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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2018 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

Re-read the story and I must say Molly is so her Mother's daughter and Justin's sister, that little genius came up with the prefect payback for Daddy Dearest.

I do believe Craig is going to wish he had went to county cause Cousin Fred is going to make prison seem like a pleasure cruise.

Gardner may think he is aligning himself with a smart classy Wasp, but he is actually getting a Self-Absorbed Low Rate, Low Class Drama Princess with high and very expensive standards, and as much talent artistic wise of a dung beetle on crack and cocaine.

Congrats to Lynnette for getting 'Knocked Up' and actually understanding what it is to be a Wasp. ( I do wonder if she actually pushed Lindsay or did she change the story to fit her narrative?)

Michael should really just carry around a tape recorder so that he doesn't have to open his mouth cause he just enjoys repeating himself too bad everyone else is tired of listening.

I don't think John and Peter Will be too much of a problem for everyone, and Daphne Will Destroy Anyone Who Tries lol

 

 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

Wow. Now that is a chapter. Super

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

The joke about Justin's age is very funny: yes, Brian will have to deal with 2 teens, a midget, a baby, Justin's best friend and a lesbian who hated his guts not so long ago! What a change in his life!

Jennifer is having real fun with what is happening to Craig, Nancy and Lindsay. The project Justin told her is going to keep her busy.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 12:56 am Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

This was perfection! I would have loved to see this on the screen! 



Author's Response:

Hey Shine!

Thanks so much. This is exactly how I would have loved to see things go too, which is why I'm enjoying writing this so much. YES, I loved and still love the show, but there were some storylines that were simply unfinished. So although some of the storylines started as they did on the show, this is my take on what could have happened had the writers had the time and inclination. I'm so happy that you and others are enjoying my vision thus far and there is so much more to come. Stay Tuned!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 12:47 am Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

Perfect. I can't wait to see how this is going to play out. I like how you are giving a part in this journey. 

 

~ Teresa ~



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Teresa! This is the one story I'm writing that makes me want to yell at myself 'DAMMIT THINK and TYPE FASTER!' LOL! 

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

Holy Crap!! When Justin goes Wasp he does it with style and finesse.

Taking the bathhouse and turning it into offices for Kinnectik and Mel is Smart, but building a Mansion big enough for all of them to share and still have their own space and privacy is Genius!!!

It will piss off the haters who don't want to see them succeeding and living Fabolous.

Plus it will be a place they can all be proud of to share and a proper home for all of them to make their own memories free of the selfish, whiny, inconsiderate A-Holes.

With Jennifer's team and Justin's artistic flair it will be the premier home that everyone with or without money will drool over and envy for years to come.

Putting Cynthia on alert is good if she hasn't cleared out Brian's files yet, than Vance dealing with his soon to be Ex and Lindsay should keep him busy?

Lindsay having to deal with Nancy and Michael should keep her busy

I don't think John and Peter will be too hard to save but I do wonder what information they heard which can be useful to their Uncles and Aunt Mel? ;)

Thank You for such a Fantastic Update :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Blue!

YES! Justin is learning his WASP lessons well and will continue to do so! I agree with you that his ideas are GENIUS and yet they are just so innocently delivered. After all, he isn't intentionally setting out to harm anyone, but if someone's feelings should get hurt, well that's all on them, isn't it? LOL! The more he heals, the better he is going to get. I think Mel's assessment of him is correct. Justin is definitely making a COMEBACK! 

Cynthia, Marcia and Murph will definitely have some plans in the works. Add Constance and Jennifer to the mix and...well just watch for fireworks and explosions.

It looks like Lindsay is finally going to get what she's always wanted...all of her mother's attention. Should be very interesting to see how she handles having Nancy all to herself. 

I find myself falling in love with this version of John and Peter. Sure they have some issues to deal with, but I'm really going to love watching them grow alongside their uncle. The fact that Mel, Justin and Daphne will be there is going to help the three of them in ways none of them even realize yet. But I'm really looking forward to them meeting Emmett, LOL!

So happy you are still enjoying this!

Happy Reading and HUGS!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2018 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 20: ...REMEMBER WHO OWNS THE COPYRIGHT

Looks like Justin with the help of his mother and Molly have things in hand.  With Daphne on board to help with the nephews things should work out.



Author's Response:

Hey Phyllis!

Those Alwin-Taylors are some dangerous folks when crossed as Rudyard Craig Taylor is about to find out. I couldn't stop laughing during the interaction of Jenn and the littlest hellraiser. Jennifer will definitely have her hands full in the future with that Smart Little Whelp

Having Daphne in Florida is going to be great for everyone. I almost can't wait to write this particular storyline all out, but there is still so much that will occur in Pittsburgh, too. All I can say is there will never be a dull moment!

So glad you're continuing to enjoy this!

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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