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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2020 12:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

love it.  thanks for update, hope the next one will be soon.  stay safe

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2020 12:27 am Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

I simply love this. Am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2020 5:29 am Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

Genius idea to delegate Joan's healthcare decisions to Mel and Justin. I can't wait to see how she will wake up when she learns that her plan backfired.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 3:37 pm Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

I've sat here for a little bit after reading this trying to absorb everything. And unless I'm missing something, just how does it benefit Virginia, Nancy, and Joan by making sure Brian married Lindsay? UNLESS Lindsay was involved with the plot, and agreed to 'pay them off' for making her dreams come true. Because, just the fact that Brian and, therefore Lindsay, would have been rich beyond means, I doubt selfish Lindsay would have shared the wealth. Which brings another question to mind, if Lindsay IS aware of the inheritance, does she want Brian because of the inherited wealth, or the fact she thinks she loves him and he belongs to her?

Now, on the flip side, I think copies of those documents should be made easily accessible to all those little flooosies. Let's see what attorney they use, and see how much change is made, and the whole lot of them will be going bye-bye for a VERY long time.

And ah, poor widdle Joanie... I presume she thought by making Brian her power-of-attorney, was not because he'd know when to pull the plug, but because he would be responsible for her well-being. He'd have to take care of her. And with all his wealth, she would be taken care of in a style she had been denied her entire life, besides him having to deal with her. Ah dear, Karma's a bitch, because not only will she never see Brian, I hope he hauls her ass in some less-than-adequate ward facility where care and treatment befits how she cared and treated him his whole life.

I look forward to your very descriptive writing regarding Joan's horror when she realizes that it's Justin and Melanie she will be dealing with, and not Brian, himself.

Thanks for the update!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2020 7:44 am Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

With all this new family ready to fight for them Brian Justin and Mélanie will blow everyone up, starting with Joan.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 10:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

Can't wait to see how Melanie and Justin deal with Joanie.  That was a lot of people to show up at the hospital.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 4:29 pm Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

Melanie and Justin will leave Joan in so many knots and without a way to untangle herself that she will be left wondering just how drunk she is and how long she has been drinking.

So the will allows Brian freedom to live his life his way without having to bend over for anyone but Justin, their leverage is totally gone along with the money they were all hoping to have unlimited access to.

Brian is quite a wealthy man which will help in his fight against Joan for custody of his nephews and against Lindsay, Deb, Michael, Virginia and anyone else he has a lot of power in his hands now.

I never understood how Deb always saw Joan loving Brian even though he was abused by her too, giving birth to Brian doesn't mean her mistreatment of him is forgiven, she let her resentment grow to hate there is no love loss between her and Brian and there never will be.

Deb always felt next she raised Michael on her own that she has insight into every mother's heart but she really couldn't see into her own or else she would've realized how wake she was making Michael and herself by excusing his faults and her own.

Time for Deb to know what actual parenting really looks like from Brian, Justin, Melanie and Jennifer who looked past the stigma to see that Justin was the same son she loved and helped to grow into an adult she can respect and cherish more.

My Goodness Brian and Justin have such strong people around them to help them prepare for the battle ahead.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 12:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

I am so glad Brian has real family now helping him fight his old and new demons 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 6:32 am Title: CHAPTER 34: LEGACY: ONE REMADE

Love this so much. Great writing.

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