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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Love how Jennifer set Lindsay straight, not that she listened.  Wonder what happens to Michael once everyone he's talked dirt about find out.  Hopefully Ben will see that Cynthia is right about Michael.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Let's hope that pottery wheel will get us a "Ghost scene" with Brian as Patrick and Justin as Demi. That was super hot (not that they can't be hot by themselves; they sure know how to make the heat peaks high).

Brian and Justin's dynamic is really shaping up: the looks, the touches, ...

Cynthia and Ben lunch was very informative for Ben; maybe, he will be more attentive to Michael behaviour next time, and ask some more questions.

David and Deb meeting was also very informative: new she has no reason to protect her cruel and blind, selfish, idiotic and irresponsible son.

So, George and Justin are related and from very high rank in the WASP world; that might lead to some interesting plots.

Jennifer and Lindsey: what a delight to have a WASP battle without a drop of blood; Jennifer knows just where to poke to make it very hurtful; take that Lindsey and try to think for once.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2016 11:54 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Finally caught up, and I can’t wait for more. Lindsay better take several seats before Jennifer or even Mel for that matter, puts her in one. I loved how she tried to explain not having Gus with her while trying to tell Jen she was a neglectful mother. She wasn't providing a very good argument.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2016 6:48 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Love the idea of George Schickle being Justin's uncle! So many ideas there. Lol. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Loved it!

Justin, Brian & Miguel...brilliant!

Cynthia & Ben cousins...nice!

David giving Deb a clue...perfect!

Emmett & George meeting like this...sweet!

Jennifer out wasping Lindz...epic!

Can't wait for what's to come my friend! 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

"Chris the cunt, Dixon the dick and Perkins the pussy"...LMFAO!!!!!!!  OMG! that was brilliant!!

Mel is seeing first hand the positive influence that Brian and Justin have on each other. Good. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen with her next victim...I mean interview. 

George as Justin's uncle huh?? Interesting. this could make for some interesting interactions in teh future. I mean, what a difference in personalitites! between George and Craig i mean. Dayum! 

what a brilliant idea for teh potter's wheel! Good thinking. Hopefully this works and that Justin doesn't put too much pressure on himself. Will we witness a "Ghost" moment between B&J in teh future?? LOL.

Lindsey's confrontation with Jenn came out as would be expected. she as definitely out wasped. Not sure what she has up her sleeve, but we all know it can't be good. Definitely don't trust her, and sadly, I'm not sure i f justin has teh strength to stand up to her especially when it comes to beliving Brian's emotional commitment to him. nope....don't trust her at all. I'm sure however, that you have an idea of her getting her cumuppence at some point and I for 1 will watch with eye's lit up with approval!! LOL

Your update made my night. I always love getting one for one of your stories.

thaks for this!! and of course...look forward to more. for whichever fic you do next. ;)



Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 10- THE RETURN

Great update!

Waiting to see what Brian does when he finds out what Michael did in Portland and who he talked to from the Pitts.




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