian get Lindsay out of the house? And how long is Michael going to be able to pay $500 rent?
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 16, 2019 6:41 am Title: Chapter 6: MAKING MOVES
USURPER?!?
Lindsay, Lindsay, Lindsay... you have no idea WHO you are calling an Usurper. Maybe if she's lucky enough to find Michael, he can tell her 'this Usurper' is named Justin Taylor, CEO of Taylor Industries and Winston Fabric and Merchandise Incorporated... and she doesn't stand a chance in hell of besting him!!! And if she gets too volatile... have her go to the police station with him while he turns her answering machine recording over.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 16, 2019 6:06 am Title: Chapter 5: TRADING UP
I remember starting this atone time, but I think I only got a chapter in.
Hobbs and Craig has taken on a whole new meaning of the word "EVIL". And Arnold can jsut go suffer right along with Craig now. I can't understand if Craig is NOT associated with Taylor Industries and Winston Fabric and Merchandise Incorporated, how he could call and cancel a contract? I would think Justin would let these companies know Craig has no say in his businesses. Can't wait to see Craig's repercussions for doing that.
Well, you've Lindsay to a new level. Issuing threats?! And Michael is just a whiny asshole like normally. But I think it was VERY unfair for Debbie to call Brian and ask him for ANYTHING regarding Michael. But hey, the loft locks are changed, and they can't get into Kinnetik, and have n current phone numbers. YAY!!!!!!!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Mar 25, 2019 2:11 am Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
was reading it agai, love it
Please update
[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2019 9:58 am Title: Chapter 1- DANGEROUS LIASIONS
This is so damn good. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Date: Mar 11, 2019 8:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
I have just read all the chapters in one go absolutely awesome story! I love the twist of a very strong self assured Justin with a little bit of Brian scrambling to keep up. Loving Brian’s drooling over the power he sees in his lover mixed with Prada lol.
of course any story that has Michael whingepot and Lindsay ice queen out manipulated has me at go! I look forward to more intriguing chapters thank you
Date: Mar 11, 2019 8:40 am Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
brilliant story
Date: Mar 10, 2019 5:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
Cliffhanger!!!! Oh, just want to also give Mikey and good swift kick and even worse to Linds. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2019 4:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
Let Them Reap What They Have Sown!!
Even if Carl had prevented them fro m filing that false report it still wouldn't have stopped them from trying to hurt Brian and Melanie, they want to play stupid games in an Adult World then they can reap the consequences like real adults do.
BrianBrian, Justin, Melanie and their True Family will do everything they can to protect Gus from the childish machinations of Princess Greedy and and her sidekick Prince Dumbass.
Now that they have be forewarned, they can be forearmed to fight back.
Thanks for the Update!
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2019 12:57 pm Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
It's so good to see more on this story. I enjoy watching Michael and Lindsay talking themselves into more trouble. Of course I can't help but want more.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2019 5:18 am Title: CHAPTER 13: ATTENTION-SEEKING BEHAVIORS 101
Great chapter! Thank you for the update! I loved how Carl recognized the duo: so accurate.
Date: Jan 13, 2019 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1- DANGEROUS LIASIONS
A really fun read. I never used to enjoy AU's but I like seeing the way that their paths are ultimately the same. x
Date: Dec 08, 2018 11:40 pm Title: CHAPTER 12: THE START OF SOMETHING
Love it, cannot wait for an update
Date: Oct 07, 2018 3:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 12: THE START OF SOMETHING
Great update . Glad you are continuing some of the older stories. Love all of them so I am happy when any update comes to us. Thank you. Hope you are feeling good.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2018 1:51 pm Title: CHAPTER 12: THE START OF SOMETHING
This was so much fun, expecially Ted rendition of Mikey.